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It was still quite dark in Milton Creek, and it had just gone four When Tom arrived at the sheriff's office, and knocked on his door The Sheriff quickly opened up and beckoned Tom, to come inside They picked up three Winchesters and ammo and got ready to ride. Deputy Terry was waiting patiently at the livery stable door Seems the wrangler had overslept, and Terry quietly swore Then he turned up and said, " You could have waited till day" Terry said, "We've got an early start, we're going to Santa Fe." Tom and the then Sheriff arrived and they all saddled up to go They had enough to start a war with all their guns and ammo They headed off down main street, there was no one around At the edge of the town headed east and were Santa Fe bound. There was little talk, as all were tired from the night before But all agreed on one thing that they had to settle a score No one could carry out a foul murder and hope to get away One way or another they'd face a trial and be made to pay. The sun was starting to rise, and they stopped to make coffee Sheriff Koplin explained who they were after to Deputy Terry And he was mighty surprised to hear who he had in the frame Was even more shocked when he found out the victim's name. They finished coffee and broke camp and went on their way Another day's hard ride and they'd be in the town of Santa Fe Tom knew the sheriff there and would ask for his help to arrest With the help of his five deputies who were of calibre the best. The next morning, they arrived in the bustling town of Santa Fe Sheriff Koplin hoped they'd have their man by the end of the day Tom called to see the sheriff who said "We'll help get your man And make no bones about it me and the boys will do all we can". Word soon came through that the wanted man was leaving town Both sheriffs and the posse were more than ready for a showdown They headed for the livery stable, the wanted man drew his colt Terry drew his and fired in the air causing the man's horse to jolt. The man fell off and was overpowered and marched off to jail He said nothing when questioned and he looked a might pale Sheriff Koplin said " We know it was you who killed our friend And for that you'll surely hang, and it will be for you, your end." Mayor Tom told the lawmen of Santa Fe "The drinks are on me We're all grateful and I'm sure you could all do with some whiskey" The next morning the men from Milton Creek, set off heading west Sheriff Koplin was happy that they'd been able to make the arrest. They were six hours out of town and decided to camp overnight And would head on home west for Milton Creek at morning light Since they'd left Santa Fe town the wanted man had said nothing Tom eyed him up and down and wondered what he was thinking. Terry had made fresh coffee and gave a cup to the wanted man He too was wondering if he had planned, a daring escape plan He stared at him, and the man moved; Terry was blinded by the sun And it was in that split second that he made a grab for Terry's gun. He aimed the gun at all three, it seems he now had the advantage Sheriff Koplin kept his cool but underneath was in a blinding rage The man said "Y'all drop your guns" but he was in for a surprise When Tom produced a derringer and shot him between the eyes. There was silence then sheriff said "For a moment I'd given up hope It's a shame though, because we won't see him at the end of a rope" They decided to bury him where he fell, justice had now been served The wanted man was a born killer and he had got what he deserved. The next morning, they headed west and would be back at sundown They made good time and just before sundown arrived back in town Sheriff Koplin whispered quietly "We'll just say that our man got away His identity we must keep hidden at all costs, it will be better that way. Tom and Terry nodded in agreement, and they went to Lin's Aces hotel Her face lit up when she saw them, she was overjoyed you could tell They all ate a hearty steak meal then headed over to Jan's Manx saloon As they got near, they could hear Deb and Tania singing 'Lover's Moon'. Jan walked over to where they were sitting to welcome them all back And said rumours flying around town was that the victim was Blackjack Sheriff Koplin looked at Jan and nodded and said "Yes you are right He was murdered by a lowlife, plain and simple and it wasn't a fair fight. He added "We'll tell the townsfolk that it was a drifter passing through And we'll tell you all what happened and confirm what you already knew We'll hold a meeting in Mayor Tom's office, tomorrow before sundown Jan added " Ranger David is back, he's been keeping an eye on the town ". Tom stood up sharply and said "That long ride has played havoc with my back And If you good folks don't mind I'm going to head home and get in the sack" Sheriff Koplin said "Me too, I'm getting too old for this I'm feeling quite dead And all I could think when I was riding back to town was a hot bath and my bed. Written on the 3rd February 2024.

