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Memories Burn

Long is the memory's burn
when tomorrow comes too soon
and time drops its weathered coat
upon the vanquished floor of love

We danced as lovers
beneath the soft sensual glow of eyes
on our dim-lit stage of unrehearsed illusion
where we were swept away
by the haunting melody of love's warm sighs
from our lives loneliness
Until the last rendered drop of emotion emptied
into the parting palms of tender expectations
found in the flickering light
from the last melted candle darkening our memory

Tomorrow is another red thread on the horizon
where love so alive, so vibrant is forever distant
as to never have been
except for the enduring face
that melts away again and again
in the darkness of memory's sadness

Perhaps fate was unkind to allow our souls to bleed
when it unleased our passions embraced in fury
in our intimate bondings that revealed the emptiness
we needed to fill...before our last goodbye


12/15/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Chiri Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 5:16 PM
Congrats on your top win!;)
Hamilton Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 3:43 PM
This is fantastic writing Frederic, congrats on another top win!
La France Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 8:17 PM
Frederic your poem is truly beautiful and the music is sublime, well done and a fav!
Adams Avatar
December 19, 2019 at 8:00 PM
wow... from that opening stanza you pull the reader right into your words.. the depths of metaphor and emotion are well drafted... excellent penning my friend :) hugs
Barden Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:33 AM
This is exquisite phrasing! Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Frederic - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Na Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Frederic
Lane Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 7:26 AM
So many wonderful phrases in this one, Frederic. "Time drops its weathered coat..." and the entire third verse. Memories can be so vivid and yet fade as if melting wax of a long-burning candle. But its flame returns to haunt us. Love this one.
Wanter Avatar
December 15, 2019 at 11:06 AM
I admit I don't understand all of it, but it is so beautiful to read.
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