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I am the invisible girl behind the words, Known in every land for my bleeding ink; Behind self-imposed walls I find a place to think, Each sad brick is sorrow and betrayal. Within my strong walls my poems are free birds, Invisible- I surround myself with beauty; Music playing in the background, oh so moody, My writing desk ever loyal, Lovely, although invisible my portrayal. I dine with a view of flowers swaying, On a shady porch my cats are sleeping; Books on many shelves are my friends truly. And art on walls are my dearest companions, I am invisible- this is not delusions. So invisible- Afraid to leave my haven. I am a red rose hidden, You must be willing, To peel back each soft petal, To reveal this girl of words. _______________________________ April 24, 2016 Poetry/Canzone/Choka/Hello, I'm Invisible Copyright Protected, ID 16-782-226-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Inspiration - Image #1 Entered in the contest, Being Invisible sponsor, Skat Fourth Place

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Date: 4/28/2016 1:42:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your win with this sublime write: "Known in every land for my bleeding ink; Behind self-imposed walls I find a place to think" is inspired. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 4/28/2016 3:42:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats ~~!
Date: 4/28/2016 12:49:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2016 7:35:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats, awesome and love ~\~
Date: 4/27/2016 8:37:00 AM
Beautiful indeed!
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Date: 4/27/2016 7:04:00 PM
Sara, thanks for the beautiful !
Date: 4/26/2016 8:33:00 PM
Yes walls. So interesting are you. Thank you for the insight, and although you are hidden away, we know you are there. Your work is such a pleasure to read. May tons and tons of joy be your burden in the future, for you delight me and many others.
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:37:00 PM
Duke, thanks for the visit and the nice comment and compliment ~
Date: 4/26/2016 5:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win! Well done girl !
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Date: 4/26/2016 6:16:00 PM
MR, thanks so much for the congrats and compliment !
Date: 4/26/2016 1:05:00 PM
Congrats on the win Wings...well deserved my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:36:00 PM
Winged, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 4/26/2016 12:51:00 PM
Well done, I have enjoyed this because I have been invisible too. hug x
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:35:00 PM
Casarah, thanks for the compliment and the hugs, appreciate !
Date: 4/26/2016 10:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. A beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:33:00 PM
Bl, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful and the 7 and love !
Date: 4/26/2016 10:29:00 AM
I am back to congratulate you, Broken Wings, on your fine win in this first Premiere Contest! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:33:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for the congrats, and the hugs !
Date: 4/26/2016 9:37:00 AM
Re-visiting your wonderful poem BW.
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:32:00 PM
James, oh thank you for that and the wonderful ~
Date: 4/26/2016 9:10:00 AM
Back again to congratulate on your win:)
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:32:00 PM
Jo, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 4/26/2016 8:45:00 AM
Yay, you made it. I'm back to congratulate you, Constancia. Job well done!
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:31:00 PM
Moon, thanks so much for the congrats !
Date: 4/26/2016 8:30:00 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. blog name--- >"My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:30:00 PM
Skat, thanks for a great contest and for my wonderful placement, I am honored ~
Date: 4/26/2016 8:18:00 AM
Constance, congrats on your win with this lovely poem. Janice
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:30:00 PM
Janice, thanks for the congrats and the lovely !
Date: 4/26/2016 7:58:00 AM
- A beautiful write, B.W. - We all have something we fear - Good luck in contest - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:29:00 PM
Sunshine, thanks so much for the beautiful and hugs !
Date: 4/26/2016 12:22:00 AM
this is simply fantastic, you multi talented girl. invisible to me... NOT!!!
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:28:00 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for the fantastic !
Date: 4/26/2016 12:00:00 AM
So well Constance. I am sure this one will go far. Loved it. Joyce.
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:27:00 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting and the lovely comment !
Date: 4/25/2016 10:31:00 PM
Love the 'bleeding ink' line and some other really nice imagery there, very good!
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:27:00 PM
Daniel, thanks so much !
Date: 4/25/2016 8:09:00 PM
Broken this this is unique and beautiful as always... GL in the contest.....
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:26:00 PM
Anand, thanks for that wonderful comment, appreciate !
Date: 4/25/2016 6:57:00 PM
A beautiful form with such beautiful, deep images about your 'invisible' self, Broken Wings. However, we do know the lovely, strong and creative poet that sits behind your "writing desk ever loyal" and your peeled- back rose petals reveal that. Wonderful poem! 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/26/2016 3:25:00 PM
Sandra, thanks for the lovely comment, the 7 and the hugs !
Date: 4/25/2016 1:38:00 PM
I really enjoyed this BW. I love the line, "My writing desk ever loyal."
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Date: 4/25/2016 5:32:00 PM
James, thanks for reading my poem, appreciate
Date: 4/25/2016 9:12:00 AM
Wow, I must have composed this as creatively as yours! Great material for a contest. ;) GL
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:35:00 AM
Moon, thanks for the compliment
Date: 4/25/2016 7:05:00 AM
You are surely visible very much in this beautiful heart touching poem:) greatly expressed:)
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:11:00 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment
Date: 4/25/2016 3:57:00 AM
Beautiful write. Whatever you write is heartfelt, beautiful and deep.
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:40:00 AM
Nandita, thanks so much for the compliment
Date: 4/24/2016 11:28:00 PM
Well that's beyond intellects that you could be construed Broken.. masterful poetry.. best wishes..
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Date: 4/25/2016 9:43:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the compliments
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