Painted Lady

I painted a painting
so that you could see
The person I wished
that you could be

Your eyes were pure blue
Just like they are
But the look was near
Instead of far

In my painting
You had not a care
You were with me
in a moment rare

Flowing blonde hair
and a lovely smile
meant just for me
at least for that while

Time can be cruel
sometimes so unfair
Paint portrays perfect 
that wasn’t there

This painting a remnant
from so long ago
of the lady I loved
but would never know

In my painting
enjoying our play
Painting myself in
on a perfect day

We were holding hands 
walking on a beach
Things picture perfect
just beyond my reach

It was silly pretend
a longing in me
That person I wished
that you could be

On a museum wall
for others to view
“Wouldn’t it be great
to be like those two?”



A fictional account.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ifeanyichukwu Avatar
June 24, 2019 at 2:01 PM
The timing of love tells no lies, there is no distance too long for love and passions of love is endless, Good work Richard.
Raven Avatar
July 4, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Hi Richard, another wonderful flowing piece from your pen. es so well with words. As always i lose myself within the words. What visions the poetic mind can bring to the fore. I know not if you can paint Richard but i can tell you that you are a true artist when it comes to poetic vision. Another excellent write my friend. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Wolf Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 10:57 PM
Gorgeous write! Better than any painting. Bravo! A FAVE for me. Thank you for sharing it, Richard. Best always, gw
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 4:35 PM
I feel the complexities of life in this piece so well written Richard. If only we had the power to change the ones we love. That is why I am no longer married to my first husband. But he did me a favor and now I have found my match that I have been married to for going on 36 years. : )
Chircop Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Very entertaining and beautiful sweet poem..Rick :)
Nance Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 6:31 PM
The flow is bouncing and upbeat,but I feel the sadness, longing, like the painting is painting that piece that he is missing. and as viewers of art we never really know that heart, it shows me that perspectives are deceiving
Lamoureux Avatar
June 17, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Thanks Casarah.:0)
Sietesantos Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 10:13 AM
What an amazingly beautiful piece you have painted, Richard! I love where your muse took you with this enchanting write! Have a great weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Lamoureux Avatar
June 15, 2018 at 12:35 PM
Thanks, you as well Pandita.
Vaso Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Very beautiful verse, the lines just flow so well. My kind of poetry.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thanks Arthur.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:02 AM
That's the essence and power of art! That's the beauty of imagination and creativity! We create a world of our own.. we envision thoughts beyond perception and we portray them in amazing words.. The realm of poetry enables you to pen a world of perfection, to fashion a love beyond expression, to paint a woman above words and perception! I immensely enjoyed your portray! A FAV. Thank you for sharing. Stay safe Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Hi Besma, through poetry we have the privilege to live many experience. As always thanks for such a thoughtful response.
Manassian Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Blue eyes are beautiful...in intriguing trip into fantasy
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Thanks Eileen. Hugs Rick.
Coon Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 5:56 PM
I love this
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Thanks Felisha.
Sands Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 3:44 PM
Nicely written Richard. I enjoyed this :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Thanks Heidi.
Wanter Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:24 PM
Fine writing as usual, Richard. Too bad we can't change those we might love with a bit of paint.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:04 AM
In actual fact I wouldn’t want to. Thanks for the visit and comment.
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 12:11 PM
maybe that's why it's art, a personal fictional account of, from the artists mind, what should be or could be. Well done Richard...
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Charlie.
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Your wonderful words have now been joined for eternity.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Thanks Scott.
Turner Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 10:11 AM
A find this to be a rather sad write, Richard. We must learn to accept people as they are. If anything should change, perhaps it should be our way of thinking. Complex write! Simply written but very deep.
Lane Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Your second verse was so emotional. Painful is the need to see something relating to love in one's eyes when it's only a faraway look we discern. A fine post, Rick.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Lin :0)
Michael Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:30 AM
fictional but real...I believe a lot of people experience that dream...Nice one...All the best Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks Arturo.
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