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Good Morning, Starshine

Good Morning, Starshine “Good morning, Starshine,” each dawn he would greet As from feather pillows our eyes would meet Perhaps you can imagine my surprise When he was gone when I opened my eyes Did he forget our anniversary? Just one year had passed since he’d married me But as my eyes opened wider that day I found rose petals upon the bed lay He’d heard me rising, but he called, “Get back in!” Bacon’s scent from the kitchen wafted in In he entered with breakfast on a tray He retrieved the remote and then pressed “play” I started to eat, beside me he lay To watch a film of our wedding day When I picked up the tea cup, what a shock There sat a ring with a large diamond rock Gems were too costly when we got engaged But seeing this now made my passions rage Gently my husband always embraced me But never more than on our first anniversary * For Francine’s “Good Morning” contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2013 7:26:00 AM
Good Morning Starshine.....how are you :)
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:35:00 PM
Great write! This really brings me back to my husband and I's first, and also renews the wonderful feeling of being in love. Thank you for that :) Virginia
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Date: 1/27/2011 2:49:00 PM
As predicted, a winner of course! Love, Dave
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:24:00 AM
again I find your name in the winners list...well done, you excellent writer....congratulations...Syd
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:10:00 AM
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Date: 1/23/2011 2:40:00 PM
I knew this was a winner! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:46:00 AM
Awwh! This is beautiful, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest! These are precious memories. Thanks for sharing bring smiles to hearts. Love, Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:28:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Francine's contest. What a lovely first anniversary. Have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 1/21/2011 5:37:00 AM
Hi Carolyn - Congratulations on your BIG win in Francine's contest. This was stunning to read. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 3:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:44:00 AM
wonderful memories, wish all the husbands were like that. Congratulations on a fine piece. Déirdre
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Date: 1/20/2011 10:24:00 PM
truly stunned by this carolyn! great way to go with loving morns! my best CHEERS to your for the high win! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 1/20/2011 8:39:00 PM
beautiful, (couldn't get Oliver singing "Good morning, Starshine " out of my head for 2 days) congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Carolyn and thank you for your support
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Date: 1/20/2011 7:56:00 PM
This is so touching and a great example of true love. many congratulations for this super win.
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Date: 1/20/2011 5:43:00 PM
Carolyn,a truly wonderful poem.Your other half must think the world of you.Truly magical piece of poetry.WM.
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Date: 1/20/2011 4:51:00 PM
What a wonderful poem of love, memory, and more than just a Good Morning....this is a song! Lovely work, Carolyn ! :) Lovely as yourself!!
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:51:00 PM
How lovely Carolyn and I hope this is a true memory. Congratulations on your win with it. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:25:00 PM
Oh, this is so special..I missed it before. Congrats my dear. BG
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Date: 1/20/2011 3:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your success, Carolyn!
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Date: 1/20/2011 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn on 3rd place with this charming poem that reads like a slice of life~~
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Date: 1/17/2011 2:11:00 AM
A dream of a poem, and ideals that would suit many a lady! Love this one Carolyn, good luck for the contest! Thanks for your supportive words as ever! x
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Date: 1/15/2011 1:50:00 PM
such a wonderful memory! WOW Light 7 Love
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:59:00 AM
The best of the best Carolyn. This contest caused me to think of the song "Good Morning America, how are you?' Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/15/2011 9:22:00 AM
Good one about those days of young love and romance..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the honorable contest..Reads like your husband was a felicitator of happiness..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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