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Checkered Past I put out our checker board and pulled out your special chair Imagined your delightful laughter, as if you were sitting there That twinkle in your eye, that inspirational glee Then before I knew it, you were really sitting there with me You told me we'd been granted a single more day To spend it both together in a very special way I said "Grandpa I love you, I can't believe that you are here!" You looked so very happy and down your face there rolled a tear I asked you a single question "Tell me what is heaven like?" You said in heaven you are young and have a special bike." All of those that you had loved, that before you passed away Were gleefully waiting in heaven, now together you all play Dad and auntie Debbie, Grandpa Kutz and Bobby Lenz Even your mom with pure blue eyes and oh so many other friends. For age is not a factor no one there will ever grow old The sun is always shining and the wind is never cold Still you were thrilled to leave and spend this day with me To tell me a few jokes and to share your history For the thing I most remember is the stories you would share I listened much more intently as I marvelled at you there. No question remained unanswered, as you sipped upon your tea You also wanted to know, if I was as happy as I could be So I introduced you to my family, my son Matthew and my wife I told them how very thankful I am, that you are part of my life You sat back down in your chair, and made one final play Winked and said "I love you, this has been the perfect day!" I loved playing Checkers with my Grandpa Clifford. I miss you Grandpa! Written December 11, 2015

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Date: 3/11/2016 6:55:00 PM
Well Richard, this poem had it's desired effect. Poems like these can run the risk of going too over the top, but yours is perfect.
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Date: 1/3/2016 7:55:00 PM
Well one more poem and uou will kill me , really there's no breaths left after this remarkable , breath taking poem.....Enjoyed every little word in , like seriously spectacular write , one of my favorites actually....well I wish you a happy new year full of passion ,happiness , romance and joy for u and for ur beloved one's....hugs / / :) dalia
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/3/2016 10:09:00 PM
You as well, thanks for the awesome comments, you made my night.
Date: 12/22/2015 7:57:00 AM
This is an excellent piece Richard. Great write, merry christmas and a happy new year to you my friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2015 8:51:00 AM
Thanks Funom.
Date: 12/21/2015 12:01:00 PM
Richard... I was inspired by a few poems you wrote lately, and stumbled on this one. Once again, I have to say this is a wonderful write..*smiles*
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2015 8:52:00 AM
You are most kind Laura, thanks ;0)
Date: 12/17/2015 7:18:00 PM
Really enjoyed reading this, brought back some happy memories for me too. Hope you're keeping well Rick and congrats on the win. take care, richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/22/2015 8:53:00 AM
Thanks Richard, I hope you are enjoying the season.
Date: 12/16/2015 12:33:00 AM
RICHARD, congrats on your fine win. SKAT
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks SKAT!
Date: 12/15/2015 2:16:00 PM
Aw how sweet the memory of our cherished once, and how wobderful when it comes to life again... Hope Its tetley tea up there. . cant wait to see : )..Lovely.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/16/2015 5:35:00 PM
I think you will have to be patient and wait for a long time. Thanks for the visit Charmaine.
Date: 12/15/2015 1:03:00 AM
Absolutely charming. Congratulations.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/15/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thanks Susan.
Date: 12/14/2015 7:46:00 AM
Such a lovely write, Richard. What a wonderous day that would be.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:26:00 AM
Thanks James.
Date: 12/14/2015 2:45:00 AM
What a wonderful write Richard. Enjoyed reading about your grandpa. Did you win when you played him in checkers?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:30:00 AM
We each had our moments. We both enjoyed competing. When I was a kid he would let me win. When he was older and was mentally deminisher I would let him win.
Date: 12/14/2015 12:01:00 AM
I loved reading the memories of your beloved grandpa Richard. I got a visit from my dear friend here in my home the day after my friend passed on. She lived in Kansas, and came to say good-bye to me. All she did was appear and smile and then she was gone, but I marveled at how young she looked, like in her early twenties. Your poem reminded me of that beautiful encounter and I was touched by your words. Congratulations on your wonderful win!
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Date: 12/13/2015 11:42:00 PM
Richard, this is so heart warming, I would love to talk to my grandpa too for just one more day, congrats ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:32:00 AM
We will have to be patient and wait for the next life. Thanks for visiting.
Date: 12/13/2015 9:04:00 PM
So nice Richard you really have a way of touching everyone with your words. I would love it if you tried my first contest, don't know if you do acrostics though.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:33:00 AM
Hi John, I will check it out.
Date: 12/13/2015 7:27:00 PM
this one was one of my favorites. So glad to see it marked high. Congrats.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:33:00 AM
What a nice thing to say, much appreciated.
Date: 12/13/2015 5:45:00 PM
Well done, Richard. Congratulations.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/14/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Lin Lane.
Date: 12/13/2015 4:29:00 PM
loved it, such special memories ......Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Seren.
Date: 12/13/2015 4:26:00 PM
Nice memories, Richard. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Sandra
Date: 12/13/2015 3:37:00 PM
Such a touching poem Rick congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thanks Jan. Hugs to you too.
Date: 12/13/2015 3:16:00 PM
I love how personal you wrote this..exactly what I was looking for..thank you for being a part of my contest...-luloo *smiles*
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thanks for picking this one Laura.
Date: 12/13/2015 10:21:00 AM
Excellent - I love it ... 7 ... CayCay
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 10:26:00 AM
Thanks Cay Cay.
Date: 12/13/2015 9:08:00 AM
Theses are treasured memories, rich... surely, a profound tribute.. i miss my grandpa too!. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2015 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Nette, hugs back to you. Grandparents play such an important part in our lives.
Date: 12/12/2015 9:38:00 AM
Know Grandpa would have enjoyed this poem. He was always so proud of his family. Must say that I am proud of you as well for this well written testimonial to Grandpa Love Mom brought tears to my eyes
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2015 10:02:00 AM
I love you too mom!
Date: 12/12/2015 1:31:00 AM
Great write, dear...We carry them in our hearts.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, indeed we do.
Date: 12/11/2015 3:28:00 PM
this is touching and utterly charming. Next one on my list of "to do " poems after the one liner!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2015 8:02:00 AM
I hope you are right Wilfred, thanks for the nice comment.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thanks for visiting Andrea, good luck in the contes.
Date: 12/11/2015 2:46:00 PM
Now that is a day to behold Richard. Love the couplets
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2015 4:31:00 PM
Thanks Tim, it was fun to imagine.
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