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mind song riffs joining the back beat nature clicks timpani drums of black thunder percuss then the sky opens a luminous landing off gasses from the heat shield rainbow across a spectrum of light Cam’s Glieseian tongue flew over the surface of the audio generator Voyager’s golden disk long gone now transposes across a film of galactic plasma the taste of whale and bird song they tongue enthralls them—though they had no notion of whales or birds mind song cascades, scrolls, behind the visitors opaque orbs joining the back beat nature clicks woodpecker tunes tympanic membranes shiver upon retractable body hair drums of black thunder roll past helmetless crowns percussing their brain stems orgasmically then the sky opens Sol’s a black dwarf they are too late but still the songs sang Cam tongued the plasma film once more then reentered interstellar hibernation First Published by Eye to the Telescope 2015

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Date: 7/28/2016 5:02:00 PM
Excellent...Excellent...I am right there, floating along in space.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/28/2016 7:28:00 PM
How lovely of you to take the time to comment! Light & Love Always
Date: 7/10/2016 10:37:00 AM
A little science fiction here! Enjoyed - and please comment on Chess haiku Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/8/2016 7:50:00 PM
Lots of great imagery. Great read! Thank you.
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Date: 7/7/2016 6:29:00 AM
Deb, tantalizing free astral association as the reader floats on waves of sensual & tactile discovery! i like it when my brain stem percusses....rare, for sure! jim
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Date: 6/27/2016 8:52:00 AM
If all the sounds of Nature belong to us alone, in all the Universe- your poem really accentuates that miracle. A pleasure to read today, Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:00:00 PM
Mystical work in a modern form. Very nice! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/15/2016 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I have always loved sci-fi & fantasy. Light & Love
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Date: 6/15/2016 9:54:00 AM
Holy "Space Balls" Debbie, this caused my mind to shift dimensions. A most enjoyable read.
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Date: 6/15/2016 5:55:00 AM
Hi Debbie! i m glad to tell you that my poem silence has been published. i am really thankful for the corrections you made in my first (full of Spelling mistakes) draft. ( Not sure how many in this msg). regards, ijaz
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Date: 6/10/2016 10:09:00 PM
Beautiful Debbie!
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Date: 6/3/2016 9:21:00 AM
You've taken my mind on a galactic voyage. Thanks it was very nice.
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Date: 5/16/2016 3:00:00 AM
Hi, Debbie. I have read through several of your poems this early morning...all good stuff of course. I particularly like this one; love this sort of poetry contained within celestial themes - Very nicely crafted indeed! My very best regards, Debbie! :) john. P.s A seven.
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