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POTD poem: Feb 9th 2024

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Up on the sliding hill in the atmospheric river rain, Captivating eyes of beauty, smile to me again. Eyes full of rainy deluge, drenching in cold, over heart’s fire, Like greening of balding hills, rekindle my waning desire. Like the little birds over tall trees, swinging in wind, take flight, Even though the rain falls like avalanche with full might. Pre spring sprouting daffodils and tulips get run over by windy rain, Yet they rise again and again, like my thoughts of seeing you again. Who would not love you, seeing you move, Warm-eyed and beautiful through the green alpine grove. Let the rain drench you, flow thru your hair, My love will rise like phoenix, and embrace you there. Laugh if my cheek is misty and drips, Wetness is tender, laugh on my lips. The happy sweet laughter of love with pain, Rekindled love, the strong love, burning in the rain.

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Date: 2/11/2024 8:39:00 PM
Truly beautiful poem Jay.Congrats on the POTD Best wishes from Wen
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Date: 2/10/2024 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 2/9/2024 8:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, a lovely write...Maria
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Date: 2/9/2024 7:30:00 PM
I completely agree, the falling rain seems to create such a beautiful mood. Emotions within are soft, sensual and romantic. Congratulations Jay, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy
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Date: 2/9/2024 4:56:00 PM
Hey Jay, Congratulations on your POTD! Passion burns with imagery of nature's beautiful things. Romantic sets of couplets! Enjoy your day!
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Date: 2/9/2024 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on POTYD, Very nicely penned
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Date: 2/9/2024 1:35:00 PM
Congratulations on receiving POTD. This was a swirling dance of romance through poetic words. I enjoyed reading.
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Date: 2/9/2024 11:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your "Rekindled Love" write again. Have a fun day writing away with your win....................
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Date: 2/9/2024 11:21:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d. ... hope you have enjoyed many greetings today ... woow - Have a lovely weekend, Jay :) - hugs
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Date: 2/9/2024 7:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Jay! The imagery in your poem was engaging and the passionate love was pleasing to read about. Excellent poetry, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Date: 2/9/2024 6:55:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTD, Jay. Much enjoyed the sweet voice of your lovesome poem.
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Date: 2/9/2024 6:28:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 2/9/2024 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations for POTD. Very nice :)
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Date: 2/9/2024 4:39:00 AM
Dear Jay, What a fantastic and emotive poem you have penned sir, just in time for Valentines Day too. I loved the way you contrasted seasonal changes with the ups and downs of this love connection. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. I truly enjoyed it.
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Date: 2/9/2024 4:22:00 AM
Dear Jay, Congrats on POTD! You portray a stunning picture of love weathering a storm. The sliding hill, captivating eyes, and deluge of rain set the scene for a powerful emotional journey. I loved the imagery of rekindling desire and the comparison of rising thoughts to spring flowers pushing through rain. The closing lines about embracing through the rain, with laughter echoing love's strength, brought a beautiful warmth. Love can endure even the harshest downpours. Beautiful! - Daniel
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Date: 2/9/2024 3:38:00 AM
Jay, a beautiful romantic poem, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/9/2024 3:18:00 AM
Wonderful romantic poetry Jay, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day. Beryl
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Date: 2/9/2024 3:09:00 AM
Oh wow!what a beautiful love poem, Jay! “Let the rain drench you, flow thru your hair, My love will rise like phoenix, and embrace you there.” ~ warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 2/9/2024 3:00:00 AM
Many congratulations with POTD Jay with this very beautiful, romantic poem. It’s so gorgeously written with wonderful poetic lines full of stunning imagery. I cannot single out any one particular line as they are all stunning. Loved it! Enjoy your celebratory day. Blessings to you.
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Date: 2/9/2024 2:28:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation. Such a romantic love story.
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Date: 2/9/2024 12:36:00 AM
Very romantic lines Jay, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 2/9/2024 12:36:00 AM
Wonderfully written and romantic! Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 2/8/2024 8:54:00 PM
Beautiful Love story Jay. Brightened my day. You will touch a lot of hearts with the wonderful way you wrote this. Best wishes from Wen
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Date: 2/8/2024 7:26:00 PM
What a lovely poem of love and romance! I cannot single out any one couplet I love more than the others. All are equally captivating. Still, I feel this is the best "Eyes full of rainy deluge, drenching in cold, over heart’s fire, Like greening of balding hills, rekindle my waning desire......" Straight into my FAVE
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Date: 2/8/2024 10:15:00 AM
- Spring is the time for romance ... so true ... the strong love, burning even in the rain ... a beautiful poem, Jay :) - Enjoy reading :) - hugs
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