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Alabaster Night

There is stillness in this chilly night
How peaceful is a planet that glimmers white
Where frost and moonlight weave a silver glaze
And sillhouetted trees are black as ink 
Where the only sign of life are whiffs of breath

Let me stand and drink upon the sky, 
Then rest my eyes upon the glory of the world 
Upon these strange and unfamiliar hills
I sense a night's aurora soothe my soul
 
Winter has buried our world in alabaster white
Familiar landmarks wear a cloak of new disguise
Yet still the same are scattered thorny lights
Splattered wildly in the blackness of a sky
Winter has polished up the stars against the dark
Brilliant, new, until their points are thistle sharp

How peaceful is a planet so glimmering white
To stand in voiceless wonder and gaze
Do not speak, the crystal world would shatter
Too fragile to bear the weight of words

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  1. Date: 5/16/2015 12:04:00 PM
    Hi Carrie: A beautiful poetic description of the colored night.

  1. Date: 5/4/2015 6:39:00 PM
    Nicely written. Wonderful imagery.

  1. Date: 4/30/2015 7:44:00 PM
    Carrie, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

  1. Date: 4/30/2015 10:51:00 AM
    Carrie Know only little about poetry Just enough to show The beauty of your poem Has captured my imagination now. Wonderful poem. Congratulations! Ganapathiraman Raghu Raman

  1. Date: 4/29/2015 7:23:00 AM
    Carrie: The imagery in this poem is awesome. As I went from line to line, I marveled at the word pictures you created together with inspiring introspection. It's a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it.

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 7:11:00 PM
    Carrie, this is beautiful.. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 2:46:00 PM
    Carrie, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 12:25:00 PM
    Just beautiful, Carrie. You brought us there...on top of the world to view this awesome, magnificently delicate sight, with such clear and crisp words of imagery. Congratulations! Kim :)

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 11:26:00 AM
    Skilfully crafted with a great imagery of peace unon the sky. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

  1. Date: 4/28/2015 10:56:00 AM
    Beautiful free verse, with a beautiful word, describing a beautiful poem, Carrie. Hi, hope you are well, Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 9:02:00 PM
    Wow! I love the part drink upon the sky! Great write Carrie. Congrats on your win. Well deserved!

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 4:12:00 PM
    So beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 3:12:00 PM
    Stunning night you describe here Carrie, congratulations on your 2nd place win xxx

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 2:47:00 PM
    Dropping back with my congrats again carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 2:16:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Carrie, a peaceful planet would be welcomed any time or place :)

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 9:04:00 AM
    What a wonderful lulling poem,Carrie, congratulations on your win. Blessings

  1. Date: 4/27/2015 8:17:00 AM
    {points thistle sharp GREAT metaphor!] Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/19/2015 6:06:00 PM
    Carrie, you soared to the top with this special write.. Back to say congrats!

  1. Date: 1/19/2015 3:06:00 PM
    Very beautiful poem Carrie. Congratulations on your first place top win.

  1. Date: 1/18/2015 4:52:00 PM
    You are one of my favourite poets. This is just another one of those writes that solidifies my feelings about your talent. You are a great poet. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. A Fav for me!

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