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07.09.2023

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Dark or Decayed -
Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

The venomous claw sorrow's laughter stings a meek cry In the inevitable twilight where scorpions crawl grumpy and curly The fear ... morbid taste of gray ash on my parched tongue Put my demons to rest it's too dark to turn

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/14/2023 7:13:00 AM

I love this dark, demon-y write Anne-Lise! :)

Valsa George

Date: 9/11/2023 9:46:00 PM

Darkness in its ghoulish form.Great penning ! Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear friend! Love and hugs.....

Constance La France

Date: 9/10/2023 10:57:00 PM

Anne-Lise, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image, Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/10/2023 9:04:00 PM

A short poem full of images and word paintings. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/10/2023 8:49:00 AM

Back to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest podium. Your poetry is nothing short of breathtaking,

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/9/2023 12:54:00 AM

You had me at Line 1, loved this!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/8/2023 6:41:00 AM

Superb poetry! Good luck and blessings, dearest Anne-Lise!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/8/2023 2:18:00 AM

"In the inevitable twilight where scorpions crawl" This has really created an eerie ambience, sequined with darkness.. "Morbid taste of gray ash" Oh how so melancholic and aching.. Such a stunning write this is dear.. Brilliantly articulated with moving depth and heartfelt emotions of painstaking suffering.. Sending love- best of luck in the contest!

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/7/2023 3:18:00 PM

awesome, a breathtaling poem, with delicious images, enjoyed a lot almost frightened by scorpions crawling, you "did it" with talent, thanks

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 9/7/2023 1:07:00 PM

Hi Anne Lise, Yes, this is quite vivid with imagery and quite dark. Best of luck in your contest dear poetess.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/7/2023 10:33:00 AM

II was not scared of dark that much, but now I will be. Nice portrayal of dark,

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/7/2023 8:52:00 AM

Quite a dark and forboding verse Anne Lise. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2023 8:51:00 AM

Good one for the dark theme. Love how you closed it out.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/7/2023 8:35:00 AM

I have chills down my spine. A wonderful write.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/7/2023 7:45:00 AM

WOW!!! What a write/picture. Evil go far away. Only good light here. Have a great/blessed day writing away..............

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2023 7:10:00 AM

I really love how you write dark, your way with words, and how descriptive you are in such a concise manner truly is impeccable. Theres so many lines i love in this like “ in the inevitable twilight where scorpions crawl” whoa! I love “ grumpy and curly” too, “ put my demons to rest, its too dark to turn “ brilliant ending. Soul hitting write this is. Loveee this

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/7/2023 6:25:00 AM

Anne-Lise, your poem is exquisitely crafted and evokes stunning visual imagery. It skillfully captures the emotions that your photo portrays, immersing the reader in its depth and intensity. The darkness portrayed in your work is both captivating and thought-provoking.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/7/2023 4:58:00 AM

I see what you mean! You brought the feelings of your photo to the fore. Dark it is!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2023 5:35:00 AM

- The photo is just the icing on the cake, Vijay :) - Many thanks :) - hugs

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/7/2023 3:56:00 AM

Delightfully spooky! Well done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2023 5:38:00 AM

- Evil feeling that you feel in the spinal cord ... rasping claws ... yes, it is scary and spooky Joe :) - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/7/2023 3:49:00 AM

A touch of the dark that I love so much. You did well Anne Lise. So dark emotions.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2023 5:32:00 AM

- Many thanks for reading and leaving your comment, Victor :) - hugs

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2023 2:29:00 AM

Wonderful writing - DARK! for sure, but so poetic. God bless you, sweet friend. Love, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2023 5:31:00 AM

- ... I have entered a "dark" tunnel ... three dark poems in three days ... now it must be sunny :))) - Many thanks, Gina :) - hugs