Ornate

"The selective instinct of the artist tells him when his language should be homely, and when it should be more elevated; and it is precisely in the imperceptible blending of the plain with the ornate that a great writer is distinguished. He uses the simplest phrases without triviality, and the grandest without a suggestion of grandiloquence." ~ George Henry Lewes I am a fan of simple, Not highly ornate, I must understand the words, So as to relate; When I read poetry deep With toughest vocab, And the meaning of the lines Are too hard to grab, I'll simply skip it and go To the next best one, Too flowery is not cool, Such poems I'll shun; As they say, keep it simple, It works best for me, Ornate language is okay, But it'll just bore me, For I'm a fan of simple, Not highly ornate, But give me ornate trinkets, Now, that would be great.
24th March 2023 Rhyme scheme: abcb For Constance La France's "Writing Challenge - 'O' words" contest
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George Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 10:13 PM
I agree with you dear Jo. I too love poetry which is simple and direct ! May be that I don't know how to write ornate. Loved your poem. Congratulations !
Rodrigues Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:06 PM
Agree! Congratulations, Joanna!
Andresen Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 10:28 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Jo :) - hugs
May Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Congrats on your win Jo, Very nicely done
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Ornate trinkets - perfect ;) Love this. Congratulations on your win Jo!:)
La France Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 12:34 PM
Joanna, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge 'O' Words with your beautiful poem, I love the quote and I love the word ornate, blessings, Constance
Andresen Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 1:23 PM
- Keep it simple ... that's the best :) - Good luck in the contest, Jo :) - hugs
Peck Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 12:33 PM
Oh, I agree, also! If I read words unknown to me, I probably won't look them up, unless they're scattered and few. Best of luck!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 11:20 AM
I so much agree with you, Joanna! A few ornate words are fine, but too flowery language is not cool to me! I look for the depth. Best wishes ~ Mala
Poet Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 10:47 AM
I like the idea of simplicity you're attempting to convey. Your poetry, Jo, illustrates how austerity may lend itself to grace. Excellent poem.
Turner Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 8:17 AM
Joanna, we have a lot in common. I'll leave the trinkets to you. GREAT write!
M  Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 7:40 AM
I am also a fan of simplicity Jo so l really enjoyed and appreciated your lovely poem….Debx
Pandit Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:11 AM
I hear your message loud and clear. Simple can be elegant--as your poem is, Jo. A winning poem you wrote.
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