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Deborah Guzzi writes full time. Her third book, The Hurricane is available through Prolific Press. https://prolificpress.com/bookstore/prolific-books-c-12/the-hurricane-by-deborah-guzzi-p-151.html Her poetry appears in Allegro, Artificium, Shooter, & The Foxglove Journal in the UK, Subterranean Blue, Existere, The Ekphrastic Review, Scarlet Leaf Review & Subterranean Blue Poetry, Canada - Tincture, Australia - mgv2>publishing, France Cha: Asian Review, China - Vine Leaves Literary Journal, Australia - The Scarlet Leaf Review - Greece, Ribbons, pioneertown, Sounding Review, Bacopa Literary Review, The Aurorean, Liquid Imagination, The Tishman Review, Page & Spine & others in the USA. 


THE TENTH POEM & stragelers

Blog Posted:1/6/2016 9:51:00 AM

Hi everyone,

I did something like this for Lorette at Ekphrastic: Writing on Art and Art on Writing. I am offering you the opportunity to write 10 publishable poems in 10 days. I will edit the work for you IF YOU'D LIKE.  I will post it here I will only accept the first to sign up. 1. Andrew  2.. Kim  3. Robert  4. Craig  5. Danetta  6. Jeanette  7. Olive

Ekphrastic: Writing on Art and Art on Writing  [this site ACCEPTS reprints] http://www.ekphrastic.net/submissions.html

PAINTING  #1

Blue and Green Music by Georgia O'Keeffe 1921

Write anything that comes to mind in any form based on both your intellectual and emotional response to this painting.

PAINTING #2 

Portrait of Carol Nye Rhoades (Robinson) by Katherine Nash Rhoades 1915

PAINTING #3

The Blue Cat by Pamela Colman Smith 1907

PAINTING  #4

Lake by Georgia Engelhard 

#5

Autumn in France by Emily Carr 1911

#6

Theater by Mary Cassatte 1879

#7

 Twilight Confidences by Cecilia Beaux 1888

#8

 L'Enfant au Tablier Rouge, 1886 by Berthe Morisot

#9

Morning at the Quay in Venice by Helen Allingham

#10

Thistle in a Field, by Fidelia Bridges  1875

My choices are purely SUBJECTIVE

Painting #1 verse Beyond the Paint by Kim Patrice Nunez
                              Nature's Psalms by Olive Eloisa Guillermo
          
Painting #2 verse A Note to My Niece by Craig Cornish
                              A Mother's Envy & Pride by Kim Patrice Nunez
Painting #3 verse Magical Mountain Where Blue Cat Resides
by Robert Lindley
Painting #4 verse Swept Away by Danetta Barney
                              Frozen by Jeanette Jones
Painting #5 verse Gifted by Kim Patrice Nunez

Painting #6 verse Fragile by Danetta Barney

Painting #7 verse Two Mayflower Maidens by Andrew Crisci

Painting #8 verse  Mice and Me by Jeanette Jones
                               The Impressionist Daughter by Andrew Crisci

Painting #9 verse Morning Wait by Kim Patrice Nunez
                              The Lagoon by Craig Cornish

Painting #10 verse Thistles Growing in my Grass by Andrew Crisci
                                 There was a Valley Meadow Resting There by R. Lindley

There Was A Valley Meadow Resting There

There was a valley meadow resting there,
plant life flourishing in its golden views.
Painted on canvas brings awe inspired stare
marveling at multi-colored hues.

Dancing beneath a decorated sky,
were vivid colors bouncing back and forth.
Artist, image, soft colors blend to tie
with clouds breezing above from the cold North.

Captured beauty, splashed on by artist's paints,
breathlessness in its tantalizing scenes,
paradise complete yet where are the saints
praising it by any and every means?

Splashed canvas held scenes of grass and flowers.
We gasp at all those colored showers!

 

Thistles Growing In My Grass
Thistle in a Field, by Fidelia Bridges  1875

Hurdles have been a battle of compromises,
worse than thistles growing in my grass;
they prick me when I weed them out;
and I bleed on them when I'm fraught.

Two souls crossed this long path of sultry stillness,
one gladly went away, the other sadly stayed;
Restless is the one feeling wrath. The unfairness
of fate is a crucial debate hurling words of hatred.

