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~ keep your mind awake ~ and in constant wonder ~ 
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                                        On diamond evenings
                               between the white wings of the moon
                                   and billions of galaxies and stars
                              Hold on to your dreams without a filter
                                   a journey into another dimension
                            with a vessel that sails on the moonbeams
                          against different numerical values and levels
                                    The enigmatic and unexplained
                    the borderland - between an outer and an inner reality

                                 The trip is magnificent and beautiful
                                As elevation in the human endeavour
                          of the weight attached to the shoulder buttons
                                   An experiential in a special class
                               The adventure ends in an exciting way -
                                  Arm wrestle with the Nemean Lion
                               which is the last star image in the east

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                                                 16.04.2023
                                        Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                     - 'U' Words - Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                          1st place in the contest

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/23/2023 1:38:00 PM

This is such an inspiring journey. I loved the "white wings of the moon" reference and the "hold on to your dreams with out a filter" Congratulations on this wonderful write. Enjoyed it.

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/19/2023 1:17:00 PM

Quite a trip you’ve brought us on Anne-Lise, I can see why you placed 1st in the contest, beautiful imagery an outstanding piece of work, cheers David

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2023 9:11:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, I was right! Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:18:00 AM

Sunshine, thank you so much for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations. ! Lovely and I love your quote and the image !

Paul Callus

Date: 4/19/2023 4:48:00 AM

Your journey into another dimension is such a lovely and striking one, Anne-Lise! To us humans there is a lot which is still unexplained, and that is why journeys like yours will not come to an end soon! ~ Congratulations on your win, my friend. Regards & Hugs // paul

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/19/2023 3:21:00 AM

This is an awesome write, so eloquent, so creative, just brilliant, and your ending fantastic. HUGS AND BLESSINGS DEAR FRIEND, Jennifer.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/19/2023 2:14:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this remarkable poem Ann-Lise - Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/19/2023 2:01:00 AM

Back to your beautiful poem with congratulations on your first place win, dear Smile. Hugs !

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/18/2023 8:44:00 PM

"the borderland - between an outer and an inner reality" - A great concept of the universe is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/18/2023 6:51:00 PM

"...between an outer and an inner reality" Love it Anne-Lise. Congratulations your win! :) hugs, Linda

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/18/2023 6:06:00 PM

Your poetry is A one today it has shine and beauty, all the way, congrats on your win Sunshine

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/18/2023 3:06:00 PM

Love the beautiful poem, picture and quote, Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your win. hugs :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 4:44:00 PM

- Many thanks for the comment and congratulations, Evelyn :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2023 2:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture/quote. Love this one. Hugs... Have a blessed day.................

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 4:43:00 PM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2023 1:20:00 PM

Back with congratulations on your contest win. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 4:43:00 PM

- Many thanks for the congratulations, Las :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2023 1:10:00 PM

very nicely done . Congrats on a well deserved first place.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 4:42:00 PM

- Many thanks for the congratulations,Andrea :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/18/2023 3:26:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one about the night sky. Are you able to see the aurora borealis where you live? How clear is the night sky there? This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:58:00 AM

- Yes, we can see the aurora borealis (occasionally) ... but not as colorful and strong as we see in the photo - Many thanks for your lovely comment, Sara :) - hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/18/2023 2:46:00 AM

This is a wondrous and inspiring poem that captivates the heart and mind of the reader. my dearest friend, Anne-Lise. Marvelously done! Hugs xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and wonderful comment, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 4/17/2023 5:21:00 PM

Very creative poetry, Anne-Lise. Great entry for the contest too. I enjoy the imagery and the intellect within your poem. Thanks for sharing, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:55:00 AM

- Many thanks my Texas friend, Bill ... a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs

I Am Anaya

Date: 4/17/2023 1:43:00 PM

Stunning, I wouldn't mind joining in the experiment and journey that ends in an exciting way. Striking imagery SS! Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:53:00 AM

- The journey is free ... please take your seat, Anaya :) - - Many thanks for visit and the lovely comment :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/17/2023 8:53:00 AM

Lovely poem, its effect heightened by a wonderful image. Universe comprises of millions of stars and galaxies and remain an unexplored mystery. All the Best dear Smile... Hugs !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:52:00 AM

- An adventure into the unknown ... glad you were with me on the journey ... thank you very much for lovely comment, Valsa :) - hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/16/2023 3:16:00 PM

On diamond evenings between the white wings of the moon and billions of galaxies and stars---what a wonderful way to begin the poem and invite the reader! Splendid write, Anne-Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:50:00 AM

- A long journey ... the weather must be nice ... :) - Many thanks for the wonderful comment, Vijay :) - hugs

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/16/2023 2:20:00 PM

a trek among the stars in wondrous wonder with this poem dear poet...well done and I didn't need to buy a ticket for the journey through the universe

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:48:00 AM

- My friends will get a free journey ... always :) - Many thanks, Frederic :) - hugs

Ann Peck

Date: 4/16/2023 1:52:00 PM

A lovely journey in the universe. I love: "the enigmatic and the unexplained, the borderland between - an outer and an inner reality..." Best of luck in contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:46:00 AM

- Many thanks for the well wishes and your lovely comment, Ann :) - hugs

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2023 1:40:00 PM

An amazing trip across the stars. Your poem is a joy to read since it takes the reader on an exciting journey; Anne-Lise. Warmest regards and best wishes

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/18/2023 9:45:00 AM

- Many thanks, Las ... glad you enjoy the trip :) - hugs