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He watched her all day, From behind his window, fascinated by her persistence, Hoping for a wholesome dinner, the warmth and comfort of a home. She stood, instead, in the telephone box calling no one, receiving no one. Surely if she did not phone anyone One could assume she was waiting for one. But no one rang. All Christmas Eve. The wind blew icy cold and it was clear she was not adequately clothed. She must have been suffering a lot. He wanted to shout to her: Call it a truce, forget the caller, come to my humble abode and rest a while. Here's plenty to eat, turkey, vegetables, mince pies and cakes and a warmed red sangria to pump some blood into your face. She stayed put until midnight as winter's blizzard opened its doors, to herald in the birth of Christ. Her ghost cared not for this, and tired out she fell crumbled dead on the floor of an abandoned telephone box. Next day they took her away. He remained at the window, angry, wondering the why of it all. It was days later that he remembered. Then he felt the terrible shame. He had not helped for her at all.

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Date: 12/18/2021 12:00:00 PM
Says much. What might have been different … what can never be changed.
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Date: 12/17/2021 4:09:00 AM
A sad poem Victor, well done, hugs.
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Date: 12/16/2021 11:00:00 PM
sad but something people make the mistake of not doing out of fear I think, good reminder for upcoming Christmas if nothing else let those who do this good work know there is someone in need.
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Date: 12/16/2021 6:03:00 PM
Dying of cold and starvation is so sad when superfluity of food is there close by. Doing an act of charity in need is important. Regret that comes later is not going to bring any results.... A great moral you have conveyed, dear Victor !
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Date: 12/16/2021 4:32:00 PM
Sad poem of the penalty a good deeds not done. Good suspence and great finale, Victor. Hope this wasn't a personal story. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 12/16/2021 1:21:00 PM
WoW! That's sad, Nicely penned. Debra
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Date: 12/16/2021 1:12:00 PM
wow, what a sad one and most profound, Victor
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Date: 12/16/2021 1:07:00 PM
Such a sad poem, and very well written. There are so many that are homeless. How they manage , I don't know. Happy Holidays my friend.
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Date: 12/16/2021 12:26:00 PM
Your poem evokes sadness in the fact that one small act of kindness could have made such a difference. Wonderful writing, Victor.
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Date: 12/16/2021 6:40:00 AM
A great poem, as is frequently the case with you, Victor. And, without a doubt, the shift in your poem at the end is remarkable. My friend, your points of view, even sad, have a great deal of wisdom.
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Date: 12/16/2021 4:47:00 AM
Much divinity in the moral of your story, Victor. Great story telling as always and the turn in your poem towards the end.
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Date: 12/16/2021 3:55:00 AM
Good Afternoon Victor - Oh my goodness you know how to make us cry and yes wake up to humanity. This is sad and the emotive factor is ever present and we are in the scene looking on. We readers will leave it at that. Have a beautiful and meaningful day. Love and blessings always.
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Date: 12/16/2021 3:09:00 AM
Ooooo, so sad...Delice
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Date: 12/16/2021 2:00:00 AM
Oh... So pathetic... yes, a timely action of kindness would have saved her... Another inspiring write with a great message Victor... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 12/16/2021 12:15:00 AM
I agree with Jo, we all have those thoughts but it's acting on those thoughts that counts. Tom
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Date: 12/15/2021 11:39:00 PM
So sad, he saw her, but never invited her in...great message, Victor, charity is not in the thought, but in action:)
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