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as a species, we seem obsessed with collecting junk we've been doing so ever since we stopped being hunter-gathers and started farming the land we soon started collecting broken spear tips, and old bones to decorate our huts and other things that fueled our interest until junk morphed into wealth civilization gave rise to all kinds of throw-away items and yet so few things ever got thrown away we invented junk these days we have designated drawers and whole rooms filled with useless junk and we're always eager to store even more from whoopee cushions to exercise equipment we tend to hang onto our junk the flame of consumerism is fueled by an endless supply of junk and we measure its value by the amount we collect (Suzette Prime ) 03/06/2023 Writing Challenge - ''J'' Words Sponsored by: Constance La France Suzette Prime Created by Suzette Richards. Syllable count: 2, 3, 5, 7, 11, etc. Any topic which lends itself to a philosophical statement is suitable for “Suzette Prime.” A prime number syllable count combination may be used per line to avoid mirror images, which will detract from the freestyle feel. The line breaks serve as punctuation, and no caps are used unless it is called for. A prime number is a number bigger than one with no other divisors besides one and itself.

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:53:00 PM
Emile, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/4/2023 6:50:00 AM
Thanks, Constance, I appreciate your comments and my placement my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2023 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Emile! It is funny how humans collect junk, adding more and more with time. Kind of like dogs hiding bones. :) I enjoyed your poem!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/10/2023 7:37:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, as always, I appreciate your comments, we are all junk alcoholics, my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2023 1:07:00 PM
Welcome reminder Emile. I need to do some "housecleaning". LOL Congratulations on your win! :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thanks, Linda, as always, I welcome and appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/9/2023 9:57:00 AM
- Today there is far too much "use and throw away" ... far too much junk on our planet ... congratulations on your win in the contest, Emile :) - hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/9/2023 11:58:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2023 10:07:00 PM
I was thinking the other day of the attic at my Grandma's house. As children we enjoyed rummaging through all the junk. If mankind should today suffer a fate similar to Pompeii, what would future archeological digs find? Everyone clutching a cellphone... Yes, we like junk. Well written, Emile.
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Suzette Richards
Date: 3/7/2023 8:43:00 AM
Give credit where credit is due, that is my motto :))
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thanks, Suzette, this is high praise indeed, coming from you my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2023 3:02:00 PM
I like females that have a little junk in their trunk but other than that, not so much. Reads like a winner, Emile. Good luck.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2023 7:24:00 AM
Thanks, Daniel, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/6/2023 2:57:00 PM
Hello Emile, yes Emile one man's junk is one man's treasure. Although we keep the items that mean a lot to us. Which is priceless. I hope all is well with you my friend. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/7/2023 10:28:00 AM
Hello Emile, my positive is strong Emile. I always look forward coming here. Hearing from you. You stay positive to my friend...Your Friend, /Darlene/
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/7/2023 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene, it is always nice to hear from you, stay safe, and stay positive, my friend, Emile.

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