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At the Bay

Spring unfolds into the hot summer sun With bright sizzling beaches and waves that roll Love ignites as our two hearts beat as one In the sun’s path glimmering soul to soul The ocean breeze lifts our love to the sky Wild surf moves with our emotions that stir Our hands intertwined like ribbons that tie The clouds disappear with only a blur Our deep summer love makes everything clear As we skip on the beach in our own dance Souvenirs of shells wash into us near Warm twilight kisses, the surf do enhance All that is meant for us to be today Sings music from the ocean, at the bay Heidi Sands 5/6/18 Placed 5th in the Summer Love Sonnet contest.

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Date: 5/24/2018 9:40:00 PM
Amazing imagery enhances the love story of your beautiful sonnet. 'Our hands intertwined like ribbons that tie' - just so lovely. Congratulations on your wonderful win, Heidi! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2018 7:11:00 AM
Thank you Susan. I appreciate your taking the time to congratulation me and give feedback on this :)
Date: 5/19/2018 5:56:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful sonnet, Heidi. I enjoyed.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/19/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thank you very much Susan :)
Date: 5/18/2018 1:33:00 PM
Beautiful write, congrats Heidi on a fine placement!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you John. I appreciate it very much :)
Date: 5/18/2018 7:52:00 AM
Beautiful write Heidi... Congrats on your win
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 8:14:00 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 5/18/2018 7:27:00 AM
Delighted by your win..Congrats Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 7:29:00 AM
Thank you Vijay ! :)
Date: 5/17/2018 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet,Heidi. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/18/2018 6:54:00 AM
Thank you Elaine :)
Date: 5/7/2018 9:37:00 AM
Very romantic, Heidi and a great use of the summer as a backdrop to the story, a beautiful Sonnet, Happy Monday xxoo
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you so much Mike. I appreciate your support :)
Date: 5/7/2018 9:37:00 AM
Perfectly captures a romantic summery day at the shore!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Michelle :) I appreciate your feedback!
Date: 5/7/2018 6:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about spring's exit into images of summer.. intertwined with glimpses of love..best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your visits, always :)
Date: 5/6/2018 3:30:00 PM
Beautiful poetry!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/6/2018 3:33:00 PM
Thank you Mike :)

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