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Raindrops

The days when I played in them Not listening to any words from mom. Cherishing each drop falling on me Feeling as though a sparrow is free Sloshing, sploshing, and splashing Amidst lightning flashing Puzzling over the bubbles Formed over the puddles The tentative rainbows on them Shining like the Kohinoor gem Counting them as though stars Or scattered pearls of Mars Trying to collect them gladly Seeing them break, sadly Going on, thus, till the drops Each last one, finally stops. I nostalgically think of those days. My heart beams with romantic rays. Will they come back anymore? This question quakes my heart's core...

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Date: 7/16/2024 1:22:00 PM
Congrats, Christuraj! Don’t you just love perspective. As a kid you enjoyed even against mom’s advice. As an adult you articulate a beautiful image. Loved it all and this at the center: Shining like the Kohinoor gem!
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Date: 7/16/2024 9:20:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 7/16/2024 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops" write. Can you find the answer to your question/ending??? If yes, then a new write.... Have a wonderful day with your win.
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Date: 7/16/2024 9:19:00 PM
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Date: 7/16/2024 2:42:00 AM
Well done! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/16/2024 5:25:00 AM
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Date: 7/15/2024 5:55:00 AM
Excellent poem ! Congratulations :)
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Date: 7/15/2024 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 7/15/2024 4:38:00 AM
Your poem has brought so many nostalgic memories in me. This has been been our experience while we were young. Now the climate has changed drastically. When it rains, it rains cats and dogs. Each rain has turned into a cloud burst and each rain drop hits us like shards of glass. Congratulations Chris on your top win.
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Date: 7/15/2024 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 7/15/2024 1:20:00 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind reflections on my Raindrops 2 entry. In turn I’d like to reciprocate by complementing you on your very innovative, evocative and poignant contest submission. Congratulations is definitely in order. Howard
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Date: 7/15/2024 10:13:00 PM
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Date: 7/14/2024 11:28:00 PM
I really enjoyed the nostalgia theme, as I feel the same way. Fun poem. You forgot to mention salting snails to make bubbles over snails. Carry on! Bryan
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Date: 7/14/2024 11:52:00 PM
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Date: 7/14/2024 8:59:00 PM
so beautiful, congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:07:00 PM
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:14:00 AM
Nice poem. Playing in rain used to be fun. Nostalgic. Congrats on win.
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:07:00 PM
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Date: 7/14/2024 9:29:00 AM
Yess, I can recall days like this when the rain was fascinating and fun not an annoyance or reason to cancel outdoor plans. Loved this and the memories it brings to mind! Xo
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Date: 7/14/2024 10:07:00 PM
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Date: 6/29/2024 12:24:00 AM
Really enjoyed this poem it was engaging and refreshing!
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Date: 6/29/2024 1:37:00 AM
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