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Our Felicity knows no rest and was Often admonished by her Head Nurse. It happened one day she was out for an errand When a small boy was admitted to emergency. With little thought she hurried to help, forgetting she had no gloves on, nor a face mask. The boy was very sick and required great care. The Head Nurse realized something was going to happen. Both were put in isolation separately. Felicity's First symptom was a high fever. Blood samples were taken And examined with urgency. A deadly bug had attacked them. Immediately she was put on two drips, one for dehydration And one to combat the bugs. It would be a slow recovery. No one was allowed near her and she became weak. In Malta, we say illness enters in tonnes and leaves in pounds. So was it with Felicity. Gone was her smile, her singing, And she became quite thin. Her father became a wreck. But God has His ways, and slowly she began to recover. Finally, she was discharged but with orders from the Head Nurse. You are not to come to work before my consent, You will not lose your job. But you must eat and rest. Her parents were at her beck and call. He bought her a comfy sofa, a large television, And a blue comfortable Outdoor Hammock Chair Hang Swing Erected under a large oak tree that was blessed with a breeze. Soon but slowly she regained her smile, her good-looking figure And even ventured for short walks along the winding river. She learned to appreciate her birds’ singing and the lovely blooms. She began to frequent gardens and admire the various flowers. Finally, after some months she was allowed to resume her work. The Head nurse was adamant. Morning shifts only for a while, With fixed hours. No extra work and no emergency visits. She still attended church but changed her tune to God will find a way. Blessed be God. This poem is fiction but taken from my experience with life in a hospital.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/29/2023 10:44:00 PM
Wonderful narrative again:)
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Date: 6/29/2023 12:47:00 AM
Good read seems very real and poetic. between Covid and other health issues I hope people appreciate the care and time so many nurses give to everyone.
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Date: 6/28/2023 9:46:00 PM
Your beautiful tale of devotion captures the heart, Victor. I'm so glad the ending was a happy one. A wonderful poem. :)
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Date: 6/28/2023 2:56:00 PM
An amazing poem Victor, my dear daughter-in-law is a nurse, and her heart is in it. I've witnessed her leaping from our dinner table and heading out the door without finishing her supper when she had an emergency call, she was needed in the O.R. STAT!! I was so worried about her as I knew she had to drive across the city to get to the hospital. She has had heartbreak as a nurse, loving her patients. I appreciate your lovely poem about Felicity. I hope you are healthy again.
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Date: 6/28/2023 2:17:00 PM
Felicity's good deed won't be forgotton Victor, there are many who sacrifice for the love of people. Compelling story!
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Date: 6/28/2023 8:46:00 AM
Enjoyed this realistic tale, so masterfully narrated, Victor
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Date: 6/28/2023 5:48:00 AM
An inspiring story well told. Some are so moved by the suffering of others and jump in to help them out of the way, risking their own lives! You are indeed a great story teller.
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Date: 6/27/2023 5:27:00 PM
It is not easy to watch those we love suffer this way, thank you for sharing this Victor. love xo
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Date: 6/27/2023 4:08:00 PM
Quite the narration you should consider writting books.
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Date: 6/27/2023 1:32:00 PM
A most touching tale! It certainly is composed with truth. You’ve explained just right how illness and recovery might happen for a nurse on the frontlines! God bless such patients and those who tend them! A sensitive poem that carried me along from the start. xoxo sally
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Date: 6/27/2023 1:12:00 PM
Fantastic poetry my friend. Your mind works its magic and thus we are blessed with this gem. A fav..GOD BLESS.
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Date: 6/27/2023 7:05:00 AM
We are glad that you have recovered from your illness and are back to share with us your creativity in writing. I appreciate the visit to my page. soupmail soon. Sara
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Date: 6/27/2023 6:07:00 AM
Your stories bring us there. Felicity paid the price in pounds lost, in illness but the recovery of her joy and love for God, priceless. Bless you, dear one!
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Date: 6/27/2023 5:38:00 AM
Victor, your exquisite narrative evokes profound emotions and captivates the reader with its poignant tale. Your masterful command of language effortlessly creates vivid imagery that gracefully unfolds before us.
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Date: 6/27/2023 5:38:00 AM
- As many years in my profession I know many such stories, Victor ... health personnel sacrifice a lot and expose themselves and their families to infection ... most of them work with heart and do not think of danger - Thank you for your lovely story :) - hugs
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Date: 6/27/2023 5:23:00 AM
A touching story, Victor. You know how to paint a picture with words.
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Date: 6/27/2023 4:37:00 AM
Victor Victor Victor. This entry to me is very emotional as I not only reflect on imagery of you and yes your late wife but all people I know who have been in a hospital bed. Sad to say I know my way around a hospital. Blessings to you that you expressed yourself with clarity that reaches the reader. Love and Blessings now and always. Peace (smile)
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Date: 6/27/2023 3:05:00 AM
Fiction but I’m sure similar to many stories that could be told about men and women who risk their lives to help sick people. Well told, Victor.
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