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Hello, I'M Invisible


I am the invisible girl behind the words,
Known in every land for my bleeding ink;
Behind self-imposed walls I find a place to think,
Each sad brick is sorrow and betrayal.
Within my strong walls my poems are free birds,
Invisible- I surround myself with beauty;
Music playing in the background, oh so moody,
My writing desk ever loyal,
Lovely, although invisible my portrayal.
I dine with a view of flowers swaying,
On a shady porch my cats are sleeping;
Books on many shelves are my friends truly.
And art on walls are my dearest companions,
I am invisible- this is not delusions.

So invisible-
Afraid to leave my haven.
I am a red rose hidden,
You must be willing,
To peel back each soft petal,
To reveal this girl of words.

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April 24, 2016

Poetry/Canzone/Choka/Hello, I'm Invisible
Copyright Protected, ID 16-782-226-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspiration - Image #1

Entered in the contest, Being Invisible
sponsor, Skat

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mcclain Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 1:42 PM
Hi Broken Wings, Congrats on your win with this sublime write: "Known in every land for my bleeding ink; Behind self-imposed walls I find a place to think" is inspired. Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats ~~!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:49 AM
Broken, Congrats on your awesome Being Invisible win...Love LINDA
La France Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats, awesome and love ~\~
Chansarkar Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Beautiful indeed!
La France Avatar
April 27, 2016 at 7:04 PM
Sara, thanks for the beautiful !
Beaufort Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:33 PM
Yes walls. So interesting are you. Thank you for the insight, and although you are hidden away, we know you are there. Your work is such a pleasure to read. May tons and tons of joy be your burden in the future, for you delight me and many others.
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Duke, thanks for the visit and the nice comment and compliment ~
Raina Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Congrats on your win! Well done girl !
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 6:16 PM
MR, thanks so much for the congrats and compliment !
Warrior Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Congrats on the win Wings...well deserved my friend...god bless...^WW^
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Winged, thanks so much for the congrats !
Nance Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:51 PM
Well done, I have enjoyed this because I have been invisible too. hug x
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Casarah, thanks for the compliment and the hugs, appreciate !
Devnath  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. A beautiful 7. Loved always, bl
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Bl, thanks for the congrats and the beautiful and the 7 and love !
Haight Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 10:29 AM
I am back to congratulate you, Broken Wings, on your fine win in this first Premiere Contest! Well done! Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:33 PM
Sandra, thank you for the congrats, and the hugs !
Inman Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:37 AM
Re-visiting your wonderful poem BW.
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:32 PM
James, oh thank you for that and the wonderful ~
Daniel Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Back again to congratulate on your win:)
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Jo, thanks so much for the congrats !
Flower Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:45 AM
Yay, you made it. I'm back to congratulate you, Constancia. Job well done!
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:31 PM
Moon, thanks so much for the congrats !
A  Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Broken, Congratulations on your Invisible win. I thank you for the entry. I have a blog up, describing the experience of running my first premiere contest. blog name--- >"My first experience was not as easy ... :( DEPRESSION" drop by and enjoy the few I did place. Forever **SKAT**
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Skat, thanks for a great contest and for my wonderful placement, I am honored ~
Canerdy Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 8:18 AM
Constance, congrats on your win with this lovely poem. Janice
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Janice, thanks for the congrats and the lovely !
Andresen Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 7:58 AM
- A beautiful write, B.W. - We all have something we fear - Good luck in contest - hugs // Sun :)
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Sunshine, thanks so much for the beautiful and hugs !
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:22 AM
this is simply fantastic, you multi talented girl. invisible to me... NOT!!!
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for the fantastic !
Johnson Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So well Constance. I am sure this one will go far. Loved it. Joyce.
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Joyce, thanks for visiting and the lovely comment !
Davies Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Love the 'bleeding ink' line and some other really nice imagery there, very good!
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:27 PM
Daniel, thanks so much !
Parmale Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Broken this this is unique and beautiful as always... GL in the contest.....
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:26 PM
Anand, thanks for that wonderful comment, appreciate !
Haight Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 6:57 PM
A beautiful form with such beautiful, deep images about your 'invisible' self, Broken Wings. However, we do know the lovely, strong and creative poet that sits behind your "writing desk ever loyal" and your peeled- back rose petals reveal that. Wonderful poem! 7, Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
April 26, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Sandra, thanks for the lovely comment, the 7 and the hugs !
Inman Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 1:38 PM
I really enjoyed this BW. I love the line, "My writing desk ever loyal."
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 5:32 PM
James, thanks for reading my poem, appreciate
Flower Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:12 AM
Wow, I must have composed this as creatively as yours! Great material for a contest. ;) GL
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Moon, thanks for the compliment
Daniel Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 7:05 AM
You are surely visible very much in this beautiful heart touching poem:) greatly expressed:)
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:11 AM
Jo, thank you so much for the compliment
Das Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 3:57 AM
Beautiful write. Whatever you write is heartfelt, beautiful and deep.
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:40 AM
Nandita, thanks so much for the compliment
A. Sharma Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 11:28 PM
Well that's beyond intellects that you could be construed Broken.. masterful poetry.. best wishes..
La France Avatar
April 25, 2016 at 9:43 AM
Upma, thanks for the compliments
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