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"The selective instinct of the artist tells him when his language should be homely, and when it should be more elevated; and it is precisely in the imperceptible blending of the plain with the ornate that a great writer is distinguished. He uses the simplest phrases without triviality, and the grandest without a suggestion of grandiloquence." ~ George Henry Lewes I am a fan of simple, Not highly ornate, I must understand the words, So as to relate; When I read poetry deep With toughest vocab, And the meaning of the lines Are too hard to grab, I'll simply skip it and go To the next best one, Too flowery is not cool, Such poems I'll shun; As they say, keep it simple, It works best for me, Ornate language is okay, But it'll just bore me, For I'm a fan of simple, Not highly ornate, But give me ornate trinkets, Now, that would be great.
24th March 2023 Rhyme scheme: abcb For Constance La France's "Writing Challenge - 'O' words" contest

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Date: 3/27/2023 10:13:00 PM
I agree with you dear Jo. I too love poetry which is simple and direct ! May be that I don't know how to write ornate. Loved your poem. Congratulations !
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Date: 3/27/2023 7:06:00 PM
Agree! Congratulations, Joanna!
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Date: 3/27/2023 10:28:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2023 3:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jo, Very nicely done
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Date: 3/26/2023 1:06:00 PM
Ornate trinkets - perfect ;) Love this. Congratulations on your win Jo!:)
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:34:00 PM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem, I love the quote and I love the word ornate, blessings, Constance
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:23:00 PM
- Keep it simple ... that's the best :) - Good luck in the contest, Jo :) - hugs
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Date: 3/25/2023 12:33:00 PM
Oh, I agree, also! If I read words unknown to me, I probably won't look them up, unless they're scattered and few. Best of luck!
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:20:00 AM
I so much agree with you, Joanna! A few ornate words are fine, but too flowery language is not cool to me! I look for the depth. Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/25/2023 10:47:00 AM
I like the idea of simplicity you're attempting to convey. Your poetry, Jo, illustrates how austerity may lend itself to grace. Excellent poem.
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Date: 3/25/2023 8:17:00 AM
Joanna, we have a lot in common. I'll leave the trinkets to you. GREAT write!
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Date: 3/25/2023 7:40:00 AM
I am also a fan of simplicity Jo so l really enjoyed and appreciated your lovely poem….Debx
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Date: 3/25/2023 6:11:00 AM
I hear your message loud and clear. Simple can be elegant--as your poem is, Jo. A winning poem you wrote.
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