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A promise from God, his sign in the sky, Never again will all unjust men die. A rainbow appears as His sign to man, Water will not cover all of the earth’s land. He’ll not with water, wash all life from earth, Because of our sins or our lack of worth. He offers His gift of eternal life, And gives us the strength to overcome strife. He sent us His son, to die for all sin, He gave up His life so man could win. Then after three days, as scripture had said, He came back to life; He rose from the dead. After a time, he ascended in air, He went ahead, our mansions to prepare.

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Date: 9/23/2023 10:17:00 PM
I love this so much I faved it. The artistry and word choice in which you share the truth is brilliant Bill! I admire this skill set,
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Date: 9/24/2023 8:27:00 PM
You wouldn't enjoy reading my poetry if you didn't have insight into the subjects I write about. Smiles ~ Blessings my friend. Bill
Date: 9/9/2023 2:35:00 AM
Good Morning Bill. Hi. This is most beautiful and peaceful too. Please allow me to let your words stand as there is nothing I could ever add because your entry is the truth. Thank you for sharing such a piece and your poetic talent too. It would be a wonderful world if all thought in this manner. Have a wonderful and peaceful weekend. Blessings always to you and Sara. (smile...)
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Date: 9/9/2023 8:38:00 AM
More of an Easter poem, but I write what I feel when I feel it. :-) Blessings my sweet friend. Have a joyful weekend. Hugs, Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 2:49:00 PM
This is a stunning sonnet my dear friend. I love the poem and its title. So inspiring. The concluding couplet is simply divine.- ‘He went ahead, our mansions to prepare’. So uplifting! So, so enjoyed it. Thank you so much dear Bill. Blessings to you both for a truly wonderful weekend.
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:08:00 PM
I'm happy that my poem resonates with your heart and brings pleasant thoughts His promise and His gift of eternal life, Christina. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
He came the first time to give, to save, to offer life! As the Spirit dwells with his beloved, He prepares our forever home. Blessings, sweet Bill!
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Date: 9/8/2023 3:05:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and sweet comments, Kim. Sometimes I get in too big of a hurry to go home. I know God has a special time for it to happen, the chaos gets to me sometimes. Smiles and Blessings my dear friend. Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 2:39:00 PM
A holy message in the sacred beauty of the word in the majestic form of poetry! I so much enjoyed reading your Sonnet, Bill! Thank you so much for sharing such a Rainbow ! such a Promise ! such a Gift! God bless you. Best regards.
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:43:00 PM
Thank you for a first visit, Besma, and for an uplifting comment. I hope you'll visit again soon. I'll be visiting your poetry soon. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 1:26:00 PM
A lovely and inspirational poem my friend. Have a blessed weekend.
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:26:00 PM
Thank you, Jerry, you have a blessed weekend as well, my friend. Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 10:50:00 AM
Nice devotional poem.
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Date: 9/8/2023 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Jay. Just what I was thinking about, so I wrote it down. :-) Have a great day! Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 5:27:00 AM
Appreciate this faith based poem Bill. Not sure about that second line since Armageddon is impending but yes, the rainbow was a promise never to deluge the earth again, which produced collateral damage by destroying all living things along with wicked humanity. The rainbow is a promise of peace and a hope for the future. I'm with ya! Have a great weekend
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Date: 9/8/2023 9:47:00 AM
I agree, Tom, I had to change the original line to make it 10 syllables, and it did change the accuracy. Thanks for the comment, my friend. Bill
Date: 9/8/2023 5:11:00 AM
Your message resonates in words of faith, Bill. Reassuring words that give strength as we trek through travails of life.
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Date: 9/8/2023 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for commenting on my poetry, Vijay. You're a good friend. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 9/7/2023 8:55:00 PM
Its a beautiful poem Bill. Inspiring and heartwarming. Thank you. Best wishes from SV Bill you have soup mail.
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Date: 9/8/2023 8:43:00 AM
Thank you, for the heads up on my last line. I appreciate it, anytime. Have a great weekend! Bill
Date: 9/7/2023 7:39:00 PM
A beautiful tie from the story of Noah to the accension to heaven. Also you have captured the message in your masterful poem!
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Date: 9/7/2023 7:45:00 PM
I tried to get as much as would fit in a Sonnet, Miranda. Thanks for the comments, my friend. Have a great weekend! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Date: 9/7/2023 5:09:00 PM
Hi Bill, He did promise never again to flood the entire earth. His Words are truth to my ear, through faith.
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:36:00 PM
Amen. I don't know how I'D make it with the hope I have in God. Thanks for the visit and comment, Lin. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Date: 9/7/2023 4:48:00 PM
What a lovely sonnet, dear Bill. I loved the strength and hope that flowed with your chosen words and images. I felt a certain sense of peace after reading your sonnet. Grateful for your creative spirit and uplifting words. Me ...
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:37:00 PM
Thank you for the uplifting comment, my love. May your week be filled with peace and love. Bill
Date: 9/7/2023 4:38:00 PM
The scene before me is breathtakingly beautiful, with its vibrant colors and awe-inspiring sights. However, there is an underlying sense of faith and strength that tinges on the air, creating a lovely ambiance.
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Date: 9/7/2023 5:39:00 PM
Thank you for the beautiful comment, my dear friend. Hope and faith are about all we can depend on in these chaotic times. Have a productive week, my awesome poet friend. Bill

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