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Morning Comes to Huatung (Huadong) Valley

Daniel Henry Rodgers

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“At daybreak, the world turns softly—
ancient valleys hold misted promise
as new light gathers each story in dew.”
- Poet

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Mist feathery drifts last night’s breath loosening above basalt slopes of Huatung Pacific swallows trace morning brushwork over Fuli’s rice paddies new green scented with rain. Xiuguluan River flows jade mountain-born among ancestral stones white willows in Ruisui weep dew-kissed cycad fronds catching first sunlight Leaf pearls gather on my thatched sandals Walami earth holds stories in its coolness. Bihe Pond rests hidden in Wanrong’s stillness waters reflecting the tribe’s quiet prayers Bamboo leaves in green and gold crested mynas gather in quiet repose wind moves with the chime of a temple bell. Ancestral path wanders into the Central Range oolong tea clouds drift above Qilai’s blue ridges A white egret lifts over Guangfu’s terraces air clear as poured Longjing. A bulbul calls blue magpie glides the slow unlayering of day Huatung Calligrapher’s span warm to newborn light time unspools— bright unmeasured. Light widens dawn follows Yu Shan’s shadowed valleys the world in quiet promise soft light drifting into morning.

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Date: 7/28/2025 3:18:00 AM
Daniel, this is a splendid poem that focuses on the peace and beauty of nature, especially in Taiwan's Huatung region. It examines how the environment and human experience are related, highlighting the close ties to ancestry and the peaceful moments that signify the passing of time. A sense of tranquility and respect for the natural world are fostered by the poem's rich picture of landscapes, flora and animals, and cultural components. Phrases like "dew-kissed cycad fronds" and "mist feathery drifts" depict the scene delicately. The poem is anchored in a specific physical and cultural setting by the usage of phrases like "Longjing," "Xiuguluan River," and "Basalt slopes."
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Date: 7/28/2025 2:34:00 AM
Dearest Daniel, they say that a great poem is an experience, your poem felt like that. It felt like I was right there experiencing the beauty—the chimes of the temple bells, the wind on my face, the coolness of the pond. The ambience, the tranquility, I felt it all. Your poem felt like food for the soul and meditation for my mind. It felt like you held your reader's hand from the first stanza and walked us gently through the last stanza. A new fav for me. With love and respect always, Anne
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Date: 7/27/2025 7:24:00 PM
Beautiful poetry that is easy on the brain, though your references will be unfamiliar to most. You've obviously done your research though and that's a hallmark of a great writer
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Date: 7/27/2025 5:11:00 PM
a soft and compelling read, Daniel. Your imagery was sublime. I felt as if I was actually in Huatung. You captured the essence of the valley beautifully. have a blessed evening, Sara
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