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Realisable and Permissable Dreams

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What is this resounding voice I hear Don't inconvenience me, is that clear? Don't ask for things out of reach Don't walk too late along that beach The sun will set, you'll be in the dark I'm disappointed in you from the start I knew the risks as I walked on Towards a just out of view setting sun Just leave and get safely in the car You should not have walked that far I'll find a safer beach for your required view I'll let you know when I've found it for you The words of wisdom might be right I was walking onwards in diminishing light On the drive away the light did disappear I'm probably as reckless as I appear There was a day a few days on We rushed out to catch a setting sun Walked further and with pace (But with tide info, sunset times, maps all in place) I crossed the causeway, to deserted land Watched sea break on rocks, with feet in the sand Marched to the sight and back again Shown all I want I can attain I do silly things, don't consider the time Abide by inconsistent paradigm I don't know why I don't just plan Perhaps I will see if I can Pass you a list of dreams I hold You'll grant them to me seven fold If I just settle and toe the line I'll be looked after, I'll be just fine

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 7/29/2023 10:16:00 PM

Potd and top 100! well deserved :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 7/29/2023 11:55:00 PM

Thank you H! :D

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/3/2023 9:46:00 AM

I knew the risks as I walked on Towards a just out of view setting sun…we all want to…sad we have to be so careful! Congratulations on POTD, D.D.!

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/2/2023 10:09:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Dilly Dally! Profound and sweetened in your unique style of poetry. The voice of reason vs spontaneity, the rebel in ya. The last stanza sums up the silly Dilly. :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/2/2023 10:28:00 AM

Haha thanks x

Valsa George

Date: 6/2/2023 4:39:00 AM

We cannot always toe the line. Sometimes we have to do things on an impulse. Sometimes, we deliberately do things according to our conviction. One cannot call it recklessness ! As ever, a profound poem dear DD. Congratulations on your POTD.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/2/2023 7:55:00 AM

Thank you Valsa :) (I took the opportunity to check my tow/toe the line. Hadn't realised I'd used wrong word, corrected, thank you x)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/2/2023 3:43:00 AM

DD, a wonderfully penned poem, a belated congratulations on POTD!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/2/2023 4:03:00 AM

Many thanks Tanya :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/1/2023 6:17:00 PM

When thoughts tangle around each other, it's best to embrace the calm, like a walk along the beach. This is beautiful, tender and uplifting, all at the same time. Congratulations Dilly, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Brandy, your comment is appreciated

Constance La France

Date: 6/1/2023 11:30:00 AM

Dilly, wonderful writing and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor !

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 12:54:00 PM

Many thanks Constance, thank you for your supportive words

John Oldham

Date: 6/1/2023 10:27:00 AM

Congrats on potd honors, DD! Love the ongoing internal dialogues you have. As the Moody Blues sing it’s good to “understand the voice within/and feel the change already begin”. Be firm with it! Stay well, John

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thanks John! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 6/1/2023 10:00:00 AM

Quite the adventurer spirit you have, Dilly Dally. Thanks for sharing your thoughts along your walk. Congratulations on your POTD honor. Have a great weekend! Bill

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 10:05:00 AM

Many thanks Bill, I appreciate your kind words

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/1/2023 7:22:00 AM

Congrats in your brilliant POTD my friend. So much in this excellent poem! Certainly a true jewel and a gem for me as a fav too.. God bless..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 8:54:00 AM

Thank you Robert, glad you liked it. Thank you for your kind words

Lin Lane

Date: 6/1/2023 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on having your write chosen as POTD, Dilly. Sounds of the surf are humbling.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Lin.

Gary Radice

Date: 6/1/2023 5:57:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Good to read you in rhyme and great to see you are now a premium member too..looking forward to the images to accompany your ekphrases :) As for walking along beaches at night..I love how the surf always sounds louder. Cheers - Gary

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 6:00:00 AM

Thanks Gary, if I ever figure out how to add pictures that is! Think I'll need to log on rather than just use my phone :)

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 6/1/2023 5:44:00 AM

congratulations on the poem of the day. I like the push and pull of this internal voice in this write. "Pass you a list of dreams I hold" line, The poem felt very whimsical to me.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 5:45:00 AM

Many thanks Nancy, I appreciate you having a read and your kind words :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2023 4:49:00 AM

Nothing beats a stroll on the beach and listening to the sound of the ocean, you're right though we can easily lose track of time. Congratulations to you on the honour of POTD Tom

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 4:59:00 AM

Thanks Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/1/2023 4:32:00 AM

Hello Dilly Dally, This is a beautiful poem. I enjoyed to read. Congratulations on your POTD. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/1/2023 11:59:00 AM

You are welcome Dilly Dally. Enjoy your day my friend./Darlene\

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 4:58:00 AM

Many thanks Darlene, your comment is appreciated

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2023 2:27:00 AM

- I have found mine ... and enjoy it every day ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d., D.D. :) - A pleasure to read :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 2:48:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise x

David Kavanagh

Date: 6/1/2023 2:22:00 AM

Yes that feeling walking alone on the beach is somehow comfortable and anxiety free, beautifully expressed here in a matter of fact way, yet resoundingly deep and soul searching, congratulations Dilly on a most deserving POTD, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 2:24:00 AM

Aww thanks David, much appreciated :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/1/2023 1:47:00 AM

A wonderful write, DD! Do t be foolhardy but yet let go of fear, fortune favours the bold! Warmest congratulations on POTD, enjoyed :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 6/1/2023 1:57:00 AM

Thank you

Paul Willason

Date: 5/31/2023 5:42:00 PM

Always risks associated with stepping out from one's shadow and the shadow cast by others but the reward it that things can be bathed in a new light. This poem seems to explore that tension...very well done....I liked the interplay.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 5/31/2023 8:26:00 PM

Thank you Paul, I appreciate your words of support