The farther these footsteps trudge,
the longer time delays their aim;
hardening the core of rightful claim.
The unuttered rage is another unheard cry
of my wailing and it may suddenly  
cease along with the essence of my existence.

Absurd the thought, the pretense of not weeping, 
there's much unneeded silence in this field of weeds;
much has been endured at the bristling point of leaves-
unable to find shade under a tree, I burn painfully.

Life must return with the thrilling
sounds of robins and blue jays,  
with gaudy flowers rising in the spring,
and with a happy deer that leaps.

I won't be a keeper of another failed quest;
blackened clouds of a treacherous storm
will turn bright by sunset...
to bring all things to norm.

Yes, tomorrow will open doors and dismiss 
restlessness, promising days without tears;
I'll be able to live my life,without counting years,
getting rid of the thistles growing in my grass.

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Date: 1/18/2016 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations to Craig & Robert for Debbie's picks. Both poems have brought out your poetic forte. This challenge was proof of your endurance--the desire to excel, to display your poetical talents. Best wishes and be proud of this accomplishment. Warmest Regards, Andrew.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/18/2016 7:38:00 PM
Thanks, as quite well do yours too. Seems to me that every poet that participated profited greatly from the experience, I know that I did myself. Your entries exhibited much to be admired.
Date: 1/18/2016 8:17:00 AM
Congrats to Andrew and Robert on having their poems chosen by Debbie for Painting 10! Impressive both in form and content. Way to go, friends! :-)
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Date: 1/18/2016 3:27:00 AM
Hi Debbie, just passed three poems wahhhh... need four more to go.. :(.. I hope in the next two days il be able to finish them... =`) thanks much for the fruitful challenge.. =`) the painting sreally hard to interpret... :P hehehe thanks for the patience..~Olive Eloisa
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/18/2016 3:42:00 AM
just awhile back I read your message regarding my poem: COGNIZANT BUT NOT REPENTANT regarding not centering.. =`) I edit all not not centered.. =`) thanks much!
Date: 1/17/2016 10:12:00 PM
Olive hasn't finished yet, BUT if you'd like perhaps we should work on your biographies for your submissions? & I show you how to PUT a picture on the page OK?
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/17/2016 11:32:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. You've been awesome and been very patient...:-))) Bless you much!
Date: 1/17/2016 9:53:00 PM
Congratulations to Kim, Olive, Craig, Andrew, Danetta, Jeanette for having such beautiful poems chosen representing those paintings and the joint effort working with Debbie in presenting as superbly finished pieces!
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/18/2016 6:05:00 AM
I am so grateful to have my poems amongst such great poetry.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/17/2016 11:29:00 PM
Hi Robert. Your sonnet for Painting 10 just flows with beauty. Congrats!
Date: 1/17/2016 9:41:00 AM
My congratulations to all that participated in this rewarding and generously gifted exercise by our multi-talented friend Debbie Guzzi. I've learned much from this and its been an honor learning from Debbie again! She is tops in my book ...
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/17/2016 7:47:00 PM
Yes, this has been great. Thank you Debbie for your time and expertise. I have been stretched beyond what I thought I could do. Thank you.
Date: 1/17/2016 1:41:00 AM
Congratulations Craig for such a beautiful poem.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/17/2016 1:48:00 AM
Those two questions were supposed to be a smiley face, not sure what happened there.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/17/2016 1:44:00 AM
Congratulations to Olive as well. Great write. ??
Date: 1/16/2016 10:18:00 PM
The Lagoon is a beautiful, pensive write. It mirrors life and reflects both the writer's wider perspective and wisdom gained from experience. Way to go, Craig...
