Copse

canopy uproots
lies upon the undergrowth...
breeding rookery

 © Harry J Horsman 2022

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/1/2022 9:58:00 AM

Harry big congratulations on your win, well deserving of such honor my friend...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2022 3:52:00 AM

I can see this__a fallen tree, maybe with its seed falling down or other seed falling where its roots have loosened the soil. I see that this one is a winner. Congratulations!!! Way to go.. We are fine after the hurricane has passed. The path changed and came back in above where we would get any rain or storms from it. So many others were not that blessed. They say now 33 known dead. So much property is destroyed~~probably never will be rebuilt. We are still having wind this morning.. Sara

Anna Marie Kaianah

Date: 9/26/2022 12:35:00 AM

Great Haiku Harry. Congrats on your win! ~Anna Kaianah

Eve Roper

Date: 9/20/2022 6:37:00 PM

Great image, Harry . Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2022 7:52:00 AM

- Wonderful written, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 9/18/2022 2:42:00 PM

Funny H.H When we lived in the village of Fenstanton Cambridge Our address was 47 Rookery Place Undergrowth summed it up Congratulations on your win Well deserved

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/18/2022 9:11:00 AM

Back with my congrats, dear sir!

Ann Peck

Date: 9/18/2022 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations, Harry, on your creative Haiku win!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2022 7:23:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Harry :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 7:02:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Harry! Linda

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/18/2022 3:49:00 AM

Harry, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderfully creative haiku, love the imagery!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:43:00 PM

"breeding rookery" - Great! Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/17/2022 10:50:00 AM

Perfect Harry! Linda

Jack Horne

Date: 9/17/2022 6:12:00 AM

love this beautiful haiku, my friend - a sure winner in any contest

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2022 8:33:00 PM

GOOD STUFF, Harry. "Rockery" ON!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/16/2022 12:02:00 PM

Harry, you have painted a vivid picture with such a beautiful haiku of yours. Best of luck to you in the contest!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/16/2022 9:55:00 AM

Your wonderful haiku provides a vibrant scene, Harry. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)

Anil Deo

Date: 9/16/2022 7:48:00 AM

A rookery breeds in nature's "messy beauty" . Or messy but merciful cycles. Missing your Brit-Kieinoxygen Sir Harry. Butcwecarexdaiky on blackouts irbbriwnouts in eastern South Africa ... I do pop in here as much as possible.