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Everlasting Thirst

Two souls dance in eternity True love shines through million stars Melts into rainbow colours When thirst is quenched

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James Fraser

Date: 1/18/2011 1:02:00 PM

What a Gem Tahera. Your writing just delights my eyes. Mega congrats on your most deserved win....:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2011 7:55:00 PM

Congratulations, TAhera on this beautiful poem I somehow had missed seeing before. Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2011 4:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Eiken Laan

Date: 1/17/2011 2:02:00 PM

Tahera, this is beautiful, well done on your win.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/17/2011 11:06:00 AM

Hello Tahera, Well this is just beautiful and I congratulate you on a most deserved win. Love it As Always, Shar

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/17/2011 10:56:00 AM

lovely, congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/17/2011 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations for your win in the "Love or Humor" contest Tahera, sponsored by John Freeman. Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/16/2011 9:01:00 PM

Well done, Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/16/2011 7:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in John's Contest, dear Tahera! Love, Annalise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/16/2011 5:57:00 PM

Congrats Tahera my friend on your fantastic win in John's contest with this fabulous dodoitsu .. enjoyed every line as u enjoy your top tenner too tonight with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/16/2011 5:56:00 PM

CHEERS for this smashing win, tahera..:)

John Freeman

Date: 1/16/2011 3:39:00 PM

Wonderful idea for a poem Tahera. Congratulations on your worthy 4th place. agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/16/2011 3:19:00 PM

A beautiful poem and so well deserving of its win, Tahera. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/16/2011 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Tahera

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/16/2011 2:59:00 PM

This is vividly descriptive. No wonder it won in the contest!

John Freeman

Date: 1/15/2011 10:01:00 AM

Thanks for your support in my contests, Tahera. It doesn't go unnoticed. Agape, Moses

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/15/2011 7:42:00 AM

a very romantic dodoitsu that also paints a beautiful image of love :) way to go, Tahera :) ps-- thank you for asking-- got a bit tied up with some stuff--happy to drop by here :) & eep-- I am a girl ;) -- nikko :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/13/2011 3:55:00 AM

Tahera, I love your second line, good luck for John's contest with this romantic gem.. love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2011 12:35:00 AM

Incredibly romantic imagery, Tahera. This should touch John's heart. Hope to see your poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn

Diane Locksley

Date: 1/12/2011 11:52:00 PM

Most people seem to be taking the humorous side to their dodoitsu poems, Tahera but I think this is a terrific romantic write. Good luck in the contest. Best to you, Diane

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/12/2011 8:45:00 PM

wow! Tahera, another amazing poem.. the best feeling of a life time should come with an everlasting thirst.. enjoyed your dodoitsu... good luck in the contest,..p.d.

Rick Parise

Date: 1/12/2011 8:28:00 PM

A beautiful write/////Sounds like completion!!! May Gods energy entwine your spirit!!!Rick

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/12/2011 8:24:00 PM

you paint such exquisite imagery with your colorful quill, tahera... stunning write i feel you!! :) nette

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/12/2011 8:23:00 PM

Interesting read here, profound and a wonderful sentiment. Harry