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Date: 1/16/2016 6:02:00 AM
Hi Debbie, thank you so much for this beautiful experience, Im pleased that you consider my first poem.. =`) Im not able to send still the others as i have problems in my connection.. I'll send it sometime soon..~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/17/2016 6:12:00 AM
thank you Danetta.. Im actually having a hard time catching up with my connections uncooperative and so my work time.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/17/2016 1:53:00 AM
Great write Olive.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/16/2016 10:07:00 PM
Happy for you, Olive! :-)
Date: 1/15/2016 8:33:00 PM
Debbie, this is fantastic! These are some hard working poets and this showcases what tweaking can accomplish. Some here know how many times I revise my poems. The process takes time and a willingness to come at something from a different angle. Hon, may I suggest that you add links if you can? 13 poems? It takes having two poetry soup screens open, one, the design view of blog and the other, the home page to find those poems. Soupers, I'm sure, will want to read all these gems! Some may just be time pressed to find them. Having a list of links that they can simply hit the back arrow... it is reader friendly. These poems deserve to be read. Hmmm... hon, I can do this for you...
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 1/16/2016 7:12:00 AM
Monday, I will do this in an email. then you just copy and paste the email into your blog and it SHOULD work. I do this all the time on my blogs. No time this weekend. xoxox Dee
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/15/2016 8:46:00 PM
Yes Dee, I don't know how to do this - add the links? I would love to show all this great writing!
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Cyndi Macmillan
Date: 1/15/2016 8:36:00 PM
Let me know... you are so wonderful to provide this kind of editing to these folks. Free lance editors can charge mega bucks for this kind of help and advice. I used to attend workshops led by Brian Henry... who helped edit KELLY ARMSTRONG! (BITTEN series.)
Date: 1/15/2016 5:34:00 PM
I too am struck by Olive's creativity. I am blessed by what each one has brought and shared with Debbie's challenge. Go Olive!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/15/2016 5:45:00 PM
*I meant editing in verse 4 which gave it more powerful emotion... :-)
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/15/2016 5:37:00 PM
Belatedly noticed another one there... That was for painting 9, Deb... but thank you once again for the editing which made the imagery come alive. Feeling blessed...:-)
Date: 1/15/2016 10:53:00 AM
WOW....GO ME and ANDREW. What an honor to be selected among such elite artist of WORDS. Congratulations Andrew.
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/15/2016 11:26:00 AM
Debbie, you are so awesome, encouraging little o'me to do my best at penning poetry. Writing is in my blood, but POETRY...has ALWAYS been a struggle for me. Thank you so very much as I am ever so grateful.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/15/2016 11:20:00 AM
yes, go you & Andrew!
Date: 1/14/2016 8:14:00 PM
My big congratulations to Jeanette & Danetta for their beautiful poems. I admire Debbie for her brilliant editing. Editors & Publishers won't send us rejection slips when we submit them! I am confident that we are on the road to success! Thanks for sharing your poetry with me. Best wishes to all. Hugs, Andrew.
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/15/2016 11:02:00 AM
I recieve that hug Andrew. I am fairly new at writing poetry so quickly. Now using art, my inner artist of WORDS is rising. My next book just may be one of POETRY....uhm.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/15/2016 12:55:00 AM
Yes, Debbie is awesome. We should throw her a poetry soup potluck now that this challenge is drawing to a close. My dish would be BBQ marinated Swedish meatballs. lol
Date: 1/14/2016 8:05:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie. It looks great, thanks to your professional editing. I am as much overjoyed by your pick as the other poets are. I have learned a lot from this awesome experience. I never thought that your editing would make me look at poetry differently. Have a wonderful night. Peace & Love, Andrew.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/14/2016 9:28:00 PM
