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Beside the Sea - POTD

Beside the sea I wait~
the dreamy dawn to shine
and paint horizon's hue
in tawny, taupe and teal
unveiling vivid view.

Beside the sea I wait~
the early birds in flight
arching like tiara 
making sky a painting 
of placid aurora.

Beside the sea I wait~
the whisper of the breeze
soaring as sunshine sings
her stellar symphony
reviving lost musings.

Beside the sea I wait~
the crashing of the waves
sparkling like sunlit snow
as they return to shore
my love will, too, I know.

Copyright © JCB Brul | Year Posted 2022

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Les Pick Date: 10/24/2022 7:44:00 PM Thanks JCB for sharing this picturesque poem. A nice read. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 4/17/2022 3:29:00 PM JCB, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor ~Constance Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 4/16/2022 10:46:00 PM Splendid poem and the imagery is beautiful. Congratulations on your win and this superb monchielle poem! Hugs Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/16/2022 5:45:00 PM Congratulations! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/16/2022 4:21:00 PM Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/15/2022 9:34:00 AM Back with Congratulations on this new win. I love your "Beside the sea" write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter.............. Login to Reply

Terry Miller Date: 4/15/2022 12:41:00 AM Congratulations on a fine poem and a well-deserved win. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 4/14/2022 10:22:00 PM I missed seeing this as poem of the day ! Now let me convey my double congratulations on your excellent win and the POTD Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/14/2022 10:12:00 PM Congratulations on POTD and your win:) I love this one:) Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 4/14/2022 9:40:00 PM Back again to congratulate you on your win in the contest! Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/14/2022 8:33:00 PM Congratulations, again! Login to Reply

Ken Rone Date: 4/12/2022 8:24:00 AM This is a wonderful piece in a challenging format. I wish you the best in the contest. - Ken Login to Reply

Anil Deo Date: 4/10/2022 7:54:00 PM JCBB, congrats. I take it as good advice from your poem: "Beside the sea, I wait." Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 4/10/2022 7:13:00 PM This is beautiful, dreamy and romantic, so soft and serene. Your thoughts whisper along the page with such elegance and grace. I'm drifting in these tender moments. Congratulations JCB, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Brandy Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 10:00:00 PM Thank you Brandy...That's what I feel as I write this poem. More blessings to you.

Panagiota Romios Date: 4/10/2022 6:35:00 PM So happy to see you hold the POTD for today! The comparison between sea and love is soothing. Perfect read for Palm Sunday! Pangie Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 9:59:00 PM Thank you Pangie..

Eve Roper Date: 4/10/2022 5:27:00 PM great painting, JCB, congratulations on POTD. Blessings my friend Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 9:56:00 PM Thank you dear Eve. More blessing to you.

Debra L Brown Date: 4/10/2022 1:11:00 PM Beautifully penned, Congrats on POTD. Blessings ~ Debra Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:13:00 PM Thank you Debra.

Paulette Calasibetta Date: 4/10/2022 12:01:00 PM Wonderful POTD! "Beside the sea I wait" your imagery fascinating! :)Paulette Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM Thank you Paulette.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 4/10/2022 10:28:00 AM Congrats for your POTD. Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:10:00 PM Thanks much!!

Michelle Faulkner Date: 4/10/2022 10:25:00 AM So glad to see this as POTD, happy to return with congratulations! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM Thank you again Michelle.

Bill Baker Date: 4/10/2022 8:38:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD, JCB, and good luck in the contest! Bill Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:09:00 PM Thank you Bill.

Paula Goldsmith Date: 4/10/2022 8:36:00 AM Congratulations on your P.O.T.D. win. A beautiful sea write. I am walking in the sand with the birds flying over head. Have a great/blessed day.................... Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:08:00 PM Thank you Paula. That moment is so sublime!

Christuraj Alex Date: 4/10/2022 8:13:00 AM Wow! "Beside the sea I wait" - Beautiful! Congratulations! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:07:00 PM Thanks you so much.

L Milton Hankins Date: 4/10/2022 8:12:00 AM A beautiful poem, beautifully-written, JCB. Congratulations on your P.O.T.D.! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:06:00 PM Thank you Milton. Blessings.

Mike Gentile Date: 4/10/2022 7:08:00 AM Such a beautiful expression of love an yearning JCB! Congratulations on your POTD honors for your romantic write full of lovely imagery!! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 4/10/2022 1:06:00 PM Thank you Mike.

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