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If I Could See Your Face

If I could see your face once more look in those eyes that I adore my heart would melt with love inside I'd never leave you til I died. For when we kissed, my heart would soar if I could see your face once more and then we'd run beside the sea down moonlit paths, just you and me. In merry mirth we'd laugh and sing two lovebirds, what a wondrous thing if I could see your face once more I'd hold you close beside the shore. For in my dreams I've heard you say that you would never go away now you are gone, my heart implores If I could see your face once more. Written on 1/26/16

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Rev. Dr. Samuel Mack Oms Dd

Date: 11/21/2016 8:21:00 AM

Your poem have the imigre of a move you watch to gain a sence of who you are and may be so vivied and clear I thank you for the look at you wonderful moves {words} and know I that God for you and your wonderful words God's blessings Sam

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2016 9:34:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, Reverend Mack! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2016 1:18:00 PM

It's the 2nd winning Quatern I've come across in this contest, Laura. It is sad and romantic, beautiful, and it flows effortlessly. Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:32:00 PM

Thank you, Paul :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/21/2016 9:45:00 AM

Such a lovely Quatern, Laura. Very emotional and full of love. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Sandra :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/21/2016 9:26:00 AM

Wonderful write Laura...Congrats on your win!

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph :)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 9/21/2016 8:55:00 AM

Beautiful, Laura! Congratulations! ...Fran

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Francis :)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/21/2016 7:40:00 AM

Laura-beautiful and romantic...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:30:00 PM

Thank you, Laura Loo :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/7/2016 2:00:00 PM

Congratulations, Laura, super meter, wonderful rhyme. Sad remembrance but hopeful.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 9:22:00 AM

yeah...ok

Lin Lane

Date: 2/7/2016 6:31:00 AM

Very lovely, Laura.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Lin :)

Elaine George

Date: 2/7/2016 5:52:00 AM

A beautiful heartfelt Quatern, dear Laura. Many congrats on your win. Elaine

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:05:00 AM

Thank you, Elaine :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/7/2016 4:22:00 AM

NICE WIN.............................. PD

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:04:00 AM

Thanks Linda :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/6/2016 7:08:00 PM

this one was lovely, Laura. A small suggestion. You are using conditional voice in most of the poem, so verse two needed to use kissed and would for your verbs. I think the poem would be quite improved if you made that change! Congrats on my winners' list.

Laura Leiser
Date: 2/6/2016 10:06:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea! You're right, of course!. I'll change the tense as soon as I am able. Thanks for placing me in your contest :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/28/2016 1:50:00 PM

Beautiful pen Laura! Beautifully painted romantic piece:))A 7!Thank you so kindly for your visit!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you!:) D.

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2016 2:30:00 PM

Thank you, sweet Dorian! I appreciate your rating and very kind comments :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/28/2016 1:21:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Very romantically written lines..It was interesting with the repeat lines within..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2016 2:29:00 PM

Thanks Sara! I appreciate your kind comments :)

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/27/2016 9:51:00 AM

if I could see your face once more I would explore your heart to the core because your eyes are what I adore making your smile's maintenance my only chore because as a man, I respect and Love all that woman is for....this is Beautiful laura....;)

Laura Leiser
Date: 1/27/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Eric.