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- New Life Awakens -

With a loving heart, filled with peace and harmony In the afterbirth new life emerges An eternal optimist in Spite of living Starlight sparkles in this globe softly glistens Everything seems to be perfectly normal Gentle spirit refines where the thought is good Dream you shine a warm sunbeam gift We live for truth and justice sake The numbered days and duration of happy feelings A glimpses of human life takes shape Golden delicious fruit of Eden Happiness can not be conquered, it must be openly received A sun melting inside warm thoughts Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white My desires, my needs, my happiness As fallen people with meaningless deeds Dreamy cotton skies echo into one song The ability to grasp facts of nature around us Faraway mountains sailing yearns Over the hills a warm thought in breeze blows Starlight twinkles in the eyes of a dream Coasting along on a deep blue sea wave kiss Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :) 25.08.2015 Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/8/2015 12:20:00 PM
Wow! i loved the line very much "A sun melting inside warm thoughts Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white" where from we can filter out thoughts. Beautifully done my lovely lovely friend. Beautiful 7+ i feel. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/8/2015 12:43:00 PM
- I'm really glad you noticed that line ..... I love this, me too :))) - Thanks for the warm words a 7 and pleasant visit, my friend Bl - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2015 4:05:00 AM
thank you everyone for the heartfelt beautiful comments wishing you all a lovely week
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Date: 9/2/2015 4:38:00 AM
- Congratulations to you also, always a pleasure writing with you dear friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/2/2015 4:03:00 AM
thank you anne lise for the pleasure of this write passing you a warm congratulation with smiles
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Date: 9/1/2015 5:52:00 PM
Warm sunbeam gifts light up the heart with happiness...Beautiful co-write Anne...
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Date: 9/2/2015 3:01:00 AM
- Thank you for comments and visits, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2015 12:42:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and Liam here on POTD!! Outstanding co-write by two extraordinarily talented poets!! Another Homerun here with this write. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:49:00 PM
- Dear Gary, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - I wish you a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/29/2015 7:43:00 AM
Sometimes two work beautifully as one, like in this incredible write and much deserved POTD !
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Date: 8/29/2015 2:52:00 PM
- It is a pleasure to write with Liam, our poetry has a special place in my heart - I wish you a great weekend, Dave - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2015 3:39:00 PM
Beautifully penned by two incredible poets and congratulations on poem of the day ~~
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Date: 8/29/2015 7:05:00 AM
- B.W., thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2015 2:56:00 AM
You two made POTD! :) Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs....
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:52:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2015 2:55:00 AM
You two made POTD! :) Congratulations, Sunshine! Hugs....
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:52:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/28/2015 12:07:00 AM
Wow, two great poets, one great poem! As I was reading this, I thought, this is something liam would like! Then I read you both wrote it!!! :)
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:51:00 AM
- It is always a pleasure to write with Liam - Thank you for visit, and comments, Arthur - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2015 12:29:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise n' Liam!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:44:00 PM
- Thanks for the congrats, Dorian - I've been very busy with "family duties" this month .... no time to so much "soup" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2015 8:24:00 AM
Lovely, This poem makes life worth it all.
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:46:00 PM
- Thank you Milton, words that make it worth to continue writing !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/27/2015 3:40:00 AM
Anne Lise, another gem from both of you!!! I enjoyed the imagery, wisdom stitched in the lines.. I read below that its chosen as poem of the day!! my BIG CONGRATULATIONS!! HUGS!!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Date: 8/27/2015 12:50:00 PM
- Both Liam and me very much appreciate getting the title p.o.t.d. :) - I've been very busy with "family duties" this month .... no time to so much "soup"- Thanks for visiting, congratulations and comments, dear Olive - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/27/2015 3:41:00 AM
belated thank you for greeting me in my birthday.. been off for awhile cause of holidays.. hugs and I hope you doing alright.. =')~Olive ELoisa praying a rain of blessings to you always.!=')
Date: 8/26/2015 8:28:00 PM
A lovely duet, well done both. Viv x
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:13:00 AM
- Glad you like it Viv, thank you for the lovely comment - I wish you a nice day - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 5:19:00 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day to both of you another wonderful write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:13:00 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 3:29:00 PM
another well-deserved POTD from a great tandem.. hope you are well, anne.. huggs!
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Date: 8/27/2015 7:11:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Nette - I wish you a wonderful day ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 3:28:00 PM
my name is Arsen and i make music to be honest I'm sort of new in this area but i made some songs that I really liked and i was curious to see how they would turn out if they had lyric and voice on them but unfortunately I'm not talented like you and I'm stuck i wanted to know if you could do me a favor and choose a song and make a lyric for it and i will do my best in recording and share the result with you. well thanks for your time and I hope to hear from you. with many thanks Arsen https://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/follow-me https://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/sunrise http://soundcloud.com/ransom-frozen/in-my-mind-in-my-hart and my email address is : ransomfrozen@gmail.com
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Date: 8/28/2015 3:55:00 AM
- This is a co-write with my friend Liam - I "own" only 50% of this poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 12:56:00 PM
Nice job you two and Congradulations on the POTD!
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Date: 8/26/2015 1:04:00 PM
- Edlynn, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 12:09:00 PM
Another beautiful product of your collab, Liam and Anne. congrats on Poem of the Day! hugs!
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:35:00 PM
- Dear Kim, thanks for the nice congratulating, always a pleasure to get credit for our work - I am very happy and proud of my "co - partner", Liam is excellent skilled !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 10:00:00 AM
with each new awakening....Love is just anticipating....where it can find its newest home....and your heart is where it belongs....this is a great poem of the day....;)
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:37:00 PM
- In your own heart, my friend Eric - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - I wish you a wonderful day ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 9:49:00 AM
What a beautiful poem for new birth. Congrats for POD!
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:38:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and congratulations, Marilyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 9:29:00 AM
Hey Anne Lise, BIG congratulations to you and Liam on your wonderful poem being chosen for POTD!! An absolutely excellent work of art and collaboration and a beautiful treatise on life and happiness. Well done! Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:42:00 PM
- Neva, thanks for the nice congratulating, always a pleasure to get credit for our work - I am very happy and proud of my "co - partner", Liam is excellent skilled !! - Glad you like it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 9:17:00 AM
love it!!!
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:39:00 PM
- Thank you for friendly visits and comments, Dennis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 7:52:00 AM
A well crafted poem Anne,congrats as the POTD...huggs
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Date: 8/26/2015 12:40:00 PM
- Kayod5, thank you for friendly visits and congratulations - Miss you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2015 7:24:00 AM
Ann-Lise,this is beautiful. Great collaboration! Congrats to you and Liam for having this piece get selected as poem of the day:-)Alexis
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Date: 8/26/2015 7:59:00 AM
- Both Liam and me very much appreciate getting the title p.o.t.d. :)- Thanks for visiting and comments, Alexis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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