Yes, it's quite an experience and very few are willing to do it for you. Kind of a Hurricane Press has an Editor who will help you & Grey Wolfe Publishing- Legends will also.
Date: 1/14/2016 8:01:00 PM
Hi Debbie, thanks for this exercise.. =`) Congratulations to everyone!!! =`) Im very far behind.. ~ Olive Eloisa =`)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/14/2016 8:04:00 PM
but she's catching up fast!
Date: 1/14/2016 7:36:00 PM
Yes, congratulations to Jeanette and Andrew. Great job! :)
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:19:00 PM
Congrats to Jeanette and again to Andrew!
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Date: 1/13/2016 11:02:00 PM
Thanks Debbie for your surprise.I am very honored and thrilled for this pick. I visited your blog earlier and went back to finish a new poem for Skat's contest which I have just posted. Thanks again for your great editing. You must be worn out. Get some sleep. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations Danetta and Andrew on your WINNING verses. Very intriguing works. Keep at it guys.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/13/2016 10:57:00 PM
Thanks Jeanette.
Date: 1/13/2016 8:41:00 PM
Thanks Robert and Kim. Congratulations Andrew.
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Date: 1/13/2016 8:23:00 PM
Congratulations, Danetta and Andrew! Two very fine poems that show great talent on display!
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:08:00 PM
Congrats, Danetta and Andrew! It is wonderful to see how each of our own individuality gives a different perspective to these works of art. Way to go! :-)
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/13/2016 8:00:00 PM
Humbled and appreciative, Deb :-)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/13/2016 7:19:00 PM
You have compiled a wonderful body of work Kim, as have the other poets!
Date: 1/12/2016 10:48:00 PM
Congratulations Kim. A truly superb poem that transmits the meaning of the title in more ways than just one.....
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/12/2016 11:01:00 PM
Thank you, Robert! :-)
Date: 1/12/2016 10:24:00 PM
I think I sent Debbie 4 versions. I was not satisfied with the first, so I sent revised versions one after another, knowing she hasn't read the first ones yet (we have different time zones). When she finally replied with an edited version (verb tense and that brilliant stroke of personification in the last stanza) I still made another revision, as there were still a couple of things (i.e., spelling checked by a respected poet and an important word added in the 1st line courtesy of another). I welcome them, kind, tactful advice addressed directly to me ( through soupmails if one has time). I am learning a lot from this challenge. Thank you, Deb, for all that you do for the community. :-)))
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/13/2016 8:13:00 PM
Thank you Craig
Date: 1/12/2016 10:19:00 PM
Congrats Kim!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/12/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 1/12/2016 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations Kim. I absolutely love that poem. :)
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/12/2016 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Danette! :-)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/12/2016 9:47:00 PM
You're a sweety Danetta ;)
Date: 1/12/2016 7:27:00 PM
Wow...great feels! Again, thank you, Deb!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/12/2016 9:48:00 PM
Kim tell the folks how many times you reworked the verse.
Date: 1/12/2016 9:05:00 AM
Debbie! Debbie! Debbie! You are AWESOME. Thanks for all your editing. You are GREAT!
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:17:00 AM
Wow, Debbie! You did an incredible editing on my poem # 8. I am very impressed and pleased. Thank you.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/12/2016 9:25:00 AM
Glad to be of help Andrew :)
