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blue

scattering ash clouds
i hum your favourite tune
rhapsody in blue
i look out at the calm sea
it seems to blend with the sky


For Andrea’s Tanka me a Colour contest, 12th May

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  1. Date: 5/16/2013 4:22:00 PM

    You've got a definite winner here, Jack! Beautiful imagery of sea and sky and the color blue. Always, Annalise
  1. Date: 5/15/2013 12:25:00 PM

    Rhapsody in Blue and scattered clouds. I like the picture. Love, daver
  1. Date: 5/13/2013 4:42:00 PM

    Jack, this is a beautiful tanka, a winner in the contest for sure, I just love it and thanks for visiting my poems, constance (ps, you got it right)
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 6:44:00 PM

    A brilliant Tanka Jack. You made it seem and easy task, but I know a Tanka can be tricky if not thought out carefully. It should place high in this contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:50:00 PM

    This is quite the brilliant and wondrous write my friend! You have written such a glorious poem Jack! What a tremendous piece, really an awesome poem, Great Work!!
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 5:03:00 PM

    Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Very unique and creative ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 11:20:00 AM

    feeling so high with your calm rendition of the theme, jack.. a pleasure to read yo again after my long leave... simply exquisite..:) huggs
  1. Date: 5/12/2013 10:27:00 AM

    Very beautiful images captured in the elegant verse. Very serene.

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