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Infatuated Love Limerence

Lost in your elegance, if only time could stand still to capture this memory eternally. Reflection of the moon shimmers upon tranquil waters in congregation with the stars, as we sail in composed serenity. Only the echoes of night insects and illumination of fire flies distract me from your mellifluous voice, which accompanies your radiant smile. To describe your divine beauty is ineffable as I fall into limerence. Your ethereal eyes guide me closer, all resistance is futile, intoxicated by your natural allurement. My heart feels an epiphany with the revelation of true love. As our lips touch sensually my eyes are in a state of phosphenes, now oblivious to my surroundings. In hope this feeling is not ephemeral, my whole being is enticed by the desire to remain eternally in this moment. Silent One
Originally written 7 November 2015. Edited 26 May 2018 Limerence (also infatuated love) is a state of mind which results from a romantic attraction to another person typically including compulsive thoughts and fantasies and a desire to form or maintain a relationship and have one's feelings reciprocated.
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 1:40 AM
WoW! Another stunning work of poetic art, SO! LOVE the Infinity loop ending: As it was in the beginning, thus it remains the same in joy said ending. This POTD jewel rocks w/Soul. Love and more love always.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 20, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Btw ... thanks for the educated enlightenment. New words added to the cranial catalog is always repository cool. Love and best bud hugs always.
Chircop Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Such a beautiful vocabulary. .So many romantic words used Silent One..'Your ethereal eyes guide me closer'...Love this line...'In hope this feeling is not ephemeral'..Another exceptionally line..So mellifluously beautiful.Write us another... :)
Lauriere Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 8:22 PM
The Je ne sais quoi artistic conception created in this verse ensconces the most sensuous imagery with which I can instantly become one without as much as the least empathy. Such esemplastic snugness brings me a million miles away from bulks of sulks brought by that jerk squatting the oval office.
Juman Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 1:19 AM
Love the word usage my love had to yank out my dictionary
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:56 PM
The strong feelings of longing and desire can be felt throughout the whole poem, S-1. Who knows...one of these days love could be reciprocated! Regards // paul
Callus Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 3:57 PM
...by the way...belated congrats on p.o.t.d.
Williams Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 5:13 AM
Absolutely mind blowing Si, what a beautiful write. Congratulations on POTD....Maria
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Hello Silent One, you have done a great job s poeson this poem. You wrote this poem as Free Verse, I read it as romantic. I have enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Sharma Avatar
June 2, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Utterly romantic! Its always a delight to read your romantic writes!
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 1:53 PM
This is lovely Silent. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! : )
Salehi Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 12:42 AM
Simply beautiful...
Ligon Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 9:17 PM
I'm swept away by this lovely write.
Manassian Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 9:52 AM
An island beauty...with mesmerizing eyes. Quite the write, Silent One. Infatuation for such a beauty is understandable.
Hamilton Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 9:50 AM
I remember this one well, it was one of your most popular here on the site...remains a top write in my book!
S     Avatar
May 30, 2018 at 5:33 AM
Very beautiful poetry Silent One. You've captured a most certainly ephemeral feeling with amazing description with your masterfully crafted words. Congratulations on POTD!
Ashley Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Every line is simply so splendid and poetic in conveying the sensuous and high flying feelings of infatuation, Silent One. Your last line is such a beautiful and dramatic way to end your romantic poem. Belated congratulations on POTD honors! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rose  Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Your heart is in harmony with your words I can tell, great poetry Silent One. Thanks for sharing
Sathasivam Avatar
May 29, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Excellent. Beautifully said. Congrats on POTD. Thanks for sharing it.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Very nice, Silent! Congrats on POTD!
George   Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:18 PM
a beautiful soft rendering of a very pure and beautiful love. Thank you for sharing my poetic friend. Elaine
Breidenthal Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 3:00 PM
Very lovely verse, SO. I really like the line, "as we sail in composed serenity.." Well done. Didn't know that word - now I do (: Always, Laura
Dietrich Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Oh I did not know the word limerence though I think someone had us use it in a contest once. My memory is too short. Elegant writing. I see this got POTD. Congrats to you, Silent One.
Neels Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Love the way you captured the feeling SO. Sorry for my delay in responding on here. Always enjoy reading your musings ;)
Pett Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Please accept my belated congratulations on POTD S.O, with this beautifully written poem, a joy to read. :))
Hoffman Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 7:40 AM
An awesome romantic poem depicting what its like to be so attracted to someone that when your alone with them your in a heavenly euphoric state of mind oblivious to your surroundings...Belated congrats on a well deserved POTD Silent One!~Che :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 28, 2018 at 5:36 AM
you described the essence of infatuation solidly, S.O... congrats on your well-deserved POTD!... huggs
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