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This is a poem written for a challenge which involved the following 20 prompts:

Chocolate geisha, Heartbeats in paradise, Where the paths have no name, The name time forget, Depleted ideologies, Narcissistic daffodils, Devil's disciple, Killing time, Virtual hypocrisy, Lilacs in barren meadows, Shells lost in a forgotten coral reef, My muse is a flower garden, If Romeo did not die, Breathless sighs, In the darkest night you are the light, Lead me to the stars, Return of the butterflies, Last icicle of winter, Volcano mind, harmonious heart, Self confessed queen.

 

 

Autumn will forever be the season of death to me, but like time, I do not remain cemented in the past. Memories of ghosts will always lead me to the stars, as everything we love fades away eventually, like shells lost in a forgotten coral reef - but in every pain there is a lesson. As I watch the last icicle of winter drip away, I eagerly anticipate the return of the butterflies. To float softly in orange, indigo and ivory, gifting kisses to elliptical tulips and narcissistic daffodils. I remember whilst killing time, wayward winds of winter swept away the name time forgot. I wandered bewildered where the paths have no name, drifting into a world of depleted ideologies. Boredom led me to an entity of virtual hypocrisy. Where many self confessed queens sat upon phony thrones, claiming self declared, self obsessed sovereignty. Demented demons and Devil's disciples, destroying the wonderment of words, I felt fatigued from false pretences and virtual vultures. Until an unhappy confused and cloaked chocolate geisha, gifted me the sincerity of her intimate inkless quill. Replacing bleeding tears, she bled alliterations, expressing her once hidden heartbeats from paradise. Her vocabulary of vivid visions left me with breathless sighs. An unpredictable poetic phenomenon, with a volcanic mind, harmonious heart. Was I even a poet before her presence gave me life? There are no superheroes in poetry, but I ponder if Romeo did not die, would he have created a poetic garden for Juliet? My muse is a flower garden, loyal to the core, enchanting in evergreen picturesque petals, spreading lilies and lilacs in barren meadows, because in the darkest night you are the light. Silent One 21 March 2022

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Date: 12/6/2022 3:51:00 AM
I love your poems. It breathes life to my soul.
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Date: 5/26/2022 3:42:00 AM
This is a very intriguing piece great write.. xoxo
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Date: 3/25/2022 12:51:00 PM
Good one. I enjoyed the work and the music. Thanks for sharing your work from prompts. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/25/2022 7:48:00 AM
Because in the darkest night you are the light. This says it all . But in every pain there is a lesson . So much truth here Silent One . I am sure you have lived many lifetimes as I have . Your words come from circles of life , birth , death and rebirth. Beautifully penned . Belated congratulations on POTD! Sending light. Enjoy your ever enchanting garden ! Susan :)
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Date: 3/23/2022 10:05:00 PM
Excellent writing from your poetic heart and talented pen, SO. I always admire your carefully crafted alliterations, as well as the soulfulness your pour into your creations. I love the lines "gifting kisses to elliptical tulips and narcissistic daffodils" and "with a volcanic mind, harmonious heart". Well deserving of POTD acknowledgment.
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Date: 3/23/2022 5:55:00 PM
… Was I even a poet before her presence gave me life? …gifting kisses to elliptical tulips and narcissistic daffodils. Great imagery and ponderings! Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 3/23/2022 3:01:00 PM
Oh, I love this SO. It's extravagant and exciting and I so love flowers and the idea of your muse being a flower garden. Love it. Beautifully done with those prompts! Love and God bless you, Gina
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 3:07:00 PM
Thank you my friend..
Date: 3/22/2022 9:30:00 PM
gosh who is this chocolate geisha? sounds marvelous!!! I see this garnered a POTD. Big congrats to you, S.O.
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
It was one of the prompts...thank you
Date: 3/22/2022 3:20:00 PM
I'm back with congratulations on your well deserved win, Silent One. Lovely poem! :)
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thank you for coming back with congrats
Date: 3/22/2022 1:41:00 PM
Wow Silent One! This is beautiful. Congrats on POTD.
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/22/2022 12:29:00 PM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 2:56:00 AM
Thank you once again
Date: 3/22/2022 10:06:00 AM
Thank you for posting this beautiful poem, Silent One. May your Muse be ever with you, "spreading lilies and lilacs in barren meadows". You and she have uplifted us today. Molly
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 2:57:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and support..
Date: 3/22/2022 9:55:00 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD. Blessings my friend
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 3:03:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/22/2022 9:33:00 AM
Flowers in a garden like to flourish and bloom: May your muse caress the beauty within, exploring all the amazing possibilities. Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 3:04:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/22/2022 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!! So very "Beautiful." I love your colorful butterflies and this write. You are a master. Have a great/blessed day.................
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Silent One
Date: 3/23/2022 3:04:00 AM
I am.not a master but thank you for your sweet comment..
Date: 3/22/2022 8:34:00 AM
Silent, beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance
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Date: 3/22/2022 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on having this wonderful poem honored with POTD Silent. There is so many things about this poem that I admire that inspires. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/22/2022 7:56:00 AM
Back to congratulate you for the POTD awarded to "My Muse Is A Flower Garden". Enjoy your special day! Bill
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Date: 3/22/2022 7:22:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Silent, Very nicely pennned
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Date: 3/22/2022 7:01:00 AM
"wayward winds of winter", "self confessed queens", Demented demons and Devil's disciples" - great symbols, images, ironies, satires and synchronizations. Wonderful work! Congratulations!
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations for this stunning POTD. Enjoy :)
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:32:00 AM
Back to your wonderful poem, Silent One with Congratulations on its POTD status !
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Date: 3/22/2022 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Poet. It's an exquisite poem as all your poems are - images, word choices, are exceptionally stunning and brilliant - no wonder your muse is a colourful, vibrant flower garden - what can be more inspiring! Best wishes ~ Mala
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Date: 3/22/2022 5:16:00 AM
I'm not surprised that this is a POTD, congratulations !!!
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Date: 3/22/2022 4:50:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, SO. Enjoy your day.
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