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season of fall kindles treetops vivid hues are chattering perfect temperature ambient and kind marries to the colors of vivid childhood dreams

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/25/2023 5:58:00 PM

How creative! Ambiant and kind marry and there's childhood dreams! How beautiful!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/26/2023 1:42:00 PM

thanks for your thoughtful words Paige and for visiting my site. I appreciate you. May you have a blessed evening, Sara

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/24/2023 5:03:00 AM

PS - The credit belongs to you and your poetry Ms Sara (smile). What a dark world it must be for those who do not read...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/24/2023 8:16:00 AM

those that don't read, probably do live in a dark world, intentionally choosing ignorance and loss of personal freedom as a result. Well said, Ms. Lisa...hugs from us

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/24/2023 2:49:00 AM

Dear Sara. Good Morning. How beautiful the thought of living in the colors of vivid childhood dreams. To me that's the best place to be because such memories are the best for all obvious reasons. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent and beauty with us. Have a wonderful morning and day. May it be filled with everything good. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/24/2023 4:48:00 AM

good morning, Ms. Lisa. Your comments were so uplifting. Yes, there's something about vivid childhood dreams and misty memories of those times. Thank you for always reading my poems and for sharing your beautiful self. You're priceless. Have a blessed day, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/22/2023 7:58:00 PM

I can hear the wedding bells chime. Lovely, Sara!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/23/2023 4:19:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, Gershon. I always appreciate your cleverness and support. Enjoy your day, Sara

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 10/22/2023 2:37:00 PM

Lovely poem like autumnal evening smooth cool breeze!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 2:55:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Abdullah. I appreciate your kind words, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/22/2023 1:20:00 PM

A lovely tanka, dear Sara, the swinger delights in the breathtaking view as they smoothly swing back and forth. They take in the crisp autumn air while gazing up at the spectacular tapestry of color formed by the shifting leaves. The peaceful melody of the river soothes the ears, blending with the cheerful chirping of birds perched on nearby trees.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 2:17:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, dear Sotto. Your comments were poetic and mindful. As a child I loved swinging in the trees at a nearby park, letting the autumn air lift me higher. I felt so peaceful and so secure. You described that feeling quite well. I appreciate your mindful comments. Hope you had a splendid Sunday, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 10/22/2023 12:26:00 PM

Lovely write! Makes one want to just kick-back, admire and dream.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 2:15:00 PM

I'm glad the poem made you want to kick back and dream...the perfect Sunday activity. Thanks for stopping by, Joe. Enjoy Sunday, Sara

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/22/2023 9:32:00 AM

I am enjoying crisp and cozy fall scenes with colorful autumn leaves, calming river sounds, singing birds, and a crackling campfire on video's and beautiful poetry such as "Ambient and Kind" Sara. A wonderful Tanka!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 12:12:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Anaya. I'm grateful you enjoy some of the same things I do about fall. I appreciate your kind comments. Have a splendid Sunday, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/22/2023 8:34:00 AM

A captivating story with such imagery as the swinger going up and down admiring all. Blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 12:11:00 PM

thanks for stopping by, Victor, and for your comments about the imagery in my poem. Have a splendid Sunday, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/22/2023 6:28:00 AM

Delightful poetry, Sara. I feel the joy of your theme.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 8:42:00 AM

thanks, Vijay! I appreciate your visit and your appreciation for my poem. Enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Lin Lane

Date: 10/22/2023 5:57:00 AM

I still enjoy swinging, only not soaring so high these days. A front porch swing does quite nicely to daydream of what used to be and what yet may come. Our dreams can be vivid at any age. Sweet thoughts, Sara.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 8:40:00 AM

I appreciate your visit, Lin, and your sharing your love for swinging. I agree, dreams can be vivid at any age. I, too, enjoy porch swinging. It soothes and inspires me. enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Silent One

Date: 10/22/2023 5:13:00 AM

Lovely choice of words here Sara, your vocabulary is one of a very high standard, yet not every word weaver knows how to pair words together as perfectly as you.. Always in awe of your short form poems...

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 8:38:00 AM

wow, your comments about my vocabulary and weaving ability deeply touched me. I'm grateful for your insight...and I agree, the short forms are a better match for me right now. I appreciate your gracious comments and visits. Enjoy Sunday, Sara

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/22/2023 3:55:00 AM

ah that photo brings me back to my childhood in Mtl. where I used to swing in Park Miron, next to the Quarry , where we used to dig for hugs marbles, love this Sara, a fav for me

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/22/2023 4:34:00 AM

thanks for stopping by. I'm grateful my poem sparked a memory for you. I thought of my own childhood, swinging in the swings at the central park in my home town, believing I could touch the sky. Thanks for faving my poem. Have a fabulous Sunday, Sara