Deb M Poet Rhyme

-JACKPOT - POTD

They chatted for so long
The day was here to meet
She was so excited
Feeling her hearts every beat

He was Scottish and oh so lovely
She thought he may be the one
She had looked for red flags
But there had been none

Meeting place was at the pier
The wind was blowing a fearsome gale
Her beautiful brushed hair blew wild and free
The gusts were steadfast with no intention to curtail

He stood there handsomely in traditional Scottish dress
She thought her heart had stopped
A mighty gust of wind then blew his kilt up 
Thats the moment she knew…..she had hit the jackpot!!

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Iris E. Sankey- Lewis June 23, 2025 at 5:11 AM Deb, You had me smiling with "Jackpot" because! the thrill of not knowing, and discovering a feminine wind blew and his kilt was gift wrap. I like the way you played your instrument and simmered us with laughter. Bravo!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 20, 2025 at 10:45 AM Hello Deb M. Yes she knew she hit the jack pot. Darlene/XX

Ken Rone April 13, 2023 at 8:21 PM A PODT for the ages! A man indeed of the Scots Guard, his rank; commando. Good one Deb! Best - Ken Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:44 AM Commando hehe! A little bit of fun…..Thanks so much Ken….Debx

Lisa Ricci April 13, 2023 at 3:27 AM Good Morning Deb. Hi. You have me smiling and chuckling. At first we see the beauty of the moment and scene and then the marvelous ending ending of fun and flair. This was well done and creative. It was a pleasure turning to your page this morning. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Blessings always (smile) Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:45 AM Lisa you are always so sweet and kind with your comments and l thank you for this one my friend! Happy to make you smile and chuckle…Debx

David Mchattie April 11, 2023 at 4:25 PM As a Scottish male... I see the attraction. We are hard to resist. Well penned my friend. have a great day. Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:47 AM Indeed you are David….and with that air of mystery!! Thanks….Debx

Paula Goldsmith April 11, 2023 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on your potd win. Way tooooooo funny. Have a wonderful day writing away.................. Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:49 AM Hey Paula….glad you found it funny….always good to have a giggle! Cheers….Debx

Jenna Logan April 11, 2023 at 2:33 AM I'm sorry I missed this yesterday, Deb. It gave me a giggle when I needed one. Congratulations on the potd. Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:50 AM Hi Jenna….glad l gave you a giggle when you needed one !! Thankyou….Debx

Gershon Wolf April 10, 2023 at 11:51 PM Bottoms up on your unforgettable POTD, Deb!! ~ Breezes without Sneezes, Gershon Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:47 AM Thanks Big Bad….Cheers Debx

Shirley Hawkins April 10, 2023 at 9:05 PM Congratulations on a well-deserved win of POTD. Deb. Love Shirley XX Deb M April 14, 2023 at 6:43 AM Thanks sweet friend of mine! Debx

Brandy Nicole April 10, 2023 at 5:24 PM Oh, my ! I wasn't expecting this ending. Your thoughts bring a smile and make me blush, all at the same time. Just love your sense of humor, Deb. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:36 PM Sorry to make you blush but happy to make you laugh lovely Brandy!! Haha…thankyou for such a nice comment I appreciate your kind words. Humour and laughing to me is such a major part of life. Cuddles….Debx

Fin Chuuk April 10, 2023 at 3:13 PM Lol. So funny. Big congrats to you on your POTD, Dem. Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:31 PM Always nice to have a bit humour in life and poetry soup….glad you like it Fin ….thanks for the Congrats! Debx

Susan Lawrence April 10, 2023 at 1:52 PM I am laughing now ! Love this . So wonderful with images galore !! Good thing the wind was gusting at the right moment ! Belated congratulations on POTD Deb. Hugs, Susan :) Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:15 PM Yes a big gust and there you have it Susan Wul-Lah!! Haha ( no idea how to spell that) Glad it made you laugh….Thanks….Debx

Sam Kauffman April 10, 2023 at 12:00 PM Bingo!!! A delightful "trip" into delight on the breath of the wind!!! Congratulations on your POTD Deb! Hilarious! The mystery of what is under a kilt revealed! Happy Easter season to you!!! Maybe there will be a second date?!!! Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:30 PM I'm sure she’s pretty keen for another date haha! One can only surmise what’s under those mysterious kilts and you know what l think!! Ha….Thanks so much Sam…..Debx

Jim Slaughter April 10, 2023 at 10:48 AM Suspicions confirmed! I have oft wondered just what those braugh brawny Scotsmen wear under those skirts. A good one for POTD, Deb, and I'm so glad the first date went so well. Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:16 PM Well Jim I’m only assuming!! Hehe…Thanks…Debx

Beryl Edmonds April 10, 2023 at 9:10 AM Wonderful Deb, that last line is a hoot. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle Deb M April 10, 2023 at 9:13 AM Aww thanks Belle! A wee bit naughty!! Hehe….Debx

I Am Anaya April 10, 2023 at 9:03 AM Cha-ching! Love at first sight of, a Highlander for keeps! Congratulations on your POTD Deb! Love it, just precious! Deb M April 10, 2023 at 9:12 AM Cha-ching all the way Anaya!l haha…. love your comment!! Debx

Constance La France April 10, 2023 at 8:26 AM Deb, this is delightful, I am smiling, and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ! Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:57 AM Thankyou for such a sweet comment Constance….happy it made you smile… Debx

Bill Baker April 10, 2023 at 7:23 AM Nice use of comic relief in the last lines Deb. Congratulations on your POTD! Have a great day! Hugs, Bill Deb M April 10, 2023 at 8:56 AM Thanks Bill….Debx

Terry Ireland April 10, 2023 at 7:08 AM Cheeky. Congrats on POTD Terry Ireland April 10, 2023 at 7:12 AM Me too Deb Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:09 AM I like a bit of cheeky! Thanks Terry…Debx

Unseeking Seeker April 10, 2023 at 6:14 AM Hahaha! Good one, Deb! Congratulations on POTD Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:06 AM Oh thankyou US….lovely to see you and thankyou for your comment…Debx

Linda Alice Fowler April 10, 2023 at 6:13 AM Adorable and so cute Deb. Congratulations on POTD! :) Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:07 AM Just like your little white owl peeking around the corner…love your profile picture! Glad you liked it Linda….Debx

Paulette Calasibetta April 10, 2023 at 6:09 AM Love it! Congratulations on your POTD. Paulette Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:11 AM So happy you liked it Paulette….Cheers Debx

Vijay Pandit April 10, 2023 at 5:51 AM BIG congrats on POTD, Deb. A fun read. Enjoy your special day today. Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:10 AM We need a little fun in our lives l do believe Vijay….humour is the best therapy! Ha…..Thanks Debx

Valsa George April 10, 2023 at 5:30 AM Thus she hit the jackpot ! Lovely encounter. Congratulations Deb on your POTD. Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:08 AM Thankyou kind Valsa….she sure did hit that jackpot hehe!! Debx

Malabika Ray Choudhury April 10, 2023 at 5:17 AM Congratulations on your POTD, Deb. Hilarious, My Friend. Deb M April 10, 2023 at 7:05 AM So glad you liked it Malabika….appreciated your comment…Debx

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