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Ah, morning glory, such internal blush, defy the penetration of brash sun. Oh linger, trumpet of dawn in the dim haze of mid-morning, do not be undone. Oh, fairest of the fair, your milk white core bleeds forth to bloom a brim of violet poise, unembarrassed on the cheek of Sol's dawn. Unfurled, you toy with youthful joy employed upon the aged arch your vines entwine. Rough cut the cedar arbor drips delight as heart shaped leaves drowsy in the sun weave between like fingered hands and unite. Oh, bless the day that births such pert posies, bless the royal hues of our Morning Glories.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/24/2015 5:40:00 PM
Congratulations! Very imaginative use of words that are descriptive and lively, floating onto the page with poetic wit that captures the reader's imagination. Well written. Emile.
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Date: 5/17/2015 7:51:00 AM
I can see why this piece was chosen, beautifuly crafted! Congratulations.
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:50:00 PM
you are awesome Debbie. Linda
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:26:00 PM
Debbie, congrats on your Screwed III win. SKAT
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Date: 5/13/2015 6:27:00 PM
How delightful, Debbie! You herald dawn in with beautiful imagery and allure. Congratulations on a much deserved win. // paul
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Date: 5/13/2015 10:41:00 AM
Perfectly, beautifully penned!! Usually I read this ilk and it stumbles with forced rhyme. This poem is absolutely wonderful to read, two thumbs up!
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Date: 5/13/2015 10:10:00 AM
Wow absolutely stunning! Very interesting rhyme scheme I really enjoy this.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 5/13/2015 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Avery, I did feel screwed not even getting an HM before.
Date: 5/13/2015 9:14:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery Debbie I can see why Rob chose this for the top spot - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/13/2015 8:04:00 AM
Beautiful, Debbie. So pleased to see you poem received the honor it deserves. Congrats on your top place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/13/2015 7:57:00 AM
Congrats Debbie :)
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Date: 5/13/2015 2:44:00 AM
Congrats Debbie. Thanks for participating. BTW, Morning Glories are also excellent sparklers.
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Date: 3/30/2015 8:12:00 PM
Title got me.. Such a rich write! Images galore .. A7 and looks like a sure winner to me...
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 3/30/2015 8:32:00 PM
didn't even get an HM -thanks Robert
Date: 3/14/2015 5:31:00 AM
beautiful imagery you always drew with your words Debbie.. :) and the beat nice.. :) elegance in your words... :)!
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Date: 3/9/2015 5:13:00 AM
I love morning glories. Lovely photo, lovely poem.
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Date: 3/2/2015 4:27:00 PM
Beautiful pen Debbie! I enjoyed your piece, morning glories are so pretty, my dear friend. The picture is fantastic! A 7 from me! Thanks for visiting my pages. Much appreciated. Have a lovely day! In his light! God bless! :) D.
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Date: 3/2/2015 2:56:00 PM
Dear Debbie, A remarkable descriptive write on nature simply beautiful, and thank you for your congrads on my second place win, I'm glad you enjoyed it, cheri
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