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Letter To Rhapsodical Rose

Here, I scribble a letter to the rhapsodical rose, dipping my quill in stardust that slips like a violet waterfall from the tips of white oak trees. These marigold orbs shine with shimmering streaks of sugar coated mist, as I twist my palm and breathe in the lavender light of kismet, while tender tulips soothingly sleep upon the sweet seeds of nostalgia. O Mi Amour, our lambent love is but a succulent sea full of stars, where buttercup boats sail in emerald evanescence and gentle lulls of champagne waves kiss those scarlet shells of secrets, echoing with vibrant whale-songs. Can you feel the mulberry bluebells chiming as I glide on pistachio plateau of promises? Am I your soulful dynasty, just as you are my star-spun Prince descended from the eden, my healer from charismatic realms and my last lachrymose wish? You're a museum of art for the moon-shaped chimera of peonies painted with hazel silk and this chameleon danger holds no manifestation in our foreign folklore, because when the last dewdrops dance with sunlight, holographic memories of 'You and I', will forever remain alive in the tamarind tales of watercolor wildflowers. So, when the jinxed icicles cut me with their silver sword, spring shivers in snowy meadows and the sun sets along the horizon of our ruffled story, you'll always hear these husky notes of my exotic scents lingering in ivy laced rains and falling upon the graffiti of your ruby bones. You'll eternally hear celestial serenades, singing in raspberry language of our incensed love which will erase the acetone sadness of my unwritten absence and those crimson ribbons of violin's ode will spin our saga around those slaty branches of bitter destiny.

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Date: 10/14/2023 11:54:00 AM
A lovely poem. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/6/2023 3:00:00 PM
Belated congrats on potd, surely an appealing read, your vocabulary is on full display, an amazing creation from an obviously talented mind.
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Date: 10/6/2023 10:31:00 AM
Amazing work of yours! So much said here, so many emotions...
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:57:00 AM
I love your metaphors and similes and how you’ve used so many poetic techniques here, effortlessly. I can tell this comes from a deep place and how this poem means so much to you, i felt that. And your descriptive diction and imagery really blew me away! Leaving me in awe! And those alliterations are stunning! A very evocative write especially the questions made me feel so much:and “youll always hear husky tones” ah so touching every line! thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning
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Date: 9/26/2023 4:12:00 AM
letter beyond the imagination, beyond the creativity, beyond the spring of emotions... rolling beautifully on the thoughts, spun from pure wonderment, tied together with threads of peace and hope. An ache that describes away the insanity of words. I absolutely love this one. A fave for sure. Congrats on POTD. God bless you, Love, Gina
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Date: 9/25/2023 8:35:00 PM
This is a poem that tickles all the five senses. There is taste, touch, smell, hearing and sight. Your poems are beautifully sensuous. Your love with your 'star spun prince' is celebrated in such a way that we too float in the magic land where love never fades and fragrance emanates as from a beautiful rose. When you dip your quill in stardust, verses of beauty cascade down like a waterfall . .".....our lambent love is but a succulent sea full of stars where buttercup boats sail in emerald evanescence and gentle lulls of champagne waves". We too float on your champagne waves. Hiya, hearty Congratulations on your well deserved POTD
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:37:00 PM
Congrats on POTD You deserve it.
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Date: 9/25/2023 5:55:00 AM
- Simply beautifully written :) - Congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d., Hiya :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 3:29:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD, very beautiful poem and gift you have in writing
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Date: 9/25/2023 12:25:00 AM
Absolutely lovely Hiya! I can't put it as elegantly as Brandy, but it's as if it were scented; it has fragrance. Congratulations on being selected poem of the day!
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:41:00 PM
Loved this journey dear Hiya through love and loss, passion and longing ~ gentle lulls of champagne waves kiss the scarlet shells of secrets . So much mystery and revelation in each line. Your mind is fertile and your imagination vivid . I love your use of beauteous language and emotion which captures the soul! Big congratulations on your POTD ! Hugs, Susan :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 3:37:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day, such a beautiful poem!! - Phoenix :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 1:30:00 PM
You take every delicate aroma, and mix them carefully with falling emotions--- while the senses are awake. (The journey is beautiful.) Yes, your "quill" fills the world with color, imagination and possibility. Congratulations Hiya, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your honour of POTD, Dear Hiya. Your poem is masterfully crafted - and your images are stunning and sublime! I am reading your exquisite poem many times to enjoy the beauty of words and expression of feelings ~ Love and Hugs for a wonderful Poetess ~ Mala
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:00:00 AM
Hiya, Back with hearty Congratulations on this well-crafted POTD It's so awesome and so incredibly full of metaphors.
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Date: 9/24/2023 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on this well crafted POTD It's so lovely and so wonderfully full of imagery.
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Date: 9/24/2023 9:42:00 AM
Hiya, a young passionate and expansive spirit you are. Like tangerine trees and marmalade skies, you’re the girl with "kaleidoscope eyes". An ethereal painting by Mark Chagall—your poem smacks of blissful surrealistic whimsy (Salvador Dali’s ivory sunsets and platinum moon’s), the letter is enraptured by the rhapsody of your quill. I admire your craft of poetry imbued with gravitas, passionately and profoundly executed. Congratulations on your POTD ! Enjoy your day! xhugs ~I Am Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/24/2023 1:32:00 PM
Above, Congratulations Malabika on your publications! "Faith Is The Bird That Feels The Light When The Dawn Is Still Dark." --Tagore
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/24/2023 12:54:00 PM
Do you think Lennon wrote that with AI?
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/24/2023 10:09:00 AM
Love the Beatles quote
Date: 9/24/2023 9:06:00 AM
This enchanting new creation is a definitive fav for me as its beauty and radiance passed through this poet's heart as I read such finely woven verses. I read it four times! Congrats on the well deserved POTD award. A fine fav.. God bless you.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/24/2023 9:14:00 AM
My friend, so many truly astounding verses woven into this great poem!
Date: 9/24/2023 7:24:00 AM
Back to say congrats on potd
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Date: 9/24/2023 7:23:00 AM
Enchanting. A Fave poem for me. Congratulations, Hiya, on Poem of the Day!
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Date: 9/24/2023 7:18:00 AM
An eloquent trip through the beauty of imagination, your poetry comes from deep within; I hear the harps song of your soul. Your words float like snowflakes through cool winter skies. they are comforting and satisfying to absorb and love inspiring. Congratulations on your POTD honor, Hiya. A FAV for my list to reread often. Enjoy your special day of recognition and thank you for sharing your gift of poetry with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:56:00 AM
This is stunning poetic creativity dear Hiya! Congratulations on POTD! :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:52:00 AM
Hiya, beautifully penned, I love your poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.....oh what a creative love story. Paulette
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Date: 9/24/2023 5:44:00 AM
WoW! Hiya, This is so well-written and poetic. Each line and stanza was dipped in fine ink. I found this to be a creative love story. Your word choices were just brilliant! Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of the day:-) Alexis
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