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I rise daily from troubled sleep attempting to make sense of imagery. I magination inside me peeks, anxiety occupies blanks with grief C onscious wars with angry speech, again I decide to rationalize. O nward, up, fight - ours is not to reason why ours is but to do or die; N ever give up, never give in- decide what's right, begin again. I nward look and find your truth, outward search to find your own truth I f man or woman was not meant to grow and change we'd die unclaimed. C onsider this my icon's face, an aged woman, bathed in grace O nly be kind, its all she asks, to each other; it's the right path. N ow you know my ICON; be strong, be kind, and carry on. 4/19/15

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Date: 7/25/2015 2:21:00 AM
Wonderful... // 7 // I doubt that the contest will ever be judged, though. I've had no response from the Sponsor.
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Date: 5/8/2015 3:07:00 PM
Hi Debbie! Not the best to leave comment, as this is the only acrostic ever read! If they are all good as yours, think I could like this form!!! BTW, believe in the wee folk also! May have to lift elvish curses, however!
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:49:00 PM
Debbie, I love your Icon poem, well written, well said, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, my girl and me
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/21/2015 2:51:00 PM
My cats a boy - boy is he fat LOL!
Date: 4/20/2015 8:40:00 AM
I did post a reply but it seems it isnt here now , hmmmmm. Second time in a month thats happened. Last verse says it all my friend. Very creative, nice flow and great message--what more could one ask? A7..
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Date: 4/20/2015 1:01:00 AM
A lovely message Debbie - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 10:22:00 PM
Ah Debbie so nice,, a lovely message in ur beautiful words here,, GL in contest!
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Date: 4/19/2015 8:32:00 PM
This poem contains a beautiful message Debbie. I loved it! 7
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Date: 4/19/2015 8:09:00 PM
The beautiful Debbie. I love this, I think most of us live it in waves. It's always good to read your work.
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