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Ruby red throated, black chinned birds are here They fly in my porch and look at the door Inviting me,"Take your camera, we are to be here Until the winter cold blows, at least until winter". Buzzes busily, attracted by red nectar Wings going a hundred miles an hour Delicate flowers Fushia a succulent dinner Satin feathers of emerald green you’ve ever. Flitting from place to place landing never Never take much space, wings fluttering faster Darting to and fro from flower to flower It’s a joy to watch their flight with chitter chatter. =================================== Sixth place Contest: Bird's

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Date: 7/4/2010 1:12:00 PM
humming birds are just wonderful tiny creatures do you know there are ones the size of bees! loved your poem and congrats
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Date: 6/29/2010 6:28:00 PM
Hi, Dr, Ram, I think that Constance will like this as you worked in the varied colors effortlessly. I like that last verse. I hope this finds you well. Best to you. Regards, Gerard.
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your win: )
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Date: 6/28/2010 9:49:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. on your win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Bird's". Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2010 11:08:00 PM
Hey, you did it with this charming poem. YOu scored in top ten! YOu chose the most popular bird I think! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:44:00 PM
Liked this one the first time I read it. Congratulations on another winning poem. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 6/26/2010 1:50:00 PM
A very attactive site, i find the humming birds a very pleasant to bird to watch. I am so drawn to the little hummers, scine i captured on on my 15 b-day.. It was a great gift.. Sadly it died because i placed it in a box...Enjoyed your poem DR. Ram....
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Date: 6/26/2010 11:53:00 AM
Congrat's on a well deserved win!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/26/2010 9:12:00 AM
They are truly amazing and so is your poem. Copngratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/26/2010 7:45:00 AM
Lovely poem on hummingbirds, Dr. Ram! They are so gorgeous!!! Saw them in Chile flyiung to a balcony for floral nectar. And congrats on your 6th place in Constance's contest...Thank you also for your kind comments and have a nice Sunday!...Gert
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Date: 6/26/2010 4:43:00 AM
Hummingbirds are just gorgeous Dr.Ram and your words grace them big style. Many congratulations on your win in Constance's lovely contest. Have a wonderful weekend >> James
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Date: 6/25/2010 10:38:00 PM
Congratulations, Dr, on 6th place, in my Bird Contest, with this lovely poem on the hummingbird...Love Constance
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:54:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. You have me smiling with your last line. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen
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Date: 6/25/2010 2:05:00 PM
These ever fluttering birds are a wonder to watch and your poem is such a delight to read, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in the "Birds" contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/25/2010 8:47:00 AM
Delightful picture of the hummingbird, Dr.Ram. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your "iris" in my blog. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 6/25/2010 6:16:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest with your Hummingbird poem Dr. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 8:53:00 PM
Weel done Dr Mehta. I hope humming bird will not be in danger as bumble bee or any kind of bee. It will be the end of earth. Glad to see that humming birh enjoy our "miracle fertilizer". Good luck in your endovours making the word the best for our children...
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Date: 6/24/2010 7:56:00 PM
One of my favorites..they are glorious..like the "chitter-chatter"..BG
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