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My Great Great Grandfather

Today I was totally awestruck,
Found many family photos
When we had moved 
That had been packed,
but not numbered
in this mystery box,
Laying quietly, naively, 
It’s contents
Blew off my socks.
I stared with unbelief
At this picture,
As my ancestry was revealed,
It was hiding under some
Documents, concealed,
From view, I shook the
Document, out fell this gem
From the 19th century, unbelievable, 
Inconceivable,
The child in the photo
My grandfather as a baby,
With his grandfather.
His mother,
My great grandmother.
My grandfather 
Sent this to me
In nineteen seventy, 
It was put in a box
And forgotten, until today,
A scene from Turkey
A place far away,
But meant something
To me, so dear and so close,
Those old-fashioned clothes,
The generations between us
Seemed to disappear,
As I heard my papou
Whisper from heaven,
In my ear,
So glad you this found
This box and photo
Today, did you not
Notice it’s half open lid,
Its contents hid
For a century and a half,
It was time you knew
My grandfather too!


PAPOU IN GREEK MEANS GRANDFATHER
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George Avatar
January 11, 2022 at 12:33 AM
Thus you could rummage and pick up a valuable picture from the archives and you could trace your lineage ! A great moment for you to treasure and get excited over ! Beautifully written !
Goldsmith Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 12:00 PM
An amazing story/write and photo. Good memories are the best along with old photos. So happy for you. "Enjoy" Have a blessed day....................
Flaherty Avatar
December 10, 2021 at 12:25 PM
Turkey is that where your surname Proxenos origins lie. Absolutely brilliant Mev so happy for you a blast from the past is like you say the best kept secret reminder of life itself. Hugs and blessings
Ball Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 3:11 AM
Lovely Jennifer. How special for you to find this. Would love to have something like that to build on my own ancestry. Nunu is grandpa in Italian. God Bless and thanks for sharing this special moment with us. JB
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December 5, 2021 at 4:41 AM
How awesome for you and so glad you shared this with us. I know you were delighted in so many ways to see the past come to life in your hands. I remember my father talking about in his generation that male babies, toddlers, and little boys had to wear what he called aprons until they were old enough to totally pottie trained. He said then they wore knickers (knee pants) until they were old enough to work helping do manly chores. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara..soupmail soon
Kalita Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 6:53 PM
A treasure trove from the glimpses of reminiscences, reminds of my own grandpa... Silpika
Sands Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 1:20 PM
Wow ! This is so special Jennifer. Thank you for sharing your treasured finding with us. Enjoy :)
Kannan Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 7:06 AM
Such a beautiful treasure and you have wonderfully penned ... Could relate to it... Could hear the joyous tone through your words, Jennifer...
Laurie Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Hello Jennifer ... brought back great memories of my own situation. My cousin left me some photos where old folk I remembered were young in the photos, and how the scenery has changed - thanks once again Jennifer - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 4:22 PM
wow, what a treasure. you wrote of it so well, Jennifer. My mom loves this kind of stuff, finding out about dead ancestors. It's really big in her mormon culture!!
Pandit Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:20 AM
Your poem is heartfelt Jennifer. I hear the joy in your words for having found the treasure of memories. I know you cherish them.
Proxenos Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:29 AM
Thank-you Vijay, you read me well, I was overjoyed, and so unexpected! An awesome comment as usual dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Daniel Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 2:01 AM
Old photographs conceal so much memories, it's wonderful going through them any time, Jennifer, glad you found them when you did and wrote about it:)
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November 29, 2021 at 4:37 AM
Hi Jo - thank-you for commenting on my poem - I was so enthralled when I found this particular photo. My grandfather was my mentor and wrote to each other from the time and age (was very young, - perhaps) when I began writing. Take care and be safe, Jennifer.
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November 28, 2021 at 10:17 PM
Having found my ancestors Jennifer, back to the 16th century, i can relate to your joy. One can feel the pride within the writing of this poem, says so much about the poet...Lovely sentiment. Harry
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November 29, 2021 at 4:45 AM
Harry that is indeed wonderful - the 16th century, that is awesome. This find was a complete surprise to me and I felt the need to share it, on Poetry Soup. Thank you always for your wonderful comments my friend, hugs, blessings Jennifer Be safe.
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November 28, 2021 at 10:10 PM
Jennifer mou! So happy for you, sis! I love these old photos. Plus handwriting of relatives long gone. I have many pictures. Including my grandfathers signature on my very first birthday card. My fathers sister and brother perished during the Spanish flu epidemic. Both in their early twenties. She had hair, down to her waist. And styled. Lovely.Thanks for sharing this...Jenn.....Panagiota xxoo
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November 29, 2021 at 4:56 AM
Panagiota my friend, I read somewhere on soup, that your stitches have come out, Yippee! Pangie, Panagiota or my Greek sis., you are all of the above mentioned. But you and I bonded I think by your fourth or fifth poem you posted some years ago. Going to your page now - 'perastika'!
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November 28, 2021 at 10:02 PM
What a treasure and joy to find. Thanks for sharing the moment, Jennifer; and the nice footnote. Grandfather in Greek is Papou. I enjoyed the read. Write on! A poet friend, Bill
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November 29, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Bill, thank you for visiting my page and for your lovely comment you replied RE: poem about my great, great grandfather. i was taken aback but in a so joyous way when I found this photo, with my grandfathers writing on the back. Hug and blessings Bill, Jennifer.
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November 28, 2021 at 8:42 PM
I enjoyed poem, you certainly found a gold mine when you found that picture. I do Geneology so I know your excitement. Maybe you can explore a little more and find some other things about him. Thanks for sharing the picture. Blessings ~ Debra
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November 29, 2021 at 5:06 AM
I found another gem but have to confirm with the Greek Metropolis offices in Johannesburg who have to confirm with Istanbul, TURKEY who will have to verify my findings which might take some time. Thank you Deb. for your so substantial comment. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
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November 28, 2021 at 5:05 PM
It is so fascinating to find those old photographs and to think of relatives long gone but still alive in our hearts, I can tell this is so valuable to you~
Proxenos Avatar
November 29, 2021 at 5:12 AM
I couldn't actually grasp the living, now dead, proof of this photo for I was merely browsing and came upon this gem unexpectedly. Thank you for your lovely comment Michelle. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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November 28, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Wow, whispers from Heaven heard across the universe. You are blessed, as we at PS, Jennifer. Eirene indeed. shalom, shalom In Jesus, LORD of Graces!
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November 29, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Anil, what lovely comments you always give to us all, an awesome poet and gentleman! Keep safe, still in the age of a threatened more severe mutated variant of the Pandemic . And another Greek name first Delta and now Omicron! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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