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Elegy of the Shattered Mirror

In halls where silence once held sway, A storm did breach the calm of day. A voice, unbidden, harsh and cold, Unfurled its tale, its judgment bold. It spoke of faults unseen, unfound, Its echoes spread, a bitter sound. No evidence to back its claim, Yet still it sought to tarnish name. The mirror cracked, its truth betrayed, By words that in the shadows laid. Yet in the shards, a lesson gleams, That not all spoken truth redeems. For dignity, though bruised and torn, In quiet strength is often worn. And though the storm may rage and roar, The soul endures, and stands once more.

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Date: 7/23/2025 9:11:00 AM
So glad to have seen you on Poetrysoup and have got the chance to read your beautiful poem which has won double accolades, POTD and POTW. Congratulations! Into our calm and silent life, storms can come sweeping unexpected. But the soul can endure all the cracks and re emerge strong once more. Our ability for resilience is beautifully confirmed. Happy to have got acquainted with you, dear Rowena and thank you for your visit to my page.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 5:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful message and warm congratulations. Yes—our quiet strength and resilience carry us through even the fiercest storms. So glad to connect with you here on PoetrySoup. Wishing you continued inspiration and blessings!
Date: 7/23/2025 7:57:00 AM
Dear Rowena, Congrats on POTD and POTW. It strikes deeply, a raw and moving reflection on the storms that break into our lives without warning, and the quiet strength we find afterward. Summer Blessings, My Dear Rowena, Daniel
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Daniel. Your words mean a lot to me—I'm deeply touched that the piece resonated with you. Wishing you peaceful days and summer blessings in return.
Date: 7/23/2025 5:15:00 AM
Certainly, soul endures no matter ! Very confident verse to speak this truth. Love matter of fact tone of writing for this topic. Childlike rhythmic flow, just as soul is. Enjoyed this. ThkU for posting, Sweets. Xx.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/23/2025 4:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sweets! I'm truly glad you felt the rhythm and tone—your words are deeply appreciated. Grateful for your kind presence here.
Date: 7/22/2025 4:32:00 PM
If this was a winner, I can see why! Good write!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/22/2025 4:55:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/22/2025 12:33:00 PM
I often miss POTD's. Shouldn't have missed this one, Rowena. Belated congratulations, Gershon
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/22/2025 4:03:00 PM
Thank you Gershon!
Date: 7/22/2025 2:34:00 AM
- Double joy, Rowena :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. and w. - ... enjoy the day and the summer :) - hugs
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/22/2025 4:33:00 AM
..feeling grateful and blessed. Wishing you a beautiful day and a bright summer too! Hugs right back! Thanks Anne!
Date: 7/21/2025 1:59:00 PM
Yeah, you're someone to keep an eye on, for sure. Sincerest congratulations on winning both POTD and POTW, Rowena:-)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 3:05:00 PM
Aww, that really means a lot—thank you! I’m honestly so touched by your words. Your support and kindness keep me inspired. Grateful beyond words!
Date: 7/21/2025 12:52:00 PM
' echoes spread, no evidence to back its claim. ' The sad truth is, this is happening in our ' safe place. ' Proof is always better, than a wind bouncing back and forth from wall to wall. Your thoughts are deep and powerful, Rowena. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 3:03:00 PM
Brandy, your words truly moved me—thank you for seeing the depth behind the lines. It’s heartbreaking when even our safe spaces tremble with unspoken truths. I deeply appreciate your kind message and support. Hugs right back to you!
Date: 7/21/2025 11:38:00 AM
High fives and fist pumps Rowena! Congratulations on your POTD and POTW! Your metaphors and images stand out in their creativity. They speak your message with such eloquence. So happy for you! Blessings!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 3:02:00 PM
High fives and fist pumps right back at you! Thank you so much for your beautiful words Sam.
Date: 7/21/2025 9:38:00 AM
Rowena yay! Congratulations! You are the 12th poet to have the honor of POTD & POTW (including me when first joined) since I've been here, a rare event. You're diligence & tenacity reaped great results. Like sweet Andrea said below you are talented. Enjoy your day~
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 2:58:00 PM
Anaya! That means so much coming from you — truly, thank you! You've been such a warm presence here, and I deeply appreciate your kind words and encouragement. I'm honored to share this rare moment with you and others I admire. Wishing you joy always!
Date: 7/21/2025 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative write. Love the ending... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win............
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/21/2025 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honour, Dear Poetess. Brilliant poem with perfect structure and inspirational content!
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 7:57:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 7/21/2025 6:54:00 AM
Congratulation, Rowena, on your beautiful POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Bill
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 7:55:00 AM
Thank you Bill!
Date: 7/21/2025 6:06:00 AM
Hello Rowena, congratulations on winning POTD with your amazingly beautiful poem. An excellent read and beautifully written. Wishing you a wonderful week ahead, my friend.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 7:55:00 AM
Hi Zyrool! That means so much to me—thank you from the heart! Wishing you an amazing week too, my dear friend.
Date: 7/21/2025 5:42:00 AM
Uplifting write Rowena. Nice balance of rhyming and meter. Congratulations! :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 7:53:00 AM
Thanks a lot Linda! I’m really happy you felt the rhythm and rhyme working well together.
Date: 7/21/2025 3:02:00 AM
returning to congratulate you on a well deserved POTD....breathing construction and words
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:30:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I appreciate your support!
Date: 7/21/2025 2:35:00 AM
Dear Rowena, congratulations on POTD and POTW! You are shining dear poetess<3, enjoy your special week :)
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:28:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne! I’m truly grateful for your warm wishes. Feeling blessed to share this special week with wonderful friends like you.
Date: 7/21/2025 12:57:00 AM
Congratulations on having received the honour of poem of the day Rowena, a wonderful write… Beryl
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:27:00 AM
Thank you very much, Beryl! I’m truly honored and grateful for your kind words.
Date: 7/20/2025 10:51:00 PM
You are so talented with rhythm and rhyme, Rowena. Great job here.
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Andrea for your kind words! I truly appreciate your support and encouragement.
Date: 7/20/2025 5:31:00 PM
From both a stylistic and 'content' aspect, this poem is an absolute triumph, methinks. A FAVE. Thank you, Rowena. ~ Shards of Truth, Gershon
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon!
Date: 7/20/2025 4:17:00 PM
beautifully constructed rhyme scheme and a poem that rings true to me. Your tale of slander and lies ends on a hopeful note. Your words are encouraging and inspirational. Thanks for sharing. A fave
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Rowena Velasco
Date: 7/21/2025 4:25:00 AM
Sending warmth and gratitude your way. Thank you Sara!
Date: 7/20/2025 10:07:00 AM
There will always be those who try to tear us down. Nevertheless, lies and slander will have no lasting impact on a good soul and, in fact, often brings karma upon the instigator(s). Those are the thoughts that came to my mind when I read your excellent poem Ro
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/20/2025 2:48:00 PM
PS. I sent you a soupmail

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