Date: 1/12/2016 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations Jeanette Jones for Debbie's pick for painting number four! Great poem about serenity and the power of the human soul....
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:49:00 AM
Congratulations to you Robert Lindsey on your verse on Blue Cat, Magical Mountain Where Blue Cat Resides.
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Date: 1/12/2016 12:18:00 AM
Congratulations to both Danetta and Jeannette. Beautiful verses made me want to read and reread. You both rock!
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/12/2016 12:53:00 AM
*Kim Patrice Nunez, whom I inadvertently called Patricia, that intriguing name of my late mother. Two wins put you at the top of the bunch. Keep up the great work.
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/12/2016 12:45:00 AM
Thank you Patricia and congrats to you on both of your entries, Beyond the Paint and A Mother's Envy & Pride. I'm loving that we all see something different in each picture and share it with one another.
Date: 1/11/2016 7:05:00 PM
I just sent my poem for Painting #10. I have enjoyed this challenge so much. Thank you Debbie for all the great edit. What is NEXT for us? LOL
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/11/2016 7:46:00 PM
Ok, I'm thinking...:D
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/11/2016 7:37:00 PM
must rest & write -I will think& you think- what would you like to learn?
Date: 1/11/2016 6:19:00 PM
I'm so, so honored right now.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/11/2016 7:09:00 PM
I'm glad Jeanette you took a very hard challenge and excelled at it many, many others not as seasoned as you were hesitant to try. Look at your wonderful results! Sometimes pressure brings out the best in us!
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/11/2016 6:20:00 PM
I feel* so, so honored right now.
Date: 1/11/2016 6:13:00 PM
OMG...I'm FROZEN. Wow, I'm still a work in progress but....I'm FROZEN. See, I was FROZEN at the LAKE (my computer), thinking of something to say (type) and it was so well worth it. Thanks Debbie for critiquing my silly thoughts put onto paper. My brains on fire alright. I'm a realistic romantic, so my mind goes to several places at once, sometimes, lol.
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:34:00 PM
Hi, Debbie. I have sent Poem # 9. I will work on Poem # 10 today. It has been a challenge and also a delight in writing 9 poems from your posted pictures. I have one more to write. I hope you are enjoying your day.
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:48:00 PM
Hi Debbie. I wrote a poem a few months back to a photo I took a few years ago, never knowing that it had a name. This poetry challenge is making me do my homework on Ancient Art and Words. Very interesting stuff. With that being said, I've posted my poem based on Portrait No. 9, yay. New at this but liking it.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/11/2016 4:53:00 PM
got them you holy terror you- you with your fingers & brain on fire!
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/11/2016 2:51:00 PM
Posted # 6, #7, #8 and #9 today.
Date: 1/11/2016 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations Danetta for Debbie's pick for painting number four! I can relate very strongly with your fine poem.
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/11/2016 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Robert. (nice name, my youngest son's name is Robert lol). Also, congratulations on you poem as well. :)
Date: 1/11/2016 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Robert for Debbie's pick # 3. It's an awesome poem written with vivid images of pure magic. Thanks for sharing it.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 1/11/2016 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Andrew. You are correct Debbie has been fantastic in her advising and editing assistance. She has very keen poetic insight and sense of the message being delivered in the poet's inspired words. And thats a gift she generously shares!
Date: 1/11/2016 7:13:00 AM
Poem # 8 is on its way, Debbie. I am almost there- two more to go! I will log in tonight to view picture # 9. Have a terrific Monday.
