Unbearable Beauty In White

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Her casket closed at her request,
   so no one saw our beauty queen
there lying peacefully at rest, 
   in her soft dress of white sateen.

Her white hair combed in silky curls
   at fifty-five, was premature;
around her neck a string of pearls-
   an added touch of white allure.

Her porcelain white skin still glowed
   although, her journey had been hard. 
Inside, all white to black erode
   with cancer's spread and disregard.

And there she lay within a white
   cocoon of tufted satin weave,
inside her coffin, hands hold tight
   white rosary beneath her sleeve.

Our broken hearts and tear-filled eyes,
   in death beheld her loveliness;
white angels with her soul would rise
   to Heaven's lasting happiness.

And no one saw our beauty queen,
   besides close family that night;
our mother dear- at peace, serene,
   unbearable- beauty in white.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/1/2022 8:40:00 AM
So sad, Sandra~and beautiful. A wonderful memorial to your mother.
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Date: 11/23/2020 3:40:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your great win in the contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Date: 11/22/2020 9:43:00 PM
Wonderful Tribute. Big Congrats to win.
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Date: 11/22/2020 3:39:00 PM
Well done...so sad. A final goodbye in beauty white. (My mom has cancer...hoping she fares well!) congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/22/2020 2:17:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem and tribute to your mother. Congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 11/22/2020 12:16:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Sandra. SUPERB! Janice
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Date: 11/22/2020 8:12:00 AM
Moving write Sandra. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 5/15/2020 8:34:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your lovely vulnerability and depths of your sorrow. So touching, Sandra. You sum it up perfectly in your last line.
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Date: 11/6/2017 12:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderfully dark win, Sandra - blessings, and keep up the great work! :-)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:36:00 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory, for reading my poem and for your very supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 10/28/2017 10:32:00 PM
Sandra, congratulation on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/27/2017 5:53:00 PM
So beautiful Sandra!<3 Kim
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thank you, Kim! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/27/2017 1:08:00 PM
You always invoke so much emotion in your poetry, another great white Sandra, congrats
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/30/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brian, for your uplifting comments and congrats. Sandra
Date: 11/10/2016 9:43:00 PM
what a touching , beautiful poem you've written, many congrats on your win
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Date: 11/10/2016 1:25:00 PM
This brought tears to my eyes!!! heart-breakingly beautiful, Sandra. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Date: 11/8/2016 10:54:00 AM
Congrats well-done Loved your poem x
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/8/2016 6:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Wendy. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/8/2016 10:31:00 AM
Sandra congratulations on your win in the contest with this emotional and beautiful write~
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/8/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/8/2016 9:55:00 AM
This is a touching write about your mother, Sandra:) I'm sure she was a beauty like you:) congratulations:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/8/2016 6:32:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jo, for your wonderful comment and congratulations. She is dearly missed. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/21/2016 1:08:00 PM
Beautiful and tastefully written, Mrs Sandra. If she was anything like you, I'm sure she was most beautiful inside and out:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/24/2016 7:17:00 PM
Thank you again, Daniel, for your kind words. She was amazing. Sandra
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