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I stand among lilies of restful souls That innocence was restored after death. With a harp of sweetness that weeps and rolls, Drowning in tears in the last precious breath. Soil sprinkled over, after forced away, As essence storms within; nothingness turns Dusky dimness and silence of grief stay. I whimper in sorrow a flame that burns. Loosen consecrate loam waiting to heal, As sweet engaging scents croon throughout spring – Before the frost of forgetfulness steal A handful carried daffodil, bells ring. Death most stolen, bewitch the afternoon From ceaseless fields of promises to time. Still, I taunt times ethereal wings soon. None listens to my mournful silent chime. 7/13/2022 It's All About Three Q's Poetry Contest Theme : Death Sponsored by: Constance La France Quatrain 4 line stanzas abab, cdcd etc x4, 10 syllable lines

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Date: 8/9/2022 12:37:00 AM
"Before the frost of forgetfulness steal a handful carried daffodils, bell ring"... this is just so deep Eve... Your poem rose well to the challenge with the theme 'Death'.... Congratulations on your win dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/8/2022 2:33:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Eve - so full of emotion. I love your first line especially ~ lillies of restful souls ~ so peaceful. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/7/2022 7:20:00 AM
A beautiful passionate write that tugs my heart my dear friend Eve. Congratulations on your well-deserved top win and this superb piece! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you and your writings always. Hugs
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Date: 8/5/2022 5:41:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my contest with your beautiful Quatrain, excellent writing, blessings ~ Constance
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Date: 8/4/2022 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve. This poem is like a mournful wind elegant and yet filled with sadness. So happy to see it on the winners list my friend. Blessings coming your way!
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Date: 8/1/2022 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sad write. Have a fun/great/blessed day................
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Date: 8/1/2022 5:27:00 AM
Very beautiful Eve. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 7/31/2022 7:14:00 PM
Back with Congratulations, Eve, on your first-place contest win! best regards
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Date: 7/31/2022 6:48:00 PM
Restful souls, no more pain just peace. Eve congratulations on your top win for a most masterful and precious piece! We are listening! ~Anaya
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Date: 7/21/2022 10:34:00 AM
I listen. Very full of emotions... great write. Ann
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Date: 7/16/2022 3:48:00 PM
I can sense the passion in this poem, Eve. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 7/14/2022 1:07:00 PM
this is elegant and gorgeous writing. I am sure it should rate high with Constance!
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Date: 7/13/2022 6:08:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem, Eve. This is a real masterpiece with very profound meanings and feelings behind it. Best wishes for the contest
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Date: 7/13/2022 2:28:00 PM
Dearest Eve, I am sure someone up there is listening to you. The heart is never silent, when it is chiming with sorrow. Lovely poem that has great depth and feeling behind it, Much love xo
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Date: 7/13/2022 8:48:00 AM
If this poem doesn't get with the first batch of number one, it will be a pity. What a lovely poem. Hugs.
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Date: 7/13/2022 2:46:00 AM
Life is the listener to happiness and elegy is the part of death!
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