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Brave Men of Old

I’ll speak of me past of stories once told. Of men that rode waves out in the cold. Tales of the strong, the courageous, the bold. Most of them died young, a few were quite old. The things that they done sent chills up my spine. They’d eat mush and swill and drink rum and wine. When they were happy, they had a swagger. When they were drunk, they could hardly stagger. Over and over to battle they’d go, They’d fight dragons and monster, toe to toe. They faced their sure death with almost no fear, They’d charge into battle with a loud cheer. What purpose was served by facing their test? Sailing the seas as a pirate was best.

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Date: 3/18/2022 8:49:00 AM
This last line is a keeper! If you change anything please keep this exactly as written "Sailing the seas as a pirate was best."
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/18/2022 4:39:00 PM
Will do and thank you. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill
Date: 3/13/2022 6:42:00 PM
What a vivid picture you painted, it enhanced your interesting story about the brave men of old and their exciting escapades. Thank you, Bill
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/14/2022 1:38:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it, Shirley. Hugs, Bill
Date: 3/12/2022 4:01:00 AM
Argh, great poem Bill.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:28:00 PM
Thanks, Scott. Bill
Date: 3/12/2022 3:54:00 AM
enjoyed this very much, bill
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:27:00 PM
Glad you liked it, Jeff. Bill
Date: 3/12/2022 3:20:00 AM
indeed pirates appeared to be reckless, living only for the adventure the high seas brought them. We would all do well to embrace their spirit of adventure and be willing to face our own dragons and monsters. Well penned.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 3:16:00 PM
hugs back
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:27:00 PM
I think we've faced our share my love. Thanks for the comments, Sara. Hugs, Bill
Date: 3/12/2022 2:44:00 AM
Aye Me Hearties!! Love it Bill…..Debx
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:26:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, my poetry pal, Deb.
Date: 3/11/2022 8:10:00 PM
Hello Bill ... pirates lived as there was no tomorrow and quite often there wasn't - thank you Bill - Lindsay
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:25:00 PM
Yep, there was a reason they were so carefree. No promise of tomorrow. Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 7:54:00 PM
Adventures at sea, how did volunteer to sail those. I know my husband liked it when he was in the service. Good write
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:24:00 PM
Thanks, Eve. The Navy can get in your blood. Have a joyful day, my friend. Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 7:46:00 PM
These adventurous seafaring men were indeed people of great grit and will power ! They never feared anything and enjoyed life, but had a short life ! Impressed by the ease and flow of your sonnet ! Blessings, dear friend !
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:23:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa. It is my favorite form. :-) Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 7:08:00 PM
Dear Bill, your expressive pen spills imagery that is vibrant and bold. You've captured the harsh life and almost certain death on the seas with potent poetic finesse. A great piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/12/2022 2:22:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. You're very kind with your comments on my poetry. I appreciate the time and effort to read and comment. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 7:07:00 PM
Superb, Bill. This is the sort of poem I truly love. It has everything, rhyme, rhythm, flow, story...yes, a great poem, my friend.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:20:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Milt. I'm definitely still learning about writing poetry. The rhyming is easy, it's the structure that's a challenge for me. A poet friend, Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 5:47:00 PM
Indeed, a certain romanticism to such a life. Every young boy had his cap and wood sword. Love it! "Over and over to battle they’d go, They’d fight dragons and monster, toe to toe."
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:19:00 PM
That's true, Joe. We did have some fun with those stick swords and play like dragons. Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 5:25:00 PM
Argh…as the pirate says, good one, matie! Enjoyed this immensely.Hard for us to imagine a short, hard life. Not all were so courageous.
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:16:00 PM
Thank you, Kim. It was a different time in history. Bill
Date: 3/11/2022 4:44:00 PM
Yo, Ho, Bill, Hark! Love thee pirate story, drink up me harties. Excellent write, enjoyed, Blessings ~ Debra
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Bill Baker
Date: 3/12/2022 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Debra. It was fun to write, Bill

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