Raindrops

The days when I played in them
Not listening to any words from mom.
Cherishing each drop falling on me
Feeling as though a sparrow is free
Sloshing, sploshing, and splashing
Amidst lightning flashing
Puzzling over the bubbles
Formed over the puddles
The tentative rainbows on them
Shining like the Kohinoor gem
Counting them as though stars
Or scattered pearls of Mars
Trying to collect them gladly
Seeing them break, sadly
Going on, thus, till the drops
Each last one, finally stops.
I nostalgically think of those days.
My heart beams with romantic rays.
Will they come back anymore?
This question quakes my heart's core...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 1:22 PM
Congrats, Christuraj! Don’t you just love perspective. As a kid you enjoyed even against mom’s advice. As an adult you articulate a beautiful image. Loved it all and this at the center: Shining like the Kohinoor gem!
Alex Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:20 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Raindrops" write. Can you find the answer to your question/ending??? If yes, then a new write.... Have a wonderful day with your win.
Alex Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 9:19 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Venkata Ramana Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 2:42 AM
Well done! Congratulations!
Alex Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 5:25 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Sands Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Excellent poem ! Congratulations :)
Alex Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
George Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:38 AM
Your poem has brought so many nostalgic memories in me. This has been been our experience while we were young. Now the climate has changed drastically. When it rains, it rains cats and dogs. Each rain has turned into a cloud burst and each rain drop hits us like shards of glass. Congratulations Chris on your top win.
Alex Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Kerr Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Thank you so very much for your kind reflections on my Raindrops 2 entry. In turn I’d like to reciprocate by complementing you on your very innovative, evocative and poignant contest submission. Congratulations is definitely in order. Howard
Alex Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 10:13 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Norton Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 11:28 PM
I really enjoyed the nostalgia theme, as I feel the same way. Fun poem. You forgot to mention salting snails to make bubbles over snails. Carry on! Bryan
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 11:52 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
mysore Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 8:59 PM
so beautiful, congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:07 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Narain Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:14 AM
Nice poem. Playing in rain used to be fun. Nostalgic. Congrats on win.
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:07 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Woods Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 9:29 AM
Yess, I can recall days like this when the rain was fascinating and fun not an annoyance or reason to cancel outdoor plans. Loved this and the memories it brings to mind! Xo
Alex Avatar
July 14, 2024 at 10:07 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Jones Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 12:24 AM
Really enjoyed this poem it was engaging and refreshing!
Alex Avatar
June 29, 2024 at 1:37 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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