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Halloween Moon - For Contest

HALLOWEEN MOON– for contest It hung in Autumn’s eerie space cold light of hallowed doom across its blank unfeeling face a witch upon a broom. 10/10/2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2015 5:33:00 PM

congrats for the big win in this contest!

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/22/2015 8:54:00 PM

Congrats on a great win. A7

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/22/2015 12:32:00 PM

Great imagery. Congrats on the win.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/21/2015 10:01:00 PM

I love this one! Congrats...Im going to fav this one. BG

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:37:00 AM

glad you liked it Barbara

Lu Loo

Date: 10/21/2015 10:09:00 AM

Great write! Congrats! -LU

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:37:00 AM

Thank you Laura for stopping by to read and comment

James Inman

Date: 10/21/2015 7:13:00 AM

Beautiful flow, nice rhyme. Great tone, John.

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:35:00 AM

three for three.....thanks James.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/21/2015 6:35:00 AM

I love your entry John. Congratulations on your top win!

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Connie, always nice to hear from you.

Arlene Smith

Date: 10/21/2015 5:52:00 AM

Congrats on a great win!!.. Particularly love the first line...

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Arlene...that line came as i looked out the window at the moon....just hanging there.....

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/21/2015 3:34:00 AM

Well done John...great write...Seren

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:33:00 AM

Thank you Seren

Michael Tor

Date: 10/21/2015 3:34:00 AM

John excellent win!!!

John Lawless
Date: 10/22/2015 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Michael for stopping by to comment

Julia Ward

Date: 10/21/2015 12:36:00 AM

I could envisage her... Congrats. on your win, John. Julia, xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/20/2015 10:56:00 PM

Congrats on ur awesome win with this superb write John!

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:59:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Sharma your comment are always appreciated

Balveen Cheema

Date: 10/20/2015 10:23:00 PM

Congrats on your win, John!

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:59:00 PM

Thanks for stopping to read and comment Balveen

Viv Wigley

Date: 10/20/2015 10:22:00 PM

A deservedly high numero uno, John, congratulations. regards, Viv

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:58:00 PM

Thanks for popping by Viv...

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/20/2015 10:21:00 PM

Nice write, John. I don't believe anyone else mentioned the witch. Congrats!

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:43:00 PM

..."witches hats, coal black cats, broomstick riders, mice and rats" a line for an old Halloween song we sang in school...gotta have a witch in there....

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2015 9:23:00 PM

John, congratulations on your win thank you for participating in my contest. Eve

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:16:00 PM

My pleasure Eve. Thanks for putting in the effort necessary to manage a contest.....not an easy task.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/20/2015 8:35:00 PM

Great poem! Congratulations Janice

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:15:00 PM

Thanks Janice for reading and commenting

Jan Allison

Date: 10/20/2015 5:29:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:14:00 PM

Jan your continued support is soooo much appreciated.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/20/2015 4:44:00 PM

Love your 'Halloween Moon' poem, John. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:14:00 PM

Nice to hear from you Sandra, thanks for checking in

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2015 4:09:00 PM

Awesome entry! It would be in my top ten from all the ones I have seen lately!

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:13:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I'm about three laps behind in my responses.

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/14/2015 8:38:00 PM

EEeee!! You have the spirit for the season, I can see ! PS..a big thank you, John, for the HM in your contest! (does that stand for Halloween Moon)??? Or Halloween mischief?

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:12:00 PM

I think the HM stand for Holy Mackerel!! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment.

Lin Lane

Date: 10/10/2015 5:03:00 PM

You certainly painted a picture. Well done, John. ~ Lin ~

John Lawless
Date: 10/20/2015 10:11:00 PM

Thanks Lin, I'm a little behind in my responses. appreciate your reading and commenting.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/10/2015 4:37:00 PM

lovely imagery John good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx