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If I Could See Your Face

If I could see your face once more
look in those eyes that I adore
my heart would melt with love inside
I'd never leave you til I died.

For when we kissed, my heart would soar
if I could see your face once more
and then we'd run beside the sea
down moonlit paths, just you and me.

In merry mirth we'd laugh and sing
two lovebirds, what a wondrous thing
if I could see your face once more
I'd hold you close beside the shore.

For in my dreams I've heard you say
that you would never go away
but you are gone, my heart implores
If I could see your face once more.










Written on 1/26/16

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/21/2016 8:21:00 AM
Your poem have the imigre of a move you watch to gain a sence of who you are and may be so vivied and clear I thank you for the look at you wonderful moves {words} and know I that God for you and your wonderful words God's blessings Sam
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Laura Leiser
Date: 11/21/2016 9:34:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Reverend Mack! I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem :)
Date: 9/21/2016 1:18:00 PM
It's the 2nd winning Quatern I've come across in this contest, Laura. It is sad and romantic, beautiful, and it flows effortlessly. Congratulations!! Regards // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:32:00 PM
Thank you, Paul :)
Date: 9/21/2016 9:45:00 AM
Such a lovely Quatern, Laura. Very emotional and full of love. Congratulations on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra :)
Date: 9/21/2016 9:26:00 AM
Wonderful write Laura...Congrats on your win!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph :)
Date: 9/21/2016 8:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Laura! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:31:00 PM
Thank you, Francis :)
Date: 9/21/2016 7:40:00 AM
Laura-beautiful and romantic...congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 9/21/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thank you, Laura Loo :)
Date: 2/7/2016 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations, Laura, super meter, wonderful rhyme. Sad remembrance but hopeful.
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Date: 2/7/2016 9:22:00 AM
yeah...ok
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Date: 2/7/2016 6:31:00 AM
Very lovely, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Lin :)
Date: 2/7/2016 5:52:00 AM
A beautiful heartfelt Quatern, dear Laura. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine :)
Date: 2/7/2016 4:22:00 AM
NICE WIN.............................. PD
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/7/2016 9:04:00 AM
Thanks Linda :)
Date: 2/6/2016 7:08:00 PM
this one was lovely, Laura. A small suggestion. You are using conditional voice in most of the poem, so verse two needed to use kissed and would for your verbs. I think the poem would be quite improved if you made that change! Congrats on my winners' list.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/6/2016 10:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! You're right, of course!. I'll change the tense as soon as I am able. Thanks for placing me in your contest :)
Date: 1/28/2016 1:50:00 PM
Beautiful pen Laura! Beautifully painted romantic piece:))A 7!Thank you so kindly for your visit!Wishing you a very lovely weekend! In his light God bless you!:) D.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2016 2:30:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Dorian! I appreciate your rating and very kind comments :)
Date: 1/28/2016 1:21:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Very romantically written lines..It was interesting with the repeat lines within..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/28/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Sara! I appreciate your kind comments :)
Date: 1/27/2016 9:51:00 AM
if I could see your face once more I would explore your heart to the core because your eyes are what I adore making your smile's maintenance my only chore because as a man, I respect and Love all that woman is for....this is Beautiful laura....;)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/27/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Eric.
Date: 1/27/2016 1:49:00 AM
A wonderful write, albeit sad, Laura. Enjoyed reading this. T.J
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/27/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thank you, Teppo. I'm glad you enjoyed it:)