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Date: 1/10/2016 8:19:00 PM
I made the necessary changes you suggested for Poem # 7. Once again, your editing is top notch. Thanks for your time and effort. Have a goodnight. Hugs, Andrew.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/10/2016 10:06:00 PM
a pleasure Andrew
Date: 1/10/2016 6:31:00 PM
My congratulations to Kim and Craig on their beautiful poems, both are superb examples of inspired poetry!
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Date: 1/10/2016 6:26:00 PM
Thank you for your insightful editing advice and this very instructive learning experience! Thanks again for this opportunity to enjoy this great learning experience.The blue cat poem was my favorite of the 6 I had finished, only just now have I posted poem number 7. I am very honored that you chose that poem for painting number three!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/10/2016 7:05:00 PM
I loved the whole verse Robert & the end was GREAT!
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 6:29:00 PM
Loved your poem, Robert. I struggled with that one but yours is great! :-)
Date: 1/10/2016 6:24:00 PM
Hi Deb. Thanks again. hugs!
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Date: 1/10/2016 5:18:00 PM
Jeanette somethings wrong with your links best tell PS through the Contact Us link on the very bottom of each page scroll all the way down.
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Jeanette Jones
Date: 1/10/2016 6:02:00 PM
My second poem to Submit Poem didn't go through the first time. I believe that may be what it was. I went the second time. Let me know. Thanks.
Date: 1/10/2016 5:08:00 PM
Debbie, you are quick. :) As soon as I clicked the send button on Painting #7...poof...incoming mail. Thanks.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 6:28:00 PM
Thanks Danetta! Would love to read your poems later. :-)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/10/2016 5:10:00 PM
soon I will be brain dead LOL
Date: 1/10/2016 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Debbie for my edits. I am learning a lot from you. :)
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Danetta Barney
Date: 1/10/2016 2:31:00 PM
Yes, thank you. I am leaping for joy at the opportunity. I'm about to work on painting #7
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/10/2016 2:20:00 PM
you are growing in LEAPS & bounds if you like I will help you pick which ones to sent to Lorrette OR you can send them all I think [though maybe it's 3 I forget]
Date: 1/10/2016 1:46:00 PM
Yes, congratulations to Kim and Craig for such awesome poetry. :)
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 6:26:00 PM
Thanks again, Andrew! :-)
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 6:25:00 PM
Thanks, Danetta! :-)
Date: 1/10/2016 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations, Kim on your poem being chosen by Debbie. It's an awesome poem that inspires and delights my heart. Best Wishes. Have a Happy Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Kp Nunez
Date: 1/10/2016 6:31:00 PM
Thanks, Andrew! :-)
Date: 1/10/2016 1:03:00 PM
Thank you, Debbie for your awesome editing. I am worn out, but it's worth the challenge! Best wishes to Kim & Craig for their beautiful poems. Have a terrific Sunday. Hugs, Andrew.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 1/10/2016 2:22:00 PM
Dee helped me learn how to edit sweetly ;) Cyndie is a peach!She sent me self editing books and BEGGED me to read them LOL
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1/2/2018 Less Than Perfect Haibunintrospection,
7/30/2017 War and Peace Free verseage,betrayal,truth,
7/27/2017 Mein Kampf My Struggle Haibunanxiety,racism,,atheist,
7/24/2017 Displaced In Kathmandu Haibunanxiety,fear,war,,western
6/8/2017 Haiku 1a Haikulife,
4/24/2017 Swingin On a Star Free verseallusion,art,beauty,
4/9/2017 A Lost Kind Returns Sonnetfreedom,heartbroken,loss,
3/28/2017 Behind the Architects Crystal Lens Verseart,travel,
3/3/2017 Shadow Puppets Sonnethumor,
2/14/2017 Daughter of Oak and Ash Pantoumcaregiving,love,racism,
1/26/2017 The Moons Yellow Eyes Haibunevil,farewell,
1/10/2017 High Noon At Karnak Free versehistory,
9/21/2016 Cairns Edge Lyricage,autumn,ocean,
