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A Winter's Day

A winter wind craves intricate swirls as Jack frost pierces Nature's heart. And etches glass with abstract curls sculpting spirals of frozen art. Virgin flakes of the purest white emerge from crystals clear as glass. And tumble to Earth in free flight, their fragile beauty doomed to pass. A rising sun ignites the sky as shafts of light lend ice their fire. But skittish clouds will not comply, and the flickering flames expire. A crunchy crust of sparkling snow gets imbued with crystals of light. And yet, this splendiferous show vanishes; at the edge of night. Shifting silhouettes creak and crack while a saffron moon beams from space. And as shadows stretch into black, bashful stars shyly show their face. (Quatrain) 2/24/2015

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Date: 3/18/2018 9:42:00 PM
Beautiful. Magical. Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:41:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2015 7:49:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nicely penned :)
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:29:00 AM
Thanks, I am honored, Emile.
Date: 3/8/2015 2:13:00 PM
thank you for the reply on my comment, so sweet of you
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Date: 3/8/2015 12:19:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations, A nice "Pierced" win. Love LINDA **
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Date: 3/8/2015 1:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 9:07:00 PM
A great descriptive write of a winter day. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much Joyce, I am so pleased by your visit. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 7:28:00 PM
Ohhh skittish clouds! Lovely Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:56:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, you know how to create a smile. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 6:22:00 PM
A lovely piece..I especially like the first stanza,"etching the glass"..great work.Congrats. BG
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:29:00 PM
Thanks Barbara, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 5:16:00 PM
I can see why this piece received high honor, Congratulations!
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Date: 3/7/2015 6:30:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard, you've made my day. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2015 6:34:00 AM
wonderful rhyme/rhythm...A crunchy crust of sparkling snow..uggh I go back to my childhood...Congrats on win...Rajat
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Emile beautiful poem seven. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Eve, as always your visits are a treat. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 7:01:00 PM
Very lovely, Emile. Amazing imagery of the piercing beauty of Winter. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Sandra
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thanks so much Sandra, I always look forward to your visits. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 4:31:00 PM
Great flow and rhythm in this winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Sara, it's always nice to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 1:01:00 PM
Well done Emile ,congratulations on this well written work
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Date: 3/6/2015 1:22:00 PM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 12:37:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Emile such great imagery:-) many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/6/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 12:10:00 PM
This is a beautifully written poem, Emile! Such wondrous details as you describe the crystalline creations. Congrats on your well deserved win! :)
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Date: 3/6/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/6/2015 10:55:00 AM
Impressive Emile. Thank you for participating and congrats.
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Date: 3/6/2015 1:24:00 PM
Thanks Rob, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 8:49:00 AM
Enchanting write you have here, Emile. Splendiferous! A 7. Kim :D
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Date: 2/25/2015 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, your support and kind words are very appreciated, Emile.
Date: 2/25/2015 12:11:00 AM
G'day Emile... What a picture you have painted in words here for someone who has not seen snow. Thank you Emile - Lindsay
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Date: 2/25/2015 8:00:00 AM
hanks Lindsay, I welcome your thoughts. Emile.
Date: 2/24/2015 10:01:00 PM
Such a stunning write, absolutely great poem Emile!!!
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Date: 2/25/2015 8:01:00 AM
Thanks Arthur, your comments are always most welcomed and eagerly sought. Emile.
Date: 2/24/2015 1:05:00 PM
Lovely, Emile...You do enchant with your imagery. I loved the saffron moon as well!!! Virgin flakes of purest white...what a delight. :)
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Date: 2/24/2015 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, beauty surrounds us, we need but look around. Emile.
Date: 2/24/2015 11:05:00 AM
A lovely winter scene, Emile, with vivid imagery...every line from etched glass to the saffron moon is beautiful...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/24/2015 12:17:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda, For your warm encouraging words of support. Emile.

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