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Date: 4/9/2024 1:07:00 PM
I really liked the funny ending. Sometimes we just get too old to feel very good after a had day's work!
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Date: 4/9/2024 1:45:00 PM
Thank you very much Andrea, We certainly do, getting on in years brings all sorts of problems. Things we did in our twenties now take twice as long. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 2/21/2024 4:11:00 PM
Tom - sorry for the late note been busy. What a creative piece of work. Congratulations on POTD. Elena and Pangie
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Date: 2/22/2024 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Elana and Pangie, I love the history of the old west. I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/14/2024 10:48:00 AM
WOW Tom a great conclusion to your , Milton Creek exciting episodes and certainly a deserved recognition of P.O.T.D Congratulations.We are all well but our summer which started in December and ends in February was rain and cold weather, quite a climate change for us. Our Summer did start about a week ago, lets see what Autumn brings which is meant to start in March. Climate change is playing havoc on planet earth. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/14/2024 9:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Jennifer, glad you enjoyed it. It was the conclusion to one I wrote at Christmas. Rest assured more will follow. Raining here in Turkey but thankfully today the sun is shining. Tom
Date: 2/13/2024 11:33:00 AM
Tom Tom Tom. You are the master and this series you created and share is wonderful. It certainly is well thought out and executed smoothly and flawlessly. Each entry as this is clear and coherent. We are all in the scene with all your characters and happenings. I hope you are proud of all of this because you should be. Your ending words and thoughts leave readers to pause and reflect. You left us on a quiet gentle note. Thank you as always for sharing. Peace and Blessings always (smile)
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Date: 2/13/2024 9:28:00 PM
Thank you very much Lisa, I'm happy you enjoyed the continuing story of Milton Creek. Never a dull moment there, greetings from Turkey, I'm travelling at the moment so not able to be on soup much. I hope you are keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/8/2024 10:33:00 AM
Tom, belated congratulations on your POTD for this wonderfully told tale of the old west and frontier justice! You have created such a delightful series of Milton Creek stories. I hope you will put them together into a book! This is as charming as tales of Wyatt Earp, Judge Roy Bean and the OK Corral. Thank you! Over Fork Over!
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Date: 2/8/2024 10:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Sam, wasn't sure if folks were getting tired of the saga, seems I was wrong. I'm happy that you enjoyed it Over Fork Over. Tom
Date: 2/7/2024 8:47:00 AM
Oh Tom sorry for belated Congratulations on POTD for your magnificent Milton Creek Tale! Not surprised its up here my friend! In Edinburgh atm enjoying and admiring the magnificent buildings and architecture. Debx
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Date: 2/7/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thank you very much Deb, no worries, you're a busy girl. Edinburgh is a lovely city, spent a day there a few years ago but could have done with longer, managed to see the castle and the Royal mile. I love the sounds of the bagpipes. My family were descended from Scottish settlers. There's a Cunningham tartan. Tom
Date: 2/7/2024 8:00:00 AM
Quite a long story written in impeccable rhyme. It has all the ingredients of a thriller. The way you have concluded the days-long adventure for capturing the culprit with a bath is amusing and enervating. Tom, Congratulations on this well-deserved POTD for your storytelling ability.
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Date: 2/7/2024 8:33:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Valsa, the one I wrote before Christmas left some questions to be answered so thought I'd write a sequel. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 2/6/2024 8:42:00 AM
Tom, quite a saga. I am glad the good people won out in the end. A real labor of love on your part. You may have to do a prequel!!! You are a loved poet and it's a well-deserved admiration, sir!
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Date: 2/6/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Duke, I'm happy you enjoyed the continuing story of Milton Creek. More will follow. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 6:00:00 PM
Such a great conclusion Tom ! So much to take in . It’s time to read them again from the start . Thoroughly enjoyed . Love the bath at the end . Hugs Congratulations on POTD. Susan :)
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:13:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Susan, I'm happy you enjoyed the story of Milton Creek. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 5:45:00 PM
Another wonderful write, Tom. Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:11:00 PM
Thank you very much Eve, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 3:24:00 PM
A fantastic conclusion to the Milton Creek Saga Tom, have enjoyed every chapter. Congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:11:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Beryl. Hope you're both keeping well. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 3:14:00 PM
I am tickled that you keep the saga going Tm; Your stories are always fun to read and the "players" are all close to us. Many thanks and congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:10:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Linda, I get an idea in my head and just go with it. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD! Extraordinary as usual. You have such a gift at storytelling! Paulette
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Date: 2/5/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Paulette. I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 1:47:00 PM
Tom, I have enjoyed your 'Milton Creek' narratives immensely! Heartfelt congratulations on POTD. :)
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Date: 2/5/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thank you very much Evelyn for your congratulations. I'm pleased that you are enjoying them. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 1:25:00 PM
A big Congratulations, Tom, for this worthy POTD. A classic! Enjoy your accolade. Blessings
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Date: 2/5/2024 1:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for your congrats Gina, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope your day is going well. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 12:34:00 PM
A cast of characters singing to me still. I smiled as each took the stage. I pray your work brought to you as well those fond memories of these, such endeared poets. Best - Ken (relaxing creekside)
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Date: 2/5/2024 1:04:00 PM
Thank you very much Ken, I'm happy you enjoyed the show. Enjoy your week ahead. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 10:24:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on another fine poem that is chosen as POTD, Tom. You rapped things up real good. Looking forward to the next one. Have a safe trip, my friend. See you when you get back. Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:32:00 AM
Thank you very much Bill for your congratulations and return visit. I'll cook something up whilst I'm on the trail, watch this space. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 10:24:00 AM
Tom, your poem is truly exceptional. Congratulations on receiving the prestigious POTD award. Your ability to consistently create these extraordinary narratives is remarkable. Continue to write with passion. You are a true gentleman and poet.
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:31:00 AM
Thank you very much for your comment Lasaad, much appreciated, used to read a lot of westerns years back so that's what inspires me. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 10:20:00 AM
Tom, congratulations on your POTD honors! Your "Milton Creek" pen is alive and well!
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Date: 2/5/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congrats Mike, I hope the ink well doesn't dry up. Lol. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 9:20:00 AM
That was a close call, Another great story in the series of Milton Creek, Congrats on POTD Tom
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Date: 2/5/2024 9:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Joseph I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 8:43:00 AM
Just dropping back with many congrats on POTD, How you keep spinning these epic tales is so amazing and a wonderful tribute to our lovely friend Milton. Write on Mayor Tom and ignore the nasty comments about thinly disguised bully poems/ kindly old gent - I would take umbrage at that but hey I am just a poop poet!. hugs jan xx
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Lin Lane
Date: 2/5/2024 10:08:00 AM
Jan, being a poop poet let’s you sniff out those who have the stench of BS
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:47:00 AM
Thank you very much for your return visit and congratulations Jan, I don't think some things on here will ever change. Its a good way of keeping Milt's memory alive, we'll never forget him. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 8:00:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read the continuing saga of Milton Creek. Great writing, Tom. Congratulations on POTD! ~Tonto
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Charlie, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you and your wife are OK now. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 7:38:00 AM
Here's to your revival and that of Sheriff K, Tom. Congrats on POTD. ~ Gershon
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, been at this one for a few weeks, decorating got in the way. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 7:16:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Tom with POTD and another cracking tale at Milton Creek. So , so entertaining from your very creative storytelling pen! Love seeing some of the names of our friends here. Such fun! Your love and knowledge of ole’ Wild West certainly shines through. You can practically hear the horses hooves and bullets flying. Thank you for sharing again. Keep on writing my friend …
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Christina, I'm happy you enjoyed my latest episode from the town of Milton Creek. Tom
Date: 2/5/2024 6:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. The storyteller is at it again. Hooray!!! Another great chapter for your "Milton Creek" book. Love It... Have a great/blessed day writing away..................
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Date: 2/5/2024 8:02:00 AM
Thank you very much Paula, my love of westerns inspires me. Glad you enjoyed it. Tom
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