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Five Lines Drip

Standing in the pouring rain, I felt like a drip,
The dark grey skies reflected my mood,
A salty tear rolled down my face onto my lip,
Tears and rain drops mixed, and I thought how rude
To be stood up by the woman I’d wooed!

* pure fiction

For Sara’s Five Lines metaphor & similie contest

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  1. Date: 7/3/2015 8:14:00 AM

    Sounds as though she isn't a keeper. Just on the first line, I said something today that made me look stupid. Walking around in shorts and a short shirt I announced, "I'm feeling a little chilled today".
  1. Date: 7/1/2015 11:09:00 PM

    soupmail, my friend. Did I tell you I can't do hotmail this week?
  1. Date: 6/30/2015 10:54:00 PM

    JACK Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
  1. Date: 6/30/2015 4:23:00 PM

    Jack, good job on the Five Lines Drip. Congrats.
  1. Date: 6/30/2015 3:19:00 PM

    I am delighted that you entered my contest. All the entries were uniquely written and of good quality. I read your wonderful work and found it to be superb. Let me dry those crocodile tears.. Congrats on your win …Sara
  1. Date: 6/30/2015 9:37:00 AM

    It might be fiction, but certainly not unreal. :) Peace. Have a good week jack.
  1. Date: 6/29/2015 10:24:00 PM

    ahhh,good to see the "drip" again!! Congrats. hey, Jack, I am able to do Soup but not Hotmail from my in-laws' house. Please if you are trying to write me, do it from here and not to hotmail! Hope you are liking your job. Luv, Andrea
  1. Date: 6/23/2015 10:00:00 AM

    The emotion jumped from the page to grab the reader! Such compelling 5 lines. Blessings for the contest, Jack. :-)
  1. Date: 6/18/2015 3:06:00 PM

    I love your arrangements of words, even though it's pure fiction. 7 hugs eve
  1. Date: 6/17/2015 1:14:00 PM

    drenched with fine images, jack.. keep it going, wow.. huggs
  1. Date: 6/17/2015 11:02:00 AM

    This poem presents a saddened viewpoint of a man experiencing a flood of emotions. Emile.
  1. Date: 6/17/2015 10:03:00 AM

    love the second line, good luck in the contest... luv p.d.
  1. Date: 6/17/2015 1:16:00 AM

    excellent Jack I can see you standing there drenched gl luck in contest hugs 7
  1. Date: 6/17/2015 12:58:00 AM

    Great penned dear poet, I love your write.........A.M.
  1. Date: 6/16/2015 4:49:00 PM

    yes, a great similie, drip!!! I like this, Jack. good luck in her contest.
  1. Date: 6/16/2015 3:57:00 PM

    Well wrote Jack, Its all part of learning I suppose, and maybe you were cut out for better things.?
  1. Date: 6/16/2015 1:25:00 PM

    Top marks for the content and rhyme, Jack! Somehow this reminds me of my poem "Scorned". We are both left with broken hearts!:) All the best, my friend. // paul
  1. Date: 6/16/2015 11:43:00 AM

    Jack, so nice to see you on the soup today and you have penned a beautiful poem for the contest, 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, decay

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