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Looking For Love

looking for love, in all the wrong places don’t just look at all the pretty faces look at their heart, make sure they’re real sometimes a friend is the best deal quit trying so hard to round the bases

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Sotto Poet

Date: 7/29/2022 7:00:00 PM

"'Sometimes a friend is the best deal'" as another saying goes... These lyrics have both wisdom and knowledge in similar ways. Be blessed, my dear friend!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/30/2022 7:09:00 AM

Thanks, reflective on the one hand, light on the other. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/26/2022 8:17:00 PM

Well written and wise, my friend. :)

Bill Baker
Date: 7/27/2022 7:51:00 AM

Thank for the visit and the comment, Evelyn. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill

Vladislav Raven

Date: 7/26/2022 1:49:00 PM

Hi Bill, I love the message. You have managed to put across the message in limerick form and I have to give you Kudos for that. I have nothing but praise for those who can write limericks. A limerick that makes total sense. Has to be a fave, my friend. Have a wonderful evening ..... Mike.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2022 5:32:00 PM

Thanks for the comment and the FAV, Mike. I don't write too many Limericks because I've gotten a little too serious as I've aged. Things aren't as funny as they once were. lol Have a great week my friend, Bill

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/26/2022 12:11:00 PM

You said it with smarts, look at the heart, that tells you the authenticity of the soul, friendship is gold at times, and has its own great rewards, well written piece Bill,

Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2022 5:30:00 PM

Thank you for the kind comments and your friendship. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/26/2022 3:11:00 AM

I have not had to seek out the dating scene/s because of a long marriage soon to be 60 years, therefore, I don't know exactly what people go through when seeking a new relationship, but I can imagine it would be quite difficult to find one in some of the places that the TV indicates people go today. I think that people seek mates in bars, pubs, lounges, etc. I think church, grocery stores, through friends who would really know someone. I enjoyed reading this one today. I think several people ...

Bill Baker
Date: 7/26/2022 5:28:00 PM

I was just wondering about that the other day. :-) Good for them. Like minds and like hearts. Yeah! Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/26/2022 3:12:00 AM

... continued..have found a person on here and have married. Interesting isn't it. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/25/2022 10:15:00 AM

Aha cool message. Well penned

Bill Baker
Date: 7/25/2022 11:48:00 AM

Thank you, Paghunda, for the first visit to my site and for the comment. Have a great day! Bill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2022 8:35:00 AM

this is not just a great limerick but it has an outstanding message. love it.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/24/2022 10:37:00 AM

Thank you sweet and mindful friend. :-) Smiles ~ Blessing Andrea. Bill

Timothy Ray

Date: 7/23/2022 9:53:00 AM

advice only sages produce....and well given

Bill Baker
Date: 7/23/2022 1:34:00 PM

Thanks for the kind comment, Timothy. Have a great day my friend. Bill

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/23/2022 8:41:00 AM

Not only fun, but serious too! Good one Bill. Linda

Bill Baker
Date: 7/23/2022 1:35:00 PM

Thanks, Linda. Hope it makes a few of you smile. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/23/2022 6:32:00 AM

There is a serious message in there, Bill, so double enjoyment, with fun of the limerick.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/23/2022 1:36:00 PM

Glad you liked it, Harry. I still need to work on the funny part, but I'm trying. Bill

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/23/2022 1:57:00 AM

Wise words, Bill. The way we look at other forms, at the soul rather than body shell …

Bill Baker
Date: 7/23/2022 1:37:00 PM

Thanks for your mindful comments my friend. Have a great weekend! Bill

Michael Tor

Date: 7/22/2022 4:26:00 PM

So true Bill. Great advice given here my friend. Enjoy your day... and weekend...

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 4:50:00 PM

Thanks, Michael. May you enjoy your weekend also my friend. Bill

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/22/2022 4:03:00 PM

Your limerick is filled with wisdom Bill. A brilliant Limerick my friend! Wish I could write one of these. Blessings xxoo

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 4:49:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. I'm still learning. Mine aren't very funny like they should be most of the time. Bill

Terrell Martin

Date: 7/22/2022 8:09:00 AM

Excellent advice Bill - both wise and witty. And thanks for reminding me that good poetry doesn't have to be long and wordy. Sometimes short & to the point is the best method of communicating what's in one's heart and head. Cheers, Terry

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:32:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and comment, Terry. Short and long both have their advantages and disadvantages. The poet that uses the appropriate form communicates their thoughts through their poetry in the better way. One form doesn't fit all. :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/22/2022 5:44:00 AM

Words of wisdom--great advice, Bill.

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:33:00 PM

Thanks my friend. Still struggling to find time to write more. lol Have a great week! Bill

Valsa George

Date: 7/21/2022 10:43:00 PM

'Sometimes a friend is the best deal'.... There is both wit and wisdom in these lines ! Stay Blessed sweet friend !

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:34:00 PM

Thank you, Valsa. Your visits are always appreciated. Bill

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/21/2022 8:26:00 PM

Ha,ha, ha! That last line is a home run, Bill! It'll take me a while to finish it, though. ~ Old John Silver (Pegleg)

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:35:00 PM

LOL thanks, Gershon, for the smiles and chuckles I get from some of your quips. Bill

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/21/2022 6:55:00 PM

Reminds me of that old country western song, also like 'a friend is the best deal' - that is the best way to ensure a long happy relationship!

Bill Baker
Date: 7/22/2022 1:29:00 PM

I agree, Michelle. My wife is really my best friend. Thanks for the visit and comment my friend. Bill

Deb M

Date: 7/21/2022 6:09:00 PM

So very true Bear Hugs Bill …..great poem! Your buddy Debx

Deb M
Date: 7/21/2022 6:10:00 PM

P.S I will send a soup mail next few days! X

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/21/2022 4:51:00 PM

Excellent write! That wisdom is good!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2022 4:29:00 PM

Hello Bill, this is good advice. Your poetess friend, Darlene. Enjoy yur evening.