9/10/2016 Prickly Heat Haibunlost love,
7/19/2016 Repeter Depuis Le Debut Free verseart,marriage,
7/19/2016 It Is a Rose Sprung Free verseabuse,meaningful,race,rel
7/8/2016 The Sparrows of Dom St Peter Versechildren,faith,music,
5/13/2016 Golden Disks and Whale Clicks Free verseearth,eulogy,
5/1/2016 Cathedrale St Sauveur Aix En Provence, France Verseart,faith,
4/12/2016 Neap Tide Blank verseage,beauty,love,
4/2/2016 Red Sky Over Cairo Free verseanxiety,fear,travel,
3/31/2016 Monet's Garden Villanelleart,travel,vacation,
1/31/2016 A Hail Mary Pass To the Twenty-First Century Free verseanger,angst,bullying,fear
1/31/2016 Breathless Prose Poetryhope,
1/29/2016 The Guardian At the Gate Ekphrasismyth,
1/16/2016 You Gotta Have Heart Ekphrasisart,
1/6/2016 Spectors of Doom Shapeangst,war,
1/5/2016 Blood Masks the Lea Rondeaudeath,war,
1/4/2016 A Swallows Tears Sonnetaddiction,suicide,
12/14/2015 A Blooded, Virgin, Night Free versepain,
12/5/2015 Madelaine's Chalice Versedevotion,love,
11/29/2015 Blessed Be Versenature,
11/29/2015 Ho-Ho-Ho Haibunholiday,
11/17/2015 Golden Disks and Whale Clicks Free versespace,
11/9/2015 Spare Change Coupletseasons,
10/29/2015 Cymbals of Winter Free verseurban,wind,winter,
10/28/2015 Death Undignified, Fort Laramie 1860 Sestinamemory,
10/27/2015 A Kneaded Life Haibunage,dream,love,
10/23/2015 The Sowing Free verseirony,violence,women,
10/21/2015 When Madness Rides On Moonlight Sestinaanxiety,art,depression,su
10/19/2015 St Brigids Well Sonnetchildren,spiritual,women,
10/12/2015 Gobsmacked Gams Terzanelleallegory,art,childhood,
10/12/2015 To Dumb To Lay Down Free verseallegory,
9/20/2015 Verbous and Obscure Blitzallusion,
9/11/2015 Put the Past Aside - the Dark Side of the Moon Versedepression,
8/23/2015 The Melting Pot Prosechildhood,
8/8/2015 Howl Beyond Reason Blitzanalogy,crazy,word play,
8/7/2015 Under and Over Blitzfear,universe,
8/5/2015 Vive La Liberte Free verseviolence,visionary,war,
8/3/2015 Underground Art Montmartre Free verseart,
7/23/2015 Maudlin Mary Ekphrasisallusion,symbolism,woman,
7/20/2015 Fire-Crackers Acrosticdeath,war,
7/20/2015 Mary's Shrift Free versedevotion,discrimination,
7/20/2015 Stoned Free verseanger,,literature,
7/20/2015 Top Dressing Free versespring,daffodils,
7/13/2015 Just Desserts and Appetizers Haibunboat,fun,summer,
7/7/2015 Brooding Rooted Free versebeauty,blessing,
6/26/2015 Summer Stews Sijofun,
6/19/2015 False Love Quintain (English)lost love,
6/14/2015 Risen From the Foam Ottava rimaallegory,beauty,love,
6/4/2015 Cling Sijoadventure,
5/14/2015 The Mirage Free versebeauty,family,
4/29/2015 A Day In the Life of a Bag of Potatoes Free versechange,
4/28/2015 Spider Robinson's Plug In Sijoaddiction,
4/27/2015 The Sandy Shoal Free versedeath,
4/26/2015 A Stream of Laughter Free versechildren,nature,
4/25/2015 Boxed In Free verseabsence,beauty,love,
4/21/2015 Pick Your Poison Acrosticabuse,death,
4/20/2015 The Tall Ships Burn Villanelleart,
4/19/2015 I, Icon Acrosticself,
4/17/2015 The Song of Deborah Bioallegory,
4/15/2015 Barred Camp Sonnetfunny,
4/15/2015 Cross Pollination Versefaith,nature,
4/13/2015 The Wayward Child Pantoumfairy,
4/12/2015 Straw Men Free verseallusion,planet,
4/5/2015 Elemental Answers To Being Verselife,
4/3/2015 Mother's Days Acrosticmother,
4/2/2015 Sun and Life Painting By Frida Kahlo 1947 Free verseart,
3/31/2015 Afi 9th Art Wave Tankaart,
3/31/2015 Afi Tag Art Tankaart,
3/28/2015 Van Gogh Sans Une Oreille Free verseart,
3/27/2015 School's Out Haibunkiss,snow,
3/21/2015 The Teetotaler Terzanellememory,
3/20/2015 The Sin and God Within Verseallusion,faith,forgivenes
3/20/2015 A Penny For My Thoughts Sonnetcreation,
3/18/2015 What Dreams Are Made Of Versefear,night,
3/15/2015 Steamers Free versesummer,
3/10/2015 A Mother Drawn Free versebeauty,birth,earth,faith,
3/9/2015 The Precipice Free verseart,
3/5/2015 The Score Free verseloneliness,night,
3/3/2015 Moonlight Serenade Haibunsensual,
3/1/2015 Trumpets of the Dawn Sonnetflower,
3/1/2015 Femme Fatales Balladbirth,mythology,woman,
2/28/2015 The Doldrums of March Free verseloneliness,daffodils,
2/26/2015 Death Tolls Free versebeach,beauty,bird,ocean,
2/24/2015 Forgotten Valentine Haibunsad,
2/21/2015 Ice Castings Pantoumbeauty,

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Fav Poems

PoemTitleFormCategories
God Free verselife,mystery,
Hard Times Cowboy Poetrycowboy-western,family,fun
For Things Once Counted Rhymeintrospection,loss,uplift
Petal Verselove,
Defender of the Wastes Free verseart,life,parody,world,
Birth Imagismchildhood,life
This Is Why I Woo Words Verseart,inspirational,philoso
Forbear Free versesad,
Belongings Rhymeloss,love,me,mother,
Gold Fever Free versefaithfaith,political,pers
Splattered I do not know?life
Echo Quatrainlost lovewords,love,
Bells (After Poe) Lyricpassion
Respectfully, Emily Dickinson Lyricintrospection,
Give the End Back To the Beginning Free versededication,faithme,
The Bruised and Rotting Pear Coupletfaith,hope
Fly Free verseanimals
Abc's For a Young Captain ABClife
Not Entirely About Living In New York Free verselifeworld,light,light,
Woodcutter I do not know?warold,old,
Dreams Free versefaith,forgiveness
A Feed of Chips Narrativefunny
Weep O Willows Versedeath
Harlem Blues Free verseblack-african amerchildre
Summers Everlasting Free versenostalgia
Easter Ivy Narrativefriendshipeaster,cousin,
End of Days Rhymeinspirational,lifeme,war,
Past-Life Nightmare Narrativeautumn,mystery,
I Dream of You (To Jew) Free verseimagination,lovenight,swe
Jellyfish Back Strophe Imagismallegory,nature,on writin
Disposable Wisdom Rhymeage,cat,endurance,life,wi
Loneliness Rhymeintrospection,life
Remission (In Memory of William Watt). Elegybrother,death,nostalgiawo
The Day That Died Forever Free verseadventure,angst,art,confu
Heritage Quatrainadventure,cowboy-western,
Summer Matinee Narrativebrother,me,
The Moon and I I do not know?hope,life,love,nature,pea
Seeking, Searching Free verseimaginationlove,universe,
Before Spring Came Narrativeadventure,animals,childho
Pledge Sonnetdevotion
Wild Cherries Free versedevotion,nature,nostalgia
Words From the Oracle Layallegory,philosophy
Science Free verse 
Mona Lisa Resembles Chokaart
And With Merriest Spirit Quintain (English)faith,father,holiday,insp
Cotton-Pickin' Paradise Versechildhood,life,nostalgia,
Where the Sycamore Grew Narrativeautumn,family,house,life,
Larks Free versedeath,devotion,imaginatio
Big Bang Limerickfunny,science,
Winter (Do Not Forget Among the Loss of Flowers) Me Free verse 
Let I do not know?loveme,me,
He Was Smoking Hot I do not know?funny
Alabaster Night Free versenature,planet,sea,
Haunted Orb Haikufantasy,nature
This Night Sonnet 
Tombstones & Teacups Rhymeallegory,childhood,death,
Today Not Tomorrow Free versededication,depression,gir
Years of the Rose Free verselost love,loveday,
The Joy That Sweetly Stays Free verse 
Cinder Girl Rhyme 
Biography (Thesis Statement) Versehistory,life,philosophyli
Figure Fusion Verseart,sports
Dancing Bird - With Video Link Free verseanimals,introspection,nat
Poem For a Sensuous Poet Free versefantasy,on writing and wo
The Road Walked Down Through the Years Rhymelife,on writing and words
The Iceman Cometh! Rhymenostalgia
He Says/ She Says Narrativelife
I'Ve Seen So Many Sonnetintrospectionnight,night,
Searching For Michelangelo Free verseart,hope,life,people,imag
Indifference Free verse 
Realisation of Self (War Child) Free verseme,me,
Reporting Live On the Soup (Colorado) Rhymefunnyme,me,,western,
Late At Night Lyricimaginationme,fear,me,
Reverencing Nature Balladfaith,naturenature,heart,
Dreams Coupletimagination
I Exist Pantoumintrospectionlife,me,
Madrid: Circa 1974 Blank versenostalgia,travel,
Magnolia Song Free verselove,romance,
Yellow Bus Roars Through Haikuallegory,nature,places
Ethel's Remedies Rhymefunny,people
A Dream In the Mist Narrativefantasy,imagination,natur
Volga 1 - 3 Prose Poetryfantasy
Mama's Cleaning Quatrainintrospection,life,mother
Waking Heart's Veins Free verseangst,hope,
Revelation Free verseimagination,lifesong,long
Sports Limerick Limerickfunny
The Snowflake Italian Sonnetromance,
Jack Lyricintrospectionlife,
The Ghost That Travels Far Personificationnature,
Kite Flying - Test Free verseallegory,art,imagination,
Dining With Crow Rhymeanimals
Beauty, Yes Sijohope,imagination,philosop
Smart and Final Prose Prose Poetrypeoplepeople,red,city,peo
Tiger In the Sea Rispettoadventure,animals,seame,t
A Song of Michael's Rose Narrativeme,
Where My True Love Lives - a Ballade Balladedeath,love,ocean,
Into Morning Free verselife
Play Me a Teardrop Rhymelost loveme,me,
Tickle Trout Narrativeadventure,food,
The Sweetest Song Sonnet 

Fav Poets

PoetCountry 
Carolyn Devonshire United States Flag United States Read
Carrie Richards United States Flag United States Read
Deirdre Omaidin Ireland Flag Ireland Read
Andrew Crisci United States Flag United States Read
Jim Fish United States Flag United States Read
Nigel Fawcett Italy Flag Italy Read
L'Nass Shango United States Flag United States Read
Andrea Dietrich United States Flag United States Read
Robert L. Hinshaw United States Flag United States Read
Nette Onclaud Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Sidney Beck Russian Federation Flag Russian Federation Read
Sammy Shaq Canada Flag Canada Read
Charlotte Puddifoot United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Cyndi Macmillan Canada Flag Canada Read
T Wignesan France Flag France Read
Elaine George Canada Flag Canada Read
Sharon Winter United States Flag United States Read
Michael Smith United States Flag United States Read
Jack Horne United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Read
Paul Callus Malta Flag Malta Read
Charmaine Chircop Malta Flag Malta Read
James Marshall Goff United States Flag United States Read
Joann Grisetti United States Flag United States Read
Ravindra K Kapoor India Flag India Read
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Philippines Flag Philippines Read
Kathryn Collins United States Flag United States Read
Michael Jordan United States Flag United States Read
Constance La France Canada Flag Canada Read

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