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~ the whisperer's lie - a fast-growing creeper ~ quote by poet A whispering voice softly in the ears romantic words in heavenly harmony drops of love, completely out of bluish air She loves the message that was made from soft satin Along the way, lots of lessons were learned His whisper held power and secrets Her heart was breaking because of this cuteness a wonderful melody, betrayed by lies As a spider tail horned viper which attracts its prey, embellish the truth Lies as camouflage and ask for forgiveness Heartfelt romantic whisper, speak with a forked tongue 23.04.2023 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved - 'W' Words - Contest - Sponsored by: Constance La France 1st place in the contest

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/11/2023 10:07:00 AM

Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win with this poem of betrayal and heartbreak! What seemed so beautiful had no truth. Wonderfully written my friend! Blessings and hugs!

Jay Narain

Date: 5/4/2023 11:30:00 AM

Nice poem with meaningful artwork. Congratulations for your win,

Valsa George

Date: 4/27/2023 7:36:00 PM

Congratulations dear Smile on your first place win....

Constance La France

Date: 4/27/2023 12:07:00 PM

Sunshine, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poem with us in my Writing Challenge I love the image and quote, congratulations !

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/27/2023 3:58:00 AM

Back with a second comment on this work found here on the winner's list. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/26/2023 8:44:00 PM

"a wonderful melody, betrayed by lies", " As a spider tail horned viper which attracts its prey" - Beautiful. Congratulations!

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/26/2023 7:13:00 PM

So pleased while reading this hand Art of Sunshine. It is so mavaillous. Congratulations on your win in the Contest

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/26/2023 5:33:00 PM

This is a fantastic poem. Your thorough metaphor selection and perfect diction add another level of refinement to the outstanding verse you've crafted. Congrats on your win.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/26/2023 4:32:00 PM

A I said before, an exceptional poem Ann-Lise congratulations

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/26/2023 2:13:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Whisper" write again. Hugs... Have a great/blessed day.............

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/24/2023 6:55:00 PM

Because of this allure, charm or cuteness that he endows, she is stricken. Breathtaking, Sunshine!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/24/2023 6:54:00 AM

Sometimes what is whispered when it comes to light is not true. I enjoyed reading this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 4/24/2023 4:18:00 AM

Behind sweet whispers, there are plots to trap. We should have the prudence to escape the snares laid by wolves in lamb's clothing. Powerful poem and lovely diction, Smile. Hugs....

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/24/2023 1:38:00 AM

Brilliant dear Sunshine. Your poem produces such a fine painting. Hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/25/2023 1:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your lovely comment, Victor :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/23/2023 10:40:00 PM

A whisper can be the most prominent sound one will hear when it breaks a silence. You poem is exceptional Anne-Lise. Well done best wishes and hugs

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2023 10:04:00 PM

Wonderful, Sunshine:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:20:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, Jo :) - hugs

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/23/2023 8:34:00 PM

They say the devil's voice is sweet to hear, this is very alluring in the right way~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:23:00 AM

- Fake cuteness...don't bite the hook, Michelle ... thanks for the comment :) - hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/23/2023 7:07:00 PM

"The devil can cite scripture for his purpose" Shakespeare. Well penned, Anne.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:21:00 AM

- Daniel, many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Di11y Da11y

Date: 4/23/2023 12:39:00 PM

Compelling write, excellent entry for the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:20:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment, D.D. :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/23/2023 12:03:00 PM

No voice is more thunderous than the whisper of love, I say, my dearest Anne-Lise. Your poem proves this point. Excellently written. Be blessed.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:19:00 AM

- Many thanks for your precious comment and good wishes, Demetrios :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/23/2023 11:44:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, You penned a good poem using the word " whisper". A relationship can start out filled with love then it can take a turn for the worst. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:16:00 AM

- Lies will always be exposed, Alexis :) - Many thanks for your comment and good wishes :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/23/2023 11:14:00 AM

I enjoyed your "Whisper" write/picture. Good Luck. Hugs... Have a blessed day..........

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/24/2023 7:15:00 AM

- Many thanks for your comment and good wishes, Paula :) - hugs