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Kite Flying - Test

Kiss me, I want to lift you skirt flying Inside my heart like the wind To dance on clouds of joy my kite Embracing time, to hold you in my arms and spin Festively playing in the clouds Long lines of passion I can feel Yearning against my string Intermittingly fawning as you bow Naked to the throb of wind Garrulous like a lover moaninng The scintillated light. Etched upon the sweat shining Silver shafts of ribs Tensed in every fibre and nerve of being ... I want to press my lips Upon your cheeks, prettier than confetti paper And let the golden sunlight drips Chocolate of satisfaction on my tongue Because I made a kite like this Then to breathe your fragrance Falling free From every jasmine of your limb Where the lissome bamboos hold firm The quivering of my string And when the wind exhausted Make you loop and dip Before suppliant eyes To cash that boyhood zeal again And run until you rise Or shortening your leash Bring you in To closer dazzle my eyes And let your string between my fingers fall A ravished and splendid bride I want to make you feel secure again Your flying strained against my faith Buoyed by the comfort of my love For you the only joy that fills my eye In the huff and blow of time I want to lift you like the wind And with you all my affections fly To shout in glee from my little hill Below unlettered clouds in pride My kite alone to fly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/19/2010 1:40:00 PM
Ooouuu Lala! Now I think I get this one you are using a woman and a kite and showing how they might be analogus??? I did mine with an egg & the sun LOL Amen Ra..not as nice as yours my dear friend I wish I was your kite!(Please read mine and let me know if I did an analogy?) Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:18:00 PM
My sincere thanks to Thvia and all who have enjoyed this poem ... an artist has no greater glory than that his work satisfy his contemporaries. Thank you all, my friends.
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:00:00 PM
David, this is splendid. My fav of the bunch. Congats for this and a big FAV.
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Date: 12/1/2010 11:09:00 AM
magnificent word conjury as always..............congratulations and well deserved
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:58:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner, David. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:41:00 AM
for you are the only joy that fills my eye. congradulations on you win. john
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win David in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:40:00 PM
David - Many Congrats for big win in contest.... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congrats David on your big win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem and entry with luv..
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Date: 11/17/2010 3:46:00 PM
A carnival of the senses. You are so talented. A real pleasure to read your stuff, but I must work at it. Dave
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:50:00 PM
Now this is truly a clever analogy with a joyful quality as well, David. Hope you've entered it in Thvia's contest. A winner for sure! Every woman should be able to soar with affection. I used to love flying kites as a kid -- really made me feel happy. Excellent poem!! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:25:00 PM
beautiful poem... well written!
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful and sensuous personfication of Kite you have penned so well. It is now the time in my homeland India to prepare for the kite flying. On 14th January we have greatest festival of Kite flying. David. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poems
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:38:00 AM
David, what a unique way to use the kite. Awesome imagery as well. Thank you for your insights on my poems today.. Good to see you back at the soup as well ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:54:00 AM
Elegantly romantic in its theme David and the visuals are absolutely enthralling luv.. a great poem to begin one's day of reading on Soup.. so appreciate your splendid comments so warm and welcome and complimentary on my poetry endeavors here... hope u will participate in my current contest as well luv.. happy day to u..
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