My Future Self
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Sept.8.2024
Future Self Poetry Contest
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“looking back, I’m ashamed of what I was
I’m different now, though not without flaws
Each crest becomes a trough, as we move on
God slowly steers soul towards a new dawn”
Looking back, I saw my ignominious past,
Reflected as on the surface of a plain mirror.
Seeing my hideous image, I felt the need to change,
Change into a new being… that’s what I so desired.
With a heart aflame and a conscience revived,
I vowed to rise and leave my past behind.
I fought hard to cut down the chains of habit,
That held me tight and kept me a prisoner.
Determined I was to claim my ground at every step,
And turn my back on the shadows that creep.
No more to be ruled by exaggerated notions of my worth,
Nor be a captive to my own ego, but be kind and loving.
Thus, God helped me discover my golden pathway,
To inner peace and happiness of a sublime kind..
I let compassion, the guiding light under my feet,
And love, a golden thread that links one and all.
Now, I see each dawn as a new lease of life,
And thank God for granting one more day to improve
To look at everything fresh with a new insight,
And fare ahead in life, moving steadily from better to best.
Copyright © Valsa George | Year Posted 2024
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