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Genesis of the Universe

A great explosion Fragments soar outward Ever expanding From a central point The Master’s great plan Celestial orbs Meteors hurl Through vast darkness All in motion Genesis Planets, moons Stars and suns Black holes Unknowns Veils * For Rick's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations, my friend, on your placement in the top ten. Worthy of a honor. Agape, Moses

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/20/2010 4:16:00 PM

Carolyn, Congratulations on your win with this difficult form. Blessings, Connie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2010 2:22:00 PM

Hard form!enjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:48:00 PM

Congratulations on this win in the contest, Carolyn

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 8:56:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations in your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:43:00 AM

congrats on your win with this wonderful poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/16/2010 10:17:00 PM

Amazing Imagery. Well deserved win Many congratulations dear Carolyn.

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 8:44:00 PM

Congrats on this winning poem Carolyn. Second verse was especially visual to me. good write. Charles

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2010 8:35:00 PM

excellent Carolyn, congrats on this winning enty. Harry

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:15:00 PM

Congratulations on 4th place~~

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/16/2010 4:40:00 PM

so much mystery, an opening to the theory and truth behind those stars, and black holes. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/16/2010 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win, Carolyn!! Enjoy your win, girl! Love, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:29:00 PM

LNC...good for you..your light shining once more. BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 1:28:00 PM

Carolyn, congratulations on your awesome win in Rick's contest with this gem. Extremely happy for you love Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:18:00 PM

Congratulation's Carolyn on your fine win in Rick's contest, most deserved to be on the podium. One has to admire the variation of topics you write about >> James ;) xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/16/2010 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your 4th place win, Carolyn. Soup mail

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/16/2010 12:28:00 PM

Congratulations, Carolyn, on your creative way of including science and the divine, in this wonderful poem! ~ Love, Carrie

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/10/2010 3:49:00 PM

Well written, Carolyn! If we could only once explore a second earth, that would be great!! Best of luck for Rick's contest and have a great weekend!...Love, Gert

Daver Austin

Date: 9/9/2010 2:18:00 PM

Interesting - "The Master's great plan." I'm wondering if there was a plan or if the whole thing, the whole "Big Bang" isn't an ongoing experiment. Whatever. Your poem is gripping. Love, Dave

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/9/2010 4:14:00 AM

great write!

James Fraser

Date: 9/8/2010 3:46:00 PM

Wonderful entry for Rick's contest Carolyn. Good luck in the contest >> James

John Freeman

Date: 9/8/2010 3:23:00 AM

Cool Hexaverse! Dear Friend. Good morning. I haven't one yet. Maybe later. Your contest seems to be coming along well. Mine seems to have stalled lacking only 4 entries. smile. Agape, Moses

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/7/2010 9:44:00 PM

a new form for me is this Carolyn, good luck in the contest, this is up with your very best, awesome. Harry