Good Morning, Starshine

Good Morning, Starshine

“Good morning, Starshine,” each dawn he would greet
As from feather pillows our eyes would meet

Perhaps you can imagine my surprise
When he was gone when I opened my eyes

Did he forget our anniversary?
Just one year had passed since he’d married me

But as my eyes opened wider that day
I found rose petals upon the bed lay

He’d heard me rising, but he called, “Get back in!”
Bacon’s scent from the kitchen wafted in

In he entered with breakfast on a tray
He retrieved the remote and then pressed “play”

I started to eat, beside me he lay
To watch a film of our wedding day

When I picked up the tea cup, what a shock
There sat a ring with a large diamond rock

Gems were too costly when we got engaged
But seeing this now made my passions rage

Gently my husband always embraced me
But never more than on our first anniversary



* For Francine’s “Good Morning” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Poet Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 7:26 AM
Good Morning Starshine.....how are you :)
Frayer Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Great write! This really brings me back to my husband and I's first, and also renews the wonderful feeling of being in love. Thank you for that :) Virginia
Austin Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 2:49 PM
As predicted, a winner of course! Love, Dave
Beck Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 11:24 AM
again I find your name in the winners list...well done, you excellent writer....congratulations...Syd
Brown Avatar
January 24, 2011 at 11:10 AM
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Guzzi Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 2:40 PM
I knew this was a winner! Congrad's Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on your win with this fine work..Sara
Haick Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:46 AM
Awwh! This is beautiful, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win in the "Good Morning" Contest! These are precious memories. Thanks for sharing bring smiles to hearts. Love, Annalise
Fraser Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Francine's contest. What a lovely first anniversary. Have a lovely weekend....:)
Calhoun Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 5:37 AM
Hi Carolyn - Congratulations on your BIG win in Francine's contest. This was stunning to read. Best wishes, KC
Brown Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 3:56 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in the "Good Morning" contest by Francine Roberts. Love, Carol
Omaidin Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 1:44 AM
wonderful memories, wish all the husbands were like that. Congratulations on a fine piece. Déirdre
Onclaud Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 10:24 PM
truly stunned by this carolyn! great way to go with loving morns! my best CHEERS to your for the high win! :) hugggs, nette
Roberts Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 8:39 PM
beautiful, (couldn't get Oliver singing "Good morning, Starshine " out of my head for 2 days) congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest Carolyn and thank you for your support
Mannan Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 7:56 PM
This is so touching and a great example of true love. many congratulations for this super win.
Willis Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 5:43 PM
Carolyn,a truly wonderful poem.Your other half must think the world of you.Truly magical piece of poetry.WM.
Richards Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 4:51 PM
What a wonderful poem of love, memory, and more than just a Good Morning....this is a song! Lovely work, Carolyn ! :) Lovely as yourself!!
Johnson Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:51 PM
How lovely Carolyn and I hope this is a true memory. Congratulations on your win with it. Love, Joyce
Gorelick Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:25 PM
Oh, this is so special..I missed it before. Congrats my dear. BG
Locksley Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 3:02 PM
Congratulations on your success, Carolyn!
La France Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 2:59 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn on 3rd place with this charming poem that reads like a slice of life~~
Docherty Avatar
January 17, 2011 at 2:11 AM
A dream of a poem, and ideals that would suit many a lady! Love this one Carolyn, good luck for the contest! Thanks for your supportive words as ever! x
Guzzi Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 1:50 PM
such a wonderful memory! WOW Light 7 Love
Freeman Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 9:59 AM
The best of the best Carolyn. This contest caused me to think of the song "Good Morning America, how are you?' Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
January 15, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Good one about those days of young love and romance..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck in the honorable contest..Reads like your husband was a felicitator